Ron traveled to the Dragon Ball world and became a Saiyan child.
After experiencing the war between the Saiyans and the Zivurs...
PS: No system, original male and female protagonists, slow to develop, basically not with the Dragon Ball protagonist group, super four route (super four to the top), the plot will be magically changed in the middle, the protagonist will temporarily transition to the villain camp, and above.
Reader comments
The author is so short and weak, not enough to read -_-||
The author doesn't read enough!
A good Dragon Ball fanfic, with a Dragon Ball setting and an independent plot, rather than revolving around the original protagonist (that is, Goukong and his gang). The author's book seems to have such current potential, and it deserves a five-star rating. Come on, the author has more original plots, and I hope you will become the first Dragon Ball fanfic.
This is a good fanfic, but it has to be a double time travel, and it is just spinning around like a dog (the god damn plot restoration system). I really think highly of the author.
The plots written by Dragon Ball are good-looking and more comfortable to watch than those fan plots, but they are a bit short.
Five stars, don't be surprised keep it up.
The author is too slow, too short and not enjoyable to read. [What][What][What]
The author probably sent it. It's been half a month and there's no news.
Not bad, very pretty
Come on, just don't collapse
One word, short, pitifully short [rolls eyes] [curls] [makes a face]
There is a loophole: how can Serena adapt to ten times the gravity, and why in the realm of heaven and humanity does not tap the power of the tail? Giant ape
It's more comfortable among the Dragon Balls I've seen.
Come on, it's not easy to read a good novel [like]
Five-star praise hehe
It's good, but the heroine is an alien. Do you have any pictures? Otherwise, I would imagine the protagonist to be a robot-like person.
The protagonist is so Buddhist, no matter what happens, he will never feel angry, happy, sad, etc., Author! We can't bring it in! This is a shortcoming. It feels like the protagonist is just telling us stories outside of time and space! This is very un-Longzhu
I am a Dragon Ball fan. I will read all the Dragon Ball fan novels. Come on, author.
It's well written, and I've sent you a five-star review, but it's a bit short and weak.
It's pretty cool, but I don't really like the fact that you can't take people with you when you teleport.
I hope the heroine is his sister. I feel that the author wants the sister to take the initiative, and it is best not to have a harem. I don't think there is much to see in Dragon Ball's harem.
The author is so short and weak, not enough to read -_-||
The author doesn't read enough!
A good Dragon Ball fanfic, with a Dragon Ball setting and an independent plot, rather than revolving around the original protagonist (that is, Goukong and his gang). The author's book seems to have such current potential, and it deserves a five-star rating. Come on, the author has more original plots, and I hope you will become the first Dragon Ball fanfic. This is a good fanfic, but it has to be a double time travel, and it is just spinning around like a dog (the god damn plot restoration system). I really think highly of the author.
The plots written by Dragon Ball are good-looking and more comfortable to watch than those fan plots, but they are a bit short.
Five stars, don't be surprised keep it up.
The author is too slow, too short and not enjoyable to read. [What][What][What]
The author probably sent it. It's been half a month and there's no news.
Not bad, very pretty
Come on, just don't collapse
One word, short, pitifully short [rolls eyes] [curls] [makes a face]
There is a loophole: how can Serena adapt to ten times the gravity, and why in the realm of heaven and humanity does not tap the power of the tail? Giant ape
It's more comfortable among the Dragon Balls I've seen.
Come on, it's not easy to read a good novel [like]
Five-star praise hehe
It's good, but the heroine is an alien. Do you have any pictures? Otherwise, I would imagine the protagonist to be a robot-like person. The protagonist is so Buddhist, no matter what happens, he will never feel angry, happy, sad, etc., Author! We can't bring it in! This is a shortcoming. It feels like the protagonist is just telling us stories outside of time and space! This is very un-Longzhu
I am a Dragon Ball fan. I will read all the Dragon Ball fan novels. Come on, author.
It's well written, and I've sent you a five-star review, but it's a bit short and weak.
It's pretty cool, but I don't really like the fact that you can't take people with you when you teleport. I hope the heroine is his sister. I feel that the author wants the sister to take the initiative, and it is best not to have a harem. I don't think there is much to see in Dragon Ball's harem.