In the Ninja World, Otsutsuki Must Be Trembling.

We're recruiting, and the pay is good. Package travel package rebirth package delivery system. Because the freshmen are small There are too many worlds, resulting in a serious shortage of travelers, so now Recruiting time-travelers, regardless of gender, old or young, is on a first-come, first-served basis. Point If you like it, you will get the system. (Give it a try, it won't work anyway) Ask for money) This book is very good, support it!! !

I think it's great! I look forward to your praise. Your encouragement may become the motivation for my writing. Please support me!

I don't understand why such a good book only has an 8.5 Rating? It's really exciting. Naruto's Black Creation and Organizational Logic ability is super strong, and it makes people seem to have a strong sense of logical thinking. However, it is such a good book, but it only has a rating of 8.5. I don't understand it. The only pitfall is that the author updates too slowly. Author, it's time to plow the land. Even my donkeys won't take you to rest like this [please update]

Come on, author! This is one of the best Naruto fics I've ever seen! But the most enjoyable one is this one! The protagonist has a clear goal from the beginning! There is a plan! IQ is online and organized! Very exciting!

This book is very good, but the author doesn't know how to use it, and the writing style is average. However, the story is still much more readable than other books. The low score of this book may be due to the author's inability to write Goldfinger well, but this book can be said to be the best among the novels I have seen on the Tomato software! Since I have never bothered to read Naruto, this book to me is hovering between a god-like work and a top-notch work. Author, write well and don't be a eunuch.

Wc, it's not easy. It finally got a 9.0 Score. I still remember that when I first read it, the score dropped all the way. When the score dropped from the normal 8 points to more than 7 points, I was worried that the author would abandon the book! I hope the author will continue to work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ and write more, it's not enough!

This golden finger is so powerful. If you have an idea and do it, you will definitely succeed if you achieve it to a certain extent. You can create something from nothing! This is the power of my thinking!

Well, the author, I think you can take a look at the setting collection and Kishimoto's interview. Many pitfalls can be solved, instead of looking at marketing accounts or blackmail, otherwise true fans will feel uncomfortable watching it. If the third generation is bad, just be bad. It can't be changed anymore [laughs and cries] Don't follow the trend when writing about Naruto, make the third generation bad, wash away Obito and so on. Only by writing about your own understanding of Naruto can you resonate. It's only fifty pictures now, so go for it [laughing evilly]

Well, it's very beautiful\(//∇//)\My personal recommendation! You can touch it, Death. After all, the mask belongs to the Uzumaki clan.

This novel is really good. The male protagonist has the ability to bug and establishes an umbrella organization. In an effort to reform the ninja world and unify the world, I hope this book will have a single female protagonist. This book is really beautiful

The Naruto harem story is very well written. The heroines include Hinata Hinata, Ino Fuka, Koyuki, Izumi