Doomsday Machine: Dawn

Naturally, I have to give five stars to my own book, hahaha

I haven't encountered such a beautiful book in a long time! ! ! Come on, author, give me five stars

Come on, brothers! Is it easy for us to pull up the ratings and wait so many years just to read a Warhammer novel? !

How to put it this way, it's a refreshing Warhammer work. It doesn't have such troublesome heresy issues. It perfectly describes the living environment of the hive city, and I also like the battles. In any case, this is a work worth watching.

This book is not bad. It would be nice to have more female protagonists. Of course I hate emotional dramas, so just a female licking the dog! To be honest, I have never seen a female licking a dog.

I don't know how to evaluate this book. The subject matter is so good. Some parts of the plot are cliche and some are very novel. People who like it can't stop reading it, and those who don't like it can't stand it. The protagonist is perfectly portrayed, and the system is not a crooked dragon king, but it really poked my XP. The key is why is it not popular? It's because everyone likes to watch spiritual garbage and vulgar taste [laughter] Actually, you can not write the heroine so bitchy

Let me show you how to eat fungi (꒪-꒪)🍄 (꒪Д꒪)🍄 (꒪🍄꒪) (꒪～꒪) (꒪-꒪) (꒪Д꒪)～burp～ Not salty or bland, it tastes great. (@◇@) (X-X)

Although some of the routines and writing ideas in the books written by the author are relatively old, there are still very few books of this type on Tomato. Most authors give up halfway through writing. Come on!

I don't understand why such a beautiful book has such a low rating

I give it four stars because the author is afraid of being proud [laughing evilly]

The writing is okay, but can it have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist?

Is there a mechanical fortress? Good luck to the author for writing well.

Very good, it made my eyes light up. Industry is the romance of men. I hope more people will read it and pay attention to it, so that the author will be motivated to update it quickly.

It's a good book. I read it all in one day, but the number of words is a little short. Author, please keep updating.

A very good book with novel subject matter and reasonable plot. I hope the world view can be bigger. Human civilization already has mechanical creatures on the earth, right? Then they should have colonized the universe, right? Then it's okay to have a bigger world view, right?

I feel like this rating is so low. Is that right? Then you need to add two more. Author

The food is very good and the children like it very much

Not bad, the only thing is that the character of the heroine is a bit contradictory

Author, write 50,000 chapters first and then finish

Goodbye See you in the next book. This book is a practice for the author.

The subject matter is very good, go with your feelings, grasp the scale, balance yin and yang

Feeling okay? Come on.

It's okay to watch, but the heroine doesn't like it very much. It's very difficult to write this kind of scene.

This book is wonderful, but I read it too quickly!

Very nice, I don't understand why the rating is so low

It's been a long time since I've watched Steampunk, so the five-star rating is on Tomato (Steampunk and everything else are super rare)

This book has a score of 7.7. . It's a steampunk novel that tastes right. I found the treasure

The subject matter of this book is very good, the plot is also very exciting, the writing is beautiful, and it is a good book The only shortcoming of this book is that there is an extra girl. She is definitely not suitable to be the heroine. It looks too infuriating. As a mechanical punk novel, there is no need for a heroine. (*￣M￣)

It's a pity that there is no one with good books

Recommend a second book