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Just from Haibara Ai.

The author is really great [like]

Come on, author, I am a fan of His Highness Haihara Ai. I wish you creative creation and a spring of literary thoughts...

I hope Hong Shu survives in "Dead Man on Baker Street"

After reading it for a while, it was generally good, but the details were missing. It makes people feel that the characters are not full and seem a bit dry, which may make you tired after reading for a long time. You can write more monologues or inner descriptions. It makes people feel that he is a living person and makes it easier for readers to take in the experience. Finally, I hope you will work hard [laughs]

It's pretty good, but during the conversation, I felt a little embarrassed when I heard who said so and so and so and so.

Fat intestines are healthy, okay, but not very healthy.

I'm curious who "she" is? Is she the key to the protagonist returning to his own universe? Her identity.

Come on, author!

Very well written

It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. Come on author!

Very nice, come on author

Very good, the story is wonderful

The front is good, but the back is a bit like a running account, but for my Aijiang, I still give you this five-star

Generally speaking, the content is well written and the plot is very sweet. However, the content is not interesting enough. The author needs to work harder to write more.

It's so funny, I burst out laughing [laughing evilly]

6ᯅ9 It's all your fault! Author! I forgot to write my homework. Your writing is so beautiful! !

The plot is super exciting and I am addicted to watching it. It is my favorite type.

Well written, five stars.