
There's Something Wrong with This White Moonlight.
快穿之这个白月光有点不对
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 500k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Quick Transmigration
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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In booklists 10
The Female Protagonist Dresses up as the Male Protagonist's Bai Yueguang (Female Supporting Role), and Then Attacks the Male Protagonist
The female supporting character in the small world before wearing books, then she was
Bai Yueguang, Who Begs for the Male Lead, Returns to China and Competes with the Original Female Lead for the Male Lead.
Bai Yueguang is perfect, the male protagonist never forgets Bai Yueguang
The Protagonist Is a Passerby, but Very Beautiful
Hurry up and Get Through Bai Yueguang!
Bai Yueguang is a very strong woman with a gentle and cheerful personality! ! ! !
The Heartthrob Quickly Goes to the Girl Who Cheated Many People Online
After meeting, they all fell in love with the heroine, just one clip is enough
Heartthrob (I Don't Know) + Cannon Fodder Passerby (Has CP but Not Fixed)
# Seeking to Seduce Quickly Through the Text, Immersive Strategy, Not Collapse the Character
The Female Protagonist Quickly Traveled Through the Small World, and Her Identity Was Bai Yueguang, the Male Protagonist. It Has Been Completed.
"Bai Yueguang Rescue Plan" and "Quick Travel: Short-lived Bai Yueguang She Doesn't Want to Die Early" are no longer needed. I have finished chasing them. However, the author of the second book has not updated it. If you know the reason, please let me know. I really like it. It is the first book in this series.
Please Write a Story About the Beautiful Heroine and Make Her a Millionaire
The Heroine Is Charming and Loved by Both Men and Women, Don't Let the Supporting Actress Be Vicious
The heroine is a heartthrob and is loved by both men and women. Everyone likes the heroine. No cp. The main point is not to have a vicious female partner.











































In fact, I feel that this no-CP ending is the best. Because Bai Yueguang is called Bai Yueguang if you can't get it. If you get it, you won't like it so much. It's even more impressive to love without talent. After all, distance creates beauty. After all, it's only when she doesn't get it that I feel better about her.
Every character in Yihe is very emotional, and it feels like she is that character. There are many kinds of White Moonlight: love, family affection, friendship, etc. Any kind of emotion may make it become White Moonlight. Each story has its own characteristics, and the emotions described will not make people feel too caught off guard, especially when it is immersive, and the comments at the end of the story are very nice. The rhythm of each story in the article is very suitable to my liking, that kind of fast. Anyway, I like it♥(ノ´∀`) Great author, come on!
I'm going! ! ! ! ! ! ! How can there be such beautiful writing in the world! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I watched the whole process in a state of excitement! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love Da Da! ! ! ! ! I am crazy about it, I am crazy about it, and I hit a big wall because of the big frame! ! ! ! ! ! !
Currently, there is no book that suits me better than this one😘. It's the real White Moonlight! Nowadays, there are many people using the White Moonlight to really torture the female protagonists, I really can't watch that kind of thing😭. The heroine can shape her face on her own, which is also very cool. The appearance of the plane is also great. Female·Author's daughter·Master
It's very beautiful, each world is short and sweet! The plot is not sluggish, I really like the love variety show and the witch part, and the saint son part is also good! This kind of male and female setting meets the different needs of readers. Moreover, in this novel, the original heroine is not as vicious and unscrupulous as in other novels! Every world in this book gives me a good... Kind of revelation? . The author is also very nice and responds to readers' comments! Anyway, highly recommended! If you are in a book shortage and can't read anything, you can try this kind of faster-paced novel. There are only a dozen chapters in a world! I hope the author can keep writing! Looking forward to the rest of the story! By the way, can the author write about some small worlds such as myths and legends? I really want to know what character Hehe would become if he went there, the moon goddess? God of beauty? Or Apollo, the sun god? Ha ha ha ha
This novel is so interesting. The various planes and plots are very novel and interesting and lively. I stayed up until 7 o'clock in the morning and read the five planes. Finally, I finished it in one go. Please give me a lot of updates, author! Support you super support! It's so beautiful that I can't help it!
A super nice book! ! ! The setting that the heroine can shape her own face is really special (at least I haven't read many books) At first, I came in because it was ranked first on the recommendation list. After reading a few chapters, I had to sigh: Tomato, you recommend it so well that I like it! The characters in Small World are pretty good. I particularly like the author's portrayal of the heroine's character! At first, I thought that the heroine really just wanted to have fun and not be a savior. Later, when I saw the travel plane, I realized that my idea was completely wrong! I don't understand why the rating is so low and so few people read it. I really like this article! I love CP-free articles! I really don't understand why the rating is so low 😭 After reading all the reviews, most of them are positive, and I only saw one one-star negative review (there may be something missing!) So I really don't understand this rating. I think it should be at least 8.5 Or above! Such a beautiful article! ! ! ! This is the first time I write such a long book review. I really like the heroine and I am looking forward to the subsequent stories! ! You can also see the improvement in the author's writing style and character creation. I will follow the next book too!
Not bad, not bad. It's an article I like to read. The most important thing is that there is no cp, no cp, no cp. Important things must be said three times.
