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I feel like this girl shouldn't be added

It's quite interesting, but I don't want the author to assign a female protagonist. Because the high road is always lonely

The subject matter is pretty good, I quite like it. The heroine appeared too early. The traveling companion who appeared in the second or third simulation was probably the heroine. Then from chapter 11 or 12, the heroine started traveling with the hero as soon as she appeared. I personally don't like this kind of thing, but the book is still good. If you like this kind of thing, you can read it.

How to say it? Overall it's pretty good, but there are still some issues with some settings.

If you want to write about secret love, you can't just write about secret love, you have to write about tiptoeing and looking around, you have to write about the small cup that has to be filled with water every time after class, the figure watching on the playground in the physical education class, the crumpled note that was not handed out, the noise of good friends, the blush when they first met and the red eyes when saying goodbye.

The book is pretty good, but why should there be a female protagonist?

Wow, brother, why is your rating so low?

Too short, too short, really too short Stop when you see something wonderful, or you won't be able to keep our hearts. Speed it up, speed it up, okay?

The woman showed up too early

I think it's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is only 5.3, But the author is slow to update.

Nice! Please keep up the good work💪

Very good looking, recommended to get into it

It's okay. I hope to keep it up.

Yes, no, why should the most talented king be a champion, or even a god?

The writing is still good, but I don't know why the score is so low. Everyone has their own merit! Don't care too much about other people's evaluations, just write your own

I think it's very good. If you have a female protagonist by your side, you won't feel lonely.

What game is it? I want to go into the pit! ! ! ! !