Naruto: the Village Is on the Verge of Bankruptcy, I Dug Out Oil

I hope this book won't be unfinished. I've personally sent away many unfinished authors [smiles], so I don't want you to be the next one [smile]

If the sand ninja develops industrialized ninja tools, they can completely invade the four major countries through economic attacks and form a community of interests, or even control them. Just like Wall Street

Ah~~~Ah~~~ I hope all authors in this world don't have to eat, drink, poop or sleep! This allows the author to code 24 hours a day! There are twenty-four hours in a day, which is 1,440 minutes or 86,400 seconds, one word per second, so the author should hurry up and update 86,400 words every day! [Sinister smile]

How should I put it? The writing is quite good, the style is good, the ideas are unique, and the descriptions are okay. The reason why it is four stars may be my problem. I feel that the plot is a bit delayed. It may be because I read too many novels and can't slow down. In Daimyo of the Land of Wind I feel that the paragraph is a bit delayed. Maybe the author is trying to better shape the character of Mu Feng, but it is a bit redundant. It is a very simple matter. If you are not satisfied with it, it is actually a good arrangement. It is purely a personal opinion. Don't criticize [Chigua] [Chigua]

Very nice. I don't know why, but some good-looking books have low scores, while books with high scores either have value issues or are either stallions or weaklings. They are so disgusting that their scores won't drop even though they have a lot of bad reviews. But this kind of book has all good reviews, but no high scores.

Very good!

Forgive me, author. . I shared this book with my daughter, and she asked me a lot of questions after reading the first chapter. . For example, why is a sandworm that is more than 100 meters tall only 3 tons? Our car is close to 2 tons. Then he asked me why 500 pounds of iron is as big as a giant rock. Ha ha,. What can I say, author, you really should relearn basic physics and basic mathematics. Nowadays, writing novels is very introverted. If your writing is not good, but if you are rigorous, reasonable, and logical, then it will basically be OK. But there are problems with your basic settings, which makes people doubt your composition.

It's very strong, the ideas are reliable and reasonable, the distribution and development of the plot are also very smooth, the characters... I feel that some of the characters are a bit rigid... Most of the mainstream ones feel okay, and they are all good. The writing style is very reasonable, the various rhythms of the writing are very stable, and it is a very interesting farming and development invincible flow.

Just force it to be scientific. What is the situation in the ninja world? In the world of personal power, do you use science or commercial science?

I'm not good at words, so I can only say "f*ck"~ [laughing evilly]

I wanted to give it four stars at first, but then it became three stars. It is another existence that is said to be scientific but has become a buff. You can develop whatever you want without using theory. You can do it if you feel you can do it. In the early stage, the male protagonist is not strong enough and he keeps domineering his enemies and keeps compromising. In the later stage, the male protagonist plans to rule the ninja world and tells them to either surrender or fight. His enemies suddenly become hardened and are easily destroyed by the male protagonist. This kind of cool plot is too cliche. It gives people the feeling that the whole world exists just for the male protagonist to be happy. Orochimaru also feels like an adult licking him in one bite, which feels a bit inconsistent with his character as a perverted and cold boss. When negotiating with Jiraiya, I felt that Jiraiya was passive and did not say anything to refute. Sand Shadow was incompetent. He was robbed of the task and blamed Konoha's darkness. Author, your design is a bit evil. There are also a lot of characters that are wrong, it's just for fun to watch.

The author really has never studied. The values ​​​​in the article are really just some concepts. The summoned 50-meter-tall Mechagodzilla only weighs 200 tons. Damn it, a 50-meter-tall house weighs more than 200 tons. Is it made of paper?

Industrial Development Without a Female Protagonist This must be a good book or even a magical book.

The villain in it is very well created, don't write it down next time. He is a sanctimonious hypocrite, a delusional fool, an ungrateful villain, and a shameless cheater. He is not worthy of being called a human being. He is a giant rat and a silverfish. He was saved by others and wanted to kill his husband when things didn't go his way. He promised Gaara to take good care of Gaara and help Suna Ninja Village a lot. What was the result? He drove Gaara wantonly, and even used the power obtained by cheating to deal with it. He did nothing in the thirteen years after the third war. Instead, he grabbed a lot of profits from the village. Now that his profits were damaged, he wanted to take over the Suna Ninja in the name of employment. After being exposed, he became even more embarrassed. It is wonderful to repay kindness with hatred in an angry attempt. How stupid it is to leave the military industry in the hands of those who are not ambitious. The Ninja world is currently experiencing frequent wars, but it only talks about the way to wealth but not the way to strength. Is it possible to use the posture of a savior to bestow favors on the savior?

