How Long Does It Take for a Newcomer to Stand Out? It's Been 54 Days Since I Wrote This
54 Days, and I finished the first book on the 45th day, with 320,000 words, and 8-12 hours of pure coding every day. I am now contemplating the second book, but no one has read the first one. Is it really that bad? Am I one of those people with no talent? (Crying loudly)
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So far, it looks pretty good. I have a small suggestion. I don't think it's necessary to set Yue Li to be so weak. At any rate, he has advanced to the sect several years in advance. When other children of luck come, it's so shameless for someone who came a few years later to become a disciple and has a higher level of cultivation than you. I feel that Yue Li is very passive like this and has to keep her face close to please other children of luck. Son, although the setting is like this, I feel that I can set some skills for Yueli, otherwise it will be impossible to rely on other children of luck to support her. In the world of immortal cultivation, the jungle is strong and the jungle is strong, and there can be no one to protect her all the time. And if she is so weak, how can she continue to stand beside the son of luck? Looking forward to subsequent updates
In the group portrait novel, there are two pairs of female protagonists, and there may also be some passerby CPs, but I won't go into that content very much later, and the pace will be slower. The interaction between the main characters may have to wait until after joining the sect. If you have any suggestions, you can also tell me if you have any good ideas for the plot. I really envy authors who can copy readers' ideas [laughing]
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The writing is very good. Give five stars to support the author!
The writing style is quite good, the logic of the writing is good, the plot is not obtrusive, and the character creation is acceptable so far. There are few treasures in this article. I really like the character of another heroine. She is very smart and cautious in doing things. She is not the kind of character who saves whomever she sees. She will weigh the advantages and disadvantages of the other party to her. She will not panic when encountering moral kidnapping. She calmly analyzes the situation and grasps the overall situation. She has a perfect high IQ design.
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Not bad. It tastes great. Children love it.
The author's writing style and thinking are the unique features of this novel😍It's so interesting to read
Why are you still in the novice section? It feels like there are so few people reading it.
I haven't seen such a well-written systematic article in a long time. I must support it with five stars!
An old bookworm passed by. The writing is very good. The author has put his heart into it as soon as I saw it. I hope to add more soon.
Your writing is really good. I like to read it. I just want you to write more. Please!
Recommended by Shuhuang. I didn't expect this book to be so well written. It really won my heart!
The writing is really good, I look forward to the follow-up plot [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]
The author is great at writing, the writing is fluent, and the plot is vivid. It has been added to the bookshelf and is worth picking up!
I finished reading it in one go, and I didn't see any major obstacles. The writing, rhythm and plot were well controlled!
I'm tired of seeing the love affair between men and women, and the bond between women who focus on their careers is even better! The plot is comfortable and the pace is tight. I love it!
Familiar recipe, familiar taste. Just feel good and that's it.
It's okay. I look forward to it. I hope that the high reviews can attract more book friends, so that the author can be strongly encouraged to add more books.
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After searching for so long, I finally found a good book. I originally wanted to read it slowly bit by bit, but unfortunately I finished it in less than a day [crying]