Gao Wu************

The disadvantage is that the realm and the strength of the development ability should be changed and divided into two types, one is the realm, and the other is the intensity of the development ability. The realm is too easy to cross, which makes it feel meaningless. Without a genius, you can help people cultivate their abilities and their own realm. Author, you can give 10% in one go. You have just given so much at the beginning! ① It is recommended that you have to test your physical fitness if you are not up to par. ② Don't give it too fast and don't give 10%. Give 10% slower and it will look like it is given by phone charge. In addition, the author designed him to be an entrepreneur. Don't think he is so ignorant. As a member of the vast army of time travelers, the protagonist's thinking will be more imaginative. ③ In the early stage of the Chaos Double Eyes, you can refer to some of Tang San's Purple Demon Eyes (detection ability, which cannot exceed his Chaos Glasses under any circumstances. Copying ability to see through the essence and copy everything. Analysis) Ability to analyze the opponent's abilities to think of better solutions (not limited to opponents' herbs, elixirs, and weapons), (detection and analysis are suitable for use in any sub-job alchemy, weapon formation, identification of herbs, cracking formations, detection of flames, every move) and (seeing through the origin of all things, the origin of all things can also be used as the origin of the world) (slowing down the flow of time within a certain range) (shaping Chaos Soft Armor does not take up space The memory will not be discovered by anyone unless it has the same ability) (Seals the small world), this is the understanding of the ancient double pupil, and the author designed Chaos to be more powerful than the ancients. The author can think about what abilities Chaos has and can have these abilities (it can produce chaos energy to temper the body and soul) (the special ability to annihilate the soul will not be restored because there are The energy of chaos is injured, so it is not easy to recover unless the protagonist solves it) (You can see the cause and effect line, the fate line, the marriage line, etc. After all, the author has upgraded the protagonist not to ancient times but to chaos) (Practice any skill and law as the ability usage time increases. The longer you use it, you should also know more about your own abilities. This setting will feel reasonable)

It's still pretty good. If I can write it down later, I hope I can fill in the holes.

What a great author! I hope there is no female protagonist, is that okay? [Smile][smile] I'm really worried that the female protagonist will drag down the male protagonist (but you probably won't write the female protagonist too crotch-stretching), but I still don't think it's any better. The hero and heroine can fall in love but don't stay together and break up later. I hope it won't be like most old-fashioned plots. Once you have a heroine, you will either wait for the heroine, find the heroine, or take the heroine to level up and fight monsters together. So I hope I can refer to it, okay? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] (But it's just for reference, otherwise someone will criticize me again, but I really can't change it, so forget it) The author, hey, give you 5 stars.

Even if there is a strong wind, never give up in life.

It's very interesting. I would like to ask if the world concept of this book is that there are many universes?

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, thank you so much to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

You all said that Yaoyao persuaded me to quit, and I think it's OK.

I hope the protagonist can walk out of his own way. I hope it will be a single female protagonist. I hope the author will reply to me. Thank you. Is there no realm, just development? I didn't see what realm the protagonist was in, I only saw development and transition.

The material selection is good, but the writing style is a bit immature. Keep up the good work.

It's very interesting, I hope the author works hard ^ω^

The writing is really awesome, there are not so many fancy skills, and it is more comfortable to watch, but the heroine, please update it quickly, it is not enough to watch.