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This book is good, but there are still some small problems. The author is not good at characterization. The plot advancement depends entirely on chance. The protagonist, supporting characters' personalities and fighting methods are not very clear. If this is really the first time I write it, it's okay. Five stars. Come on, author [I learned it]

Not bad. I have read thousands of books. They are quite good.

# Brewing#Original work *Beautiful as ever* The first light of the clouds is shining, and the scenery is beautiful everywhere. The breeze is gentle, the fragrant grass, insects and butterflies dance, The river is flowing new, and leaves are seen drifting into the water again, The fish uses the microwave and the scholar enjoys it. The flowers are full of anger, A school of peace represents the hometown, There is the charm of Hsinchu, and the old cow is leisurely, Tranquility is hidden in the heart, Happy, this is fertile soil.

The writing is very good, and I am afraid that the author will collapse when I look at it, after all, the previous writing is so good. The author still has the manuscript saved but hasn't posted it yet. I haven't read enough... Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Looking forward to more exciting things to come.

It's very exciting, the author's writing is good, and the storyline is well written. The storyline is good, keep up the good work.

It's really good. I personally like this one better. I hope I won't collapse or become a eunuch. Furthermore, I hope the author won't be physically overwhelmed. I'll tell you where it hurts later, and then I won't update anymore. Take care of yourself. Come on, author

This novel is a hodgepodge of family development. The supporting characters are far more showy than pig's feet. Pig's feet are useless. The supporting characters are swordsman geniuses. They are reborn with treasures and mythical beasts are reborn. The ancestor of the family did not die and became an invincible zombie. The nephew is a prince of a certain dynasty because his father failed to fight for the dragon. I have only read more than a hundred chapters of "Wandering and struggling". The author has already written brilliantly. In addition, pig's feet have clones, and the clones have independent consciousness. The clones can chat and joke with the original body, and there are various sexy operations of the clones. I just can't hold on and can't stop reading. If you like it, you can continue reading.

I have finished reading it, and there are 242 updates so far. The content is about the family. I recommend it with 8 stars. It is the only one I have read in my family so far. It may be because there are few updates. I don't know what will happen in the future. The plot is compact and smooth, and the logic is okay. I finished it in one and a half days.

I saw Chapter 173. The writing is very good and the plot arrangement is also great. However, the protagonist is a bit unlike the protagonist. The nephew has not been found yet. I hope the plot is better. After all, life is hard enough. I just want to read a refreshing article.

I really like the author's writing style. It's a novel idea to include the artifacts in the list of gods. I'm really looking forward to seeing all the artifacts in the list of gods appear. If that's not enough, you can also add the magic weapons in Journey to the West. [Laughing]

It's a good idea. Taishang and Tongtian have both come out, and Yuanshi is expected to be soon. The three major incarnations will be completed. When the time comes, the protagonist will merge with the soul left by Pangu, and then know that he is the soul mark left in the Chaos Gourd before Pangu's death. As the Chaos Gourd travels through the heavens and the world, the Chaos Gourd finally becomes the current sapphire gourd, and Pangu's soul mark becomes himself. This way you can make the fake come true! If the author does not have a follow-up outline, he may consider this suggestion!

It's a very good book about family cultivation. It's not bloody, it's not a stallion, it's not logical, it's worth reading.

I have read novels for seven years, more than 10,000 hours, and more than 1,000 books. This novel about cultivating immortals is the best novel about cultivating immortals that I have ever read. It has coherent logical thinking and rigorous storyline. It makes me want to continue reading. The author is good and the writing is very good. Come on! I hope I don't have an appendix, come on! Come on! Come on! It's such a good novel, I don't understand why the rating is so low. Only 50,000 people have read it. It's worth reading, friends.

The writing is good, but a bit boring. The online article can be more exaggerated and free-spirited, but not exhaustive. The world background can be grander. Secondly, it is too difficult for a Qi practitioner to refine weapons, alchemy, and talisman formations. It would be good to know a little bit about it, not to mention that it is unlikely to be successful in creating new ones.

