(The major revision started on September 24th. Well... It's like rewriting it. Chapters 1-5 have been completely revised.)
Li Yubai, a senior high school student, should have traveled through time in the age of youthful struggle.
He came to a strange world.
This world has magic, dragons, magical and extraordinary props... And also many dangers and weirdnesses.
He woke up in a daze.
He will witness this fantastic era.
The justice of the church, the desire for the kingdom, the conflicts between races, the classmates who traveled through time together...
Browns Kliman, have you discovered that strange god?
Reader comments
There is actually a lot to reflect on about the first volume. The first point is that I just finished reading "Sword Comes", and I subconsciously wanted to imitate the "Fenghuo Opera Princes" and cram all the content into the first volume, resulting in confusing content. I will pay attention to slowly add the subsequent content. The second point is the division of natural paragraphs. I was too impatient, which caused the content that should be clear to read to be unnatural. This is a big problem. The first volume has been initially revised. Alas, it's my fault...
After a busy day, reward yourself with a five-star
The plot in the work is okay, especially the fighting scenes in the middle, which are very exciting, but the personal pronouns are a little confusing. A few typos. The ordering of the sequences is also a bit confusing. But overall it's pretty good.
This is the first official book written by a good brother, and it is encouraging and encouraging.
I feel like the writing is a bit messy and the pace is too fast.
There is actually a lot to reflect on about the first volume. The first point is that I just finished reading "Sword Comes", and I subconsciously wanted to imitate the "Fenghuo Opera Princes" and cram all the content into the first volume, resulting in confusing content. I will pay attention to slowly add the subsequent content. The second point is the division of natural paragraphs. I was too impatient, which caused the content that should be clear to read to be unnatural. This is a big problem. The first volume has been initially revised. Alas, it's my fault... After a busy day, reward yourself with a five-star
The plot in the work is okay, especially the fighting scenes in the middle, which are very exciting, but the personal pronouns are a little confusing. A few typos. The ordering of the sequences is also a bit confusing. But overall it's pretty good. This is the first official book written by a good brother, and it is encouraging and encouraging.
I feel like the writing is a bit messy and the pace is too fast.