Thousands of miles away from Shituo City, there is a fairy mountain with endless green mountains, but it is shrouded in clouds and mist all year round, making it difficult to see what is inside. There is a spiritual platform in the mountain called Peacock Terrace. It is said that there is an extremely beautiful woman in the Peacock Terrace. "Looking at it from a distance, it is as bright as the sun rising as the morning glow. Looking at it from a distance, it is as bright as a flower rising from Lubo." This word and sentence are just like the woman herself.
Reader comments
The plot is a bit confusing and the emotional line is unclear, but the writing is very good. It would be better if it could be longer, and the Dapeng in the story is a bit silly.
Sometimes I write about things before amnesia, and sometimes I write about things after amnesia. In the end, I still haven't explained everything clearly. It's too confusing.
The writing is very good, and there is a lot of room for imagination, but the plot feels a little wrong. Is the ending so hasty?
It's too short. I feel like I haven't finished writing yet
The plot is a bit confusing and the emotional line is unclear, but the writing is very good. It would be better if it could be longer, and the Dapeng in the story is a bit silly.
Sometimes I write about things before amnesia, and sometimes I write about things after amnesia. In the end, I still haven't explained everything clearly. It's too confusing.
The writing is very good, and there is a lot of room for imagination, but the plot feels a little wrong. Is the ending so hasty?
It's too short. I feel like I haven't finished writing yet
Looks good and fits the theme