Dragon Ball************

I actually think New Broly is better. . . . The boss, Broly, should not stay. The devil himself is the kind that cannot be taught, and is pure evil.

Good. This is the book that starts with the Toei theatrical version. Not Dragon Ball canon. But it doesn't matter. Just watch it 😂 But the Toei theatrical version has a lot of bugs.

If the author can finish the Buu chapter, let the protagonist first travel through the GT world to open the fourth form of Super, then return to the original world to open the Dragon Ball Super chapter, and then open the Super Universe and other side stories [Top post][Top post][Top post] I said I didn't know how to be a eunuch before, but now I'm laughing so hard [awkward laugh]

It's a cool novel. It seems that the logic is quite self-consistent, and the plot development is also very good. The plot of the protagonist going on an adventure is very interesting, and the writing is very good. I won't comment on the combat power for the time being. As for Broly, it would be best to add some settings later. Looking at the performance of Broly, it feels like the old version of Broly, not the new version. The nature of the two Broly is completely different. The old version was born evil, and was later suppressed by his father and used as a tool. The new version is a gentle character who is trapped on a desolate planet with his father and cannot escape. He is naturally kind, but is affected by his own violent power and sometimes goes crazy. Looking at the development trend of this book, it feels like it will be extended to Dragon Ball Z, which means that characters such as the Angel of Destruction will appear. In this case, a similar space or time fluctuation setting can be made, so that the old version of Broly from the younger time period can appear in the protagonist's universe. In this way, the Dragon Ball Superverse mode can be connected, and many versions of Son Goku and Vegeta can appear at the same time, as well as various versions of Gogeta and so on. There will be many ways to become stronger.

It looks great. Vegeta was turned green and Trunks changed his father. This is also a kind of NTR feeling. I haven't seen Krillin being NTR yet. I'm going to read the book instead. The author wrote it very passionately and the cavernous body has swelled.

It's good to watch. I didn't change most of the plot at will, and I didn't belittle Wukong or anything. I hope the author can stick to it.

Very good Dragon Ball fanfic, five-star praise

I want to know if there will be a single heroine or a harem or a lone wolf [Thinking]

Author, you are so short [eating melon]

So far it looks pretty good, it should be a single female protagonist, right? If I want to have a harem, I will give it up decisively.

It's relatively good among Dragon Ball fics, although I watched it while jumping [laughing evilly]

Come on, come on, come on

Good review, but why is the rating so low?

You are a mature author, you need to learn to add updates by yourself [blowing kiss]

Personally I feel pretty good

Good book but too short

If the heroine of Dragon Ball is Bulma, it will be well received.

The article is not bad, don't maliciously score points

Although this book has some flaws, overall it is good.

A rare good book! I just like to make jokes.

It's exciting and beautiful, and it doesn't ruin Wukong's growth path.

It's a good Dragon Ball theme, I hope it continues!

It's pretty cool, come on.

Come on, keep an eye on you. Will be on fire

I don't know which transformation the author intends for the protagonist to take, whether it is the Super Sailor God transformation, the GT Super Four transformation, or a combination of the two.

Well written, keep it up 💪

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very nice, good, like it

I give you five stars, keep up the good work

It's very well written, come on, author, don't give up! [Praise]