Pirates: Live in Kaido's House at the Beginning

Hello, author. First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to rush for updates. I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write seriously, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up or lose anything, it won't be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. I say without politeness that if you are included in the article, you will be a senior performer, and I will be the audience who appreciates the film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", the conflicting and complicated emotions of wanting to watch it but not wanting to let it go drove me crazy. I'm just a bored idler, and I opened this novel aimlessly without intending to finish it. But you succeeded and made me "half" finish it. Now I can only stabilize my mood at this moment by leaving a message in the comments. I hope you can see it with a thankful heart. Come on, I look forward to each of your "next chapters" your dear readers. Posted on June 21, 2022

First give yourself a five-star review, and finally ask for your support from my good friends. They all enthusiastically leave comments and generate electricity with love for free every day. Brothers who have time can also express your interest. If the writing is not good, don't be polite. Just feel free to complain. The author has a strong heart and can completely bear it. *^O^* Regarding the issue of new crew members Robin and Reyna, many people have said recently that they don't want to see new crew members added. But the author is a novice, and his writing skills are even worse. There are only two people, the protagonist and Yamato, and they have been relying on dialogue to fill the word count. Not only did I get tired from writing, but everyone will also get tired after reading it for a long time. After all, I'm not the kind of person who can make people think wildly with just a few words and whose writing skills are so good. Moreover, the author works part-time, and it takes some time to conceive the plot. The addition of crew members is also to facilitate future development. I will try my best to refine my writing and give this book the best ending. After all, this is also my debut novel.

"Ahem", let me say a few words: This book is the best daily pirate novel I have ever seen. I read this book overnight. It is thoughtful, compact, and the characters are vividly depicted - the cute Yamato, the "cute" Shu Mengzi, the (gentleman) Pig Horns... Without exception, I like them all (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The fighting scene is also full of visuals - Qiongqi who is thousands of meters away and Kaido who is in beast form are fighting for thousands of meters (Wow, the explosion rate is really high!) After talking about the advantages, let me talk about the disadvantages: the protagonist is Yamato's back rub, "battle on the bed", Yamato Oppai, why don't you go into more details? ! ! I think these points are not good. It can be clearly seen from the protagonist's unscrupulous words and Yamato's words that the protagonist is a perverted person. There are still deficiencies in this aspect and should be explained in detail! Finally, I would like to give you a piece of advice - if the author really can't write the above scenes, just read a serious (sexy) pirate article - "One Piece: Invincible Lottery System". I believe you will thank me after reading it.

The writing is very good, and it is very different from other novels, because other pirate novels are basically about revenge or pure comedy. If it is written normally by the author, other novels may have more software, but less tomatoes. After reading it for a few days, I realized that I didn't give a rating. I'm sorry. Author [shy]

Divine Book, Holy Ruins almost lacks literary talent in front of it! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Cheng'en, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Bai, Du Fu, San Su, Xin Qiji, Qin, Han, Wu, Tang, Song Ancestor, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle, all said it was good after reading it! The author's book is really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties to the core. I can read this book by the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading this book by the author, I actually felt an indescribable feeling of sadness. Ah, such a good novel, what should I do if I can never read it again in the future? So what should I do? Until I put this author's book on my bookshelf without hesitation

Very nice! The rhythm is pretty good, keep it up! By the way, I would like to remind you not to speed up the pace later because of the opinions of some readers, because it is easy to break down if the pace is fast!

In fact, it looks pretty good to me. Why is the rating suddenly at 7 o'clock? It must be because the author is too slow to update. I will keep one star and update it fifteen times a day. I will add it to you [laughing]

As long as there are no supervisors and the plot doesn't collapse, Momonosuke's death is a perfect pirate book [Thoughts] [Sneaky laugh]

I think Yamato is so cute, silly, and has the same personality as Luffy. As a heroine, she is really different. I like the author's setting and support it.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your Dear Readers First July 24, 2022

After reading it, this is the first time I have seen this type of pirate novel after reading it for so long. Different from the tough and passionate style of previous pirate novels, this novel gave me a comfortable and warm feeling. Of course, it is still the funny style that I like, and there are many passionate scenes. All the pig's feet were done, and those who deserved to be killed were killed (Momonosuke). The protagonist also fits the free-spirited image of pirates. There are many people who criticize this book, and there are also many people who like this book. The author is also very open to everyone's comments. It is also his first time to write a book, and the writing is really good. In general, this novel is one of the few good Tomato Pirates novels [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It feels very good, I like it very much. I hope the author can keep updating it and don't finish it badly.

Come on, come on, give you a five-star. There is one thing that the author could pay more attention to. I don't know if any readers have noticed it. In fact, the character creation is a bit rigid. Just speaking actually looks like he is just reciting lines. The author can add some demeanor adjectives before the words, such as frowning, blushing, angry, etc. The plot is pretty good, I just hope it doesn't change from a pirate type to a country-ruling type as I write it [laughing] I look forward to your update and I'll give you a gift.