He doesn't know how to operate and captured Orochimaru. His earth reincarnation cannot be wasted. It's a waste of capital. He took out the fourth generation Kazekage's earth and made gauze gold 24 hours a day. Then he resurrected the water shadow, created water, then created the first generation Hokage, planted trees to make wood, and restored all the Raikage. Live it and use it to generate electricity. It's a pity that they have no blood in the reincarnation of the dirty soil. Otherwise, they can use the beheading sword to make iron. The reincarnation of the dirty soil is a good thing. It is a must-have for capitalists. It will not be tired, painful, or injured, and you will not be compensated for work-related injury compensation. [ Eat melon ] [ eat melon ]

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. ) Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your Dear Readers First July 1, 2022

Orochimaru, you don't want Sasuke to be electrocuted and fucked by an adult, do you? [Laughing]

At the beginning, they were persuaded to retreat by a three-ton giant insect that was more than 100 meters long. . . . A steel cable more than 100 meters long not only weighs so much, but also uses 20,000 volts. . . It is recommended to change the length of the sandworm to twenty meters. Writing novels in the name of science, but the author himself is not proficient in scientific knowledge. . .

The front is very beautiful, but the back is terrible. It gets more and more complicated as you go to the back. One Piece, Masked Superman and some characters I don't know appear, and it's a mess. The front alone is very tiring, and I don't have enough brain now😭😭

The protagonist wants to build a scientific industrial system, but it is the most unscientific and reasonable place to build it by relying on one person to provide a few technical points without society, manpower, materials, technology and other related conditions. A person can cheat to become stronger, but a world is not a place where a person has personal cheats. Just thinking about it can make the transportation backward. The world has standard roads and relies entirely on manpower to farm the land. Most of the people in the world are still poor. How rich can the lower class be? They can manufacture and operate various technical equipment without relevant knowledge.

5-Star review. I think you can actually find novels that suit your taste among novels rated 8 to 9. As long as your writing is exciting enough, weight errors and the like are minor flaws that are innocuous. Keep up the good work, I believe the ratings will gradually improve.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu waited for 900 years, Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Zi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Yi for 3,000 years, Yiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a frail young girl was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on her lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn and lowered my head deeply. Silently turned off the phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, and took out a bottle of 82 The collector's edition of Nongfu Spring, hold it tightly in your hand and walk slowly When I went to the window, the scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood Same, heavy, very heavy, gradually, it becomes gray outside It's raining lightly in the sky. Why? My vision is blurred. I don't know. Whether it's because I shed tears or because it's raining heavily, maybe it's both, I My mood became even more melancholy, and I could no longer suppress my inner feelings. Feeling, I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just TM Who do you look down on in the next few chapters?

It's okay for now. As for whether it looks good later, it depends on my rating. After watching it for so long, I give it four stars. Goodbye.

It's a good Naruto fanfic, I've been following it, it's a light and funny style that doesn't seem passionate but very relaxing, especially the gift crab that Tsunade was given to eat in the most recent chapter, haha! Come on, author, keep up your current level and hold on! What's going on with the latest chapters? Why is it all about Kamen Rider? If you like it as an author, you can't just write these things! Suddenly I no longer have the motivation to read anymore! If you keep writing like this, why not change the title to I Create a Kamen Rider in Naruto! It's okay to bring personal preferences into writing novels, but you can't always bring them along! Are there dozens of chapters yet to be finished?

You people, you read novels and still use your brain to read them [laughs evilly] People like me can read novels without thinking and be happy 99+ [laughing]

The writing is very good. The author wonders if he has ever considered writing one himself. A novel of your own. The writing style of this book is very good. If I were to write a world created by myself, I feel that the author's novel would not go wrong.

Tsuchikage Siege Protagonist: I can tell that you are either under the spell of an illusion, have delusions of being persecuted, or are trying to blackmail me. If the facts are really what you said, you should unite with the other three villages, or support me to secretly accumulate strength. When my identity is revealed, I will become the second largest village and maybe take the opportunity to annex the other three villages. Since you don't want to join, okay, let's break off our relationship and you can go and have fun on your own. You really think you're a loser. Or, Ohnoki's son or granddaughter didn't die in the last fight. Do you think I have a good temper and am easy to bully?

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I will be able to see it in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like when I was watching "Farming System of All Worlds", one more episode would result in one less episode. I wanted to watch it but couldn't let it go. This contradictory and complicated mood drove me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, without intending to finish it. But you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers Until... On July 22, 2022 12:49

The first and middle stages are really smooth and there is no need to pause. In the middle and later stages, many people said that it was a mess. I don't think that's okay. Various functions and so on are also written in. It's not that I can't understand it, let alone that it's the same human being. It's so wonderful to write it like this. Do we have to think based on our understanding of the original power system of this anime? Many people have forgotten that the protagonist has a system? Although the system does have no sense of existence. In summary, it's great. Come on, author! Update quickly or you will be turned away. The later content drags a bit. Not as exciting as before, minus one star.