Gagaga This book is pretty good, basically non-toxic, and worth reading. The author will listen to some readers' opinions. I made a comment yesterday, and the author actually responded and changed the article. It's really good!

The ideas are OK, and I think the writing is very good; the writing style is lacking, there are always mistakes in the content, and sometimes the author has read it and refused to change it. There are also some bad plots and abnormal outlook on life. Overall, it's okay, and it's a good book if you don't skimp on the details.

It's pretty good. It looks okay. Although it's a bit poisonous, it's either too big or the author's forceful suppression of the realm is outrageous.

Five stars. I hope the author writes a protagonist with a strong fighting ability. The supporting characters are more like the protagonist than the protagonist. It seems a bit frustrating. We should have fun reading the novel and have a sense of immersion. Looking to the author. Refer to.

I should not say that this book feels very good. The current trend is considered very good. It can be said that it has emerged from the mire without being stained. It is just that the level of improvement is a little slow. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง

A good novel about a family that cultivates immortality

Although the pace is a bit fast, it is the first one I have read about a family story about flying into an immortal. Some of the settings are relatively unpopular, so it cannot be said to be novel. I remember refining a magic weapon after being imitated by the gods. I remember reading it in a eunuch's family story a few years ago. However, the theme of your avatar becoming a god is still relatively novel. Come on, I'm optimistic about you [laughter]

It looks good, and the writing is really good. It's my favorite type. It's just my personal opinion. Whether you think it's good or not is your opinion. I hope you won't be a eunuch. Good luck to the author. I hope you can update more.

I love reading novels about family development that lead the family to become invincible step by step! The writing is okay, but the plot changes scenes too frequently. The main character should be focused on, and the rest of the family is given a bit too much text!

The writing is pretty good, you can take a look

Not bad, those who are not well versed in reading can take a look. The Five Spiritual Roots are all purple, the sword cultivators without Kung Fu are also Zifu, and the Heavenly Spiritual Roots are all gone. What's going on?

I follow it every day now, it's really beautiful Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou sighed at himself. This must be one of the four great classics, and definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu is almost lacking in literary talent in front of it! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Cheng'en, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Bai, Du Fu, San Su Xingqiji, Qin Emperor, Han Dynasty, Wu Tang Zong, Song Ancestor, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle, all said it was good after reading it! The author's book is really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties to the core. I can read this book by the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading this book by the author, I felt an indescribable feeling of sadness. If I can never read such a good novel in the future, what should I do? So what should I do? It wasn't until I put the author's book on my bookshelf without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought about such a good novel. If others can't read it, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to live in the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to dedicate this book review to the world for reading, and I want to keep reading this novel. Go up, go up! Until everyone sees it! As I walk between heaven and earth, with the sun blazing and the moon shining brightly in the sky, I have to ask, is this novel enough to read and not enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are full and the rivers are rolling, I have to ask, is this novel enough to be virtuous? "Not enough!" When I walk on the top of the mountains, among the beautiful buildings and jade buildings, and the immortals in the sea of ​​clouds, I have to ask, is this novel updated fast enough? Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters, not enough speed content! Not even enough!

The beginning is quite good so far. It is indeed a good book. I have read Chapter 70 so far. However, in Chapter 70, Du Jijie has an external incarnation and is still conscious. I can't stand it anymore. I will read it when I am interested again! Well!

Very well written! I like to see this kind of family cultivating and farming, I can feel a strong sense of family affection.

This book is really well written, and the character of the protagonist is not particularly annoying. Come on, author!

As a fantasy novel, the overall setting structure of this book is very good, and the pace is fast and not wordy, which is very important... [Laughing] The first two hundred chapters are a bit messy and stiff, and you have to think through the whole process to read it. [Laughing] [laughing] [laughing] The progress is very fast, especially the multi-line plot, and the various transitions are written much more smoothly. Come on!