Why Has the Villain from a Domestic Struggle Novel Come to Cultivate Immortality?

So far, it looks pretty good. I have a small suggestion. I don't think it's necessary to set Yue Li to be so weak. At any rate, he has advanced to the sect several years in advance. When other children of luck come, it's so shameless for someone who came a few years later to become a disciple and has a higher level of cultivation than you. I feel that Yue Li is very passive like this and has to keep her face close to please other children of luck. Son, although the setting is like this, I feel that I can set some skills for Yueli, otherwise it will be impossible to rely on other children of luck to support her. In the world of immortal cultivation, the jungle is strong and the jungle is strong, and there can be no one to protect her all the time. And if she is so weak, how can she continue to stand beside the son of luck? Looking forward to subsequent updates

In the group portrait novel, there are two pairs of female protagonists, and there may also be some passerby CPs, but I won't go into that content very much later, and the pace will be slower. The interaction between the main characters may have to wait until after joining the sect. If you have any suggestions, you can also tell me if you have any good ideas for the plot. I really envy authors who can copy readers' ideas 🤭

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The writing style is quite good, the logic of the writing is good, the plot is not obtrusive, and the character creation is acceptable so far. There are few treasures in this article. I really like the character of another heroine. She is very smart and cautious in doing things. She is not the kind of character who saves whomever she sees. She will weigh the advantages and disadvantages of the other party to her. She will not panic when encountering moral kidnapping. She calmly analyzes the situation and grasps the overall situation. She has a perfect high IQ design.

The writing is very good. Give five stars to support the author!

The author's writing style and thinking are the unique features of this novel😍It's so interesting to read

The story of Stone Mother and Stone Daughter

Not bad. It tastes great. Children love it.

The writing is really good, I look forward to the follow-up plot [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

After searching for so long, I finally found a good book. I originally wanted to read it slowly bit by bit, but unfortunately I finished it in less than a day 😢