The Roc's Soaring and the Sparrow's Dream

The plot is a bit confusing and the emotional line is unclear, but the writing is very good. It would be better if it could be longer, and the Dapeng in the story is a bit silly.

Sometimes I write about things before amnesia, and sometimes I write about things after amnesia. In the end, I still haven't explained everything clearly. It's too confusing.

The writing is very good, and there is a lot of room for imagination, but the plot feels a little wrong. Is the ending so hasty?

It's too short. I feel like I haven't finished writing yet

Looks good and fits the theme