The novel style of the light sweet novel and the author's vivid description of the characters make it easy to draw people into it. I can only say that this is the most awesome piece of fan fiction I have ever read among pirate novels. In the end, the number of words in each picture was indeed reduced. I spent the whole night reading the three pictures in less than five minutes...

Very pretty. I hope it's a single heroine

Pay special attention and keep updating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Always following you! Hope it doesn't end badly! Come on, come on, come on! Author!

Good looking, good Pirates fanfic, good luck to the author [Like][Like][Like]

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good book. Some people don't want to read it unless they read the beginning. Personally, I think the beginning is not very good. The author's writing is very good and he updates quickly. I also like this book very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard. If you dare to reply to me, I will give you a gift that is not free! ! !

The whole book is well written, and the overall relaxed and happy atmosphere is a highlight. It is indeed the first time for me to marry Yamato and recognize Aido (Kaido) as his father. The fruit is also unprecedented, but I feel that the development is not very good. Personally, I felt that the ending was a little rushed, but I understand that, and I sincerely hope that the author will write a follow-up spin-off. In any case, the author Dada wrote this book very well. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create better works! ! !

There is a reason why the rating is 9:2. The storyline is quite good, there are not many fighting characters, and the combat power is well divided. What is also important is that the author's writing is not bad. Although there is no power dispute, it is very reassuring to read. Although the reading time is not very long, only half a day, I can see that this is a good book. I look forward to the author's new book. It is still a bit regretful that it is not too long.

It's rare to find a fanfic with a single female protagonist. The male protagonist and Yamato's personalities complement each other, and the storyline is pretty good. Although the ending is a bit rushed, but as the author said, the protagonist probably won't have much role in the rest of the story. The ending is a spoiler 🎉

The writing is good, and it fits the comic plot so well that there is no huge conflict with the original plot. But if you read the fan book, it will be fine as long as the conflict is not too big. Who knows how often I will be stabbed in the back by the author? Come on, keep writing and I hope people can watch the whole process. Come on.

The character design of Pig's Knuckle is very good and the plot is quite rich. It is quite funny. If you are not careful, you may die from laughter.

In fact, this book is my first time reading a pirate novel. I have been looking for good pirate novels. This is my third time. Finally, I found a book with a heroine and a protagonist who has an improvement process. In fact, this book is more daily life and has nothing to do with Luffy, but he saved Ace and Eniru. This is also my opinion. I watch anime, so I don't remember clearly or know some characters. Let me give you some clues in advance. The image of Yamato is a bit wrong. Every time Yamato appears, he is looking for food, which makes me feel that he has nothing to do with the protagonist. However, childhood sweethearts, it makes sense to be together. If possible, I hope the author can write a story about the three little ones, like Reina's children and Mu Lin or Musen. They say that the descendants of the wings should also be able to travel through time and space. This can also be used as a side story to the author's other novels. In short, this is a movie that fulfilled my wish. The protagonist became one of the Five Emperors, even surpassed them, and finally lived a happy life with Yamato. The main node of the story is Wano Country, so Momonosuke died! ! [Shy]

The writing is very good. If you are short on books, you can read it, but it is a bit short. The author's writing is obviously very good, but why is it only rated 7 or 9? Well, alas [what]

To be honest, if it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't want to read this book just by looking at the introduction, but after reading it, I can honestly say it's good to read, the plot is not draggy, the strength is not overwhelming, and the character description is also very good. It's a rare fan novel.

After reading this, I will make an evaluation: I don't like to talk nonsense, and I don't talk too much nonsense. There are no major problems in the whole book, and there are not many minor problems. It is very suitable for book friends who have just started reading online books. The number of words is not too many, and it cannot be said that it is too few. The author is very humorous and likes to make jokes, which can keep readers engaged. The tense and exciting plot made you smile, and the author was able to review it immediately when the order of chapters was wrong. The last thing I want to say is that the author killed Momonosuke and won the hearts of our readers. He is a person who knows how to praise. He received five-star praise [like][like][like][like]

The author has a clear positioning of the book and does not stray from the topic, which is already very good. This book may not be enough to be a god, but it is indeed a masterpiece. It should be finished soon, I hope the author will start a new book soon [Thoughts]

This is the most interesting pirate fanfic I have ever read, and I highly recommend it.

I've finished reading it. It's pretty good. It doesn't compete for hegemony or anything. It doesn't have anything to do with the protagonist group. It doesn't look awkward. Many novels bring the protagonist into Luffy's companions. It looks really awkward. This can be said to be the best fanfic I have ever read. The heroine Yamato and the protagonist are childhood sweethearts. It's pretty good.