It's really good-looking, Shen Yihe is really Bai Yueguang. I love this genre very much. I can say that this book is my favorite among the ones I have read in Bai Yueguang. Witches and Shenwu Continent are strongly recommended! See if it's not a loss [shy]
Ahhhh! The heroine Shen Yihe yyds! This is the best and refreshing White Moonlight novel I have read so far. The author, you wrote it very well ヽ(○^㉨^)ノ♪, but it is a bit short. In the end, it is actually a little regretful. Maybe the heroine's original intention was to go home all the time (but the God of the World is good. No matter how bad it is, he can create a new world, and there is a planet similar to Blue Star. Didn't you say you want to save it?) Author, you should finish it! Totally not enough (๑ó㉨ò๑)
I love the heartthrob so much. Please give me more encouragement from the author! V(◦'ωˉ◦)~♡
This book is pretty good! Each aspect is short and concise, without procrastination, and the heroine has always insisted that she has never lost herself. I just hope the plot can be more exciting. Great, keep up the good work^0^~
Very good, hope to keep it up [laughs]
Only this White Moonlight can hold up to the real White Moonlight. It is the direction of the light and the indelible feelings in my heart. And many others are about one person, and only describe the world where the moonlight shines on one person, rather than many people. But this book is the real god, it has both I finished reading it, the ending is reversed, [laughing] I like it very much
Come on (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)! Not bad
The protagonist's setting is novel and unique (heartthrob + cool + no CP). This setting has very few tomatoes. The writing is very good but needs to be improved. The author can make improvements quickly if you give your opinion in the comment area. Come on
Wow~ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it look so good looking I love it [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] Great author, come on! ! ! Come on^0^~ (ง •_•)ง, come on ღ( ´・ᴗ・` )(ʃƪ ˘ ³˘)❣。・゚♡(づ ̄3 ̄)づ╭❤~
There are very few books that touch my heart. I just read the first world and I couldn't wait to review it. I can only say that the author's writing is gentle. I was very satisfied with the first world, so everyone has their own ending. I think it is very satisfying. I am looking forward to the next story. Come on, author
After watching The Second World, I ignored the illogical and common sense parts, but the plot was okay. But, I think in this story, the emperor and the prime minister are not very good. What they may like is not the heroine, but her unparalleled beauty and their regret that they can't get it. They arrogantly regard the heroine as their property. The most real and practical love for the heroine here is the Queen Mother, her unreserved love. The extra story about the Queen Mother and the secret guard chasing swords is also good. After watching a few more planes, I always felt that these male characters were weird. I suddenly realized that these male paper characters always have the shadow of individual men in the real world. They are a magical species that is handsome but very "confident". For example, in the world of romance, when the heroine talks softly, she has already begun to imagine that they have a child with them. It is no less than the fantasy of female celebrities in the real world, who are physically uncomfortable.
To be honest, I felt that the first few planes were messy and even unsightly, but from the last few planes, I can see that the author's writing style seems to be getting better and better. Although I also left some unfavorable comments while reading the book, this is really a good book and I must stick to it until the end. The final ending made me cry to death [covering my face] and it probably fulfilled the protagonist's original wish [currently in development]
I like this book very much, each world has a different style. Moreover, this book does not have a dark male and female protagonist. The female protagonist is also very charming. Both men and women kill each other. It is not a love-at-first-sight setting, but you will have a good impression at first sight, and you will naturally fall in love with her as you get along. The heroine can shape her own face. It is a very novel setting. There is a world where women wear men's clothes, and they are really popular. The heroine adds her own golden fingers, and loses her talent. She can only pretend to be a boss with weak strength and work hard. This novel is indeed very interesting
When I first started, I didn't like this novel. Because when I saw myself setting my appearance, I thought it was a Mary Sue novel However, after I finished reading the first plane and saw the letter written by Xia Caochao, I was suddenly hit. I will keep following this novel, please come on, author It's strange, there is always a passage that surprises me when I don't want to read it and makes me continue reading.
Great author! ! ! I hope to write a side story for the male protagonist after finishing a world. When I saw the world of Xiao Jingshen in the second world, I still wanted the heroine to be with him, but she felt a little uncomfortable when she was with the villain. In fact, it was good to be like the first world, where the heroine was alone with no one [Sending Hearts]
I don't know why. The heroine setting is obviously my favorite genre, but I don't have the desire to read it. Is it because the plot is too fast and I don't have a sense of involvement? Ah, it's hard to find a book that I like. I can only say Goodbye for the time being. Or maybe I'm in a bad mood because my phone is broken. I'll save it for now and read it again when I change my phone.
Beautiful, the reason why White Moonlight is White Moonlight is because she/he is beautiful, she/he is charming, and she/he is out of reach, so don't try to pull her/him down or imprison her, we should let her/him bloom and live brilliantly.
I like it very much! I like it very much! The author's writing style is really good! 😊😊😊
Very nice! After writing the last bet, is it coming to an end? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
I like this book very much, but why is the emperor's chapter broken at the waist? I like that one so much [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]
I really like it, especially the sixth volume, which looks a bit funny.
I still wanted to give it four stars, but I still gave it five stars. The reasons are as follows: 1. The heroine wears Bai Yueguang as a man 2. The writing is good and there is nothing particularly embarrassing. 3. The heroine has a good personality at the beginning, but I don't like it much later (mainly because I don't like the salvation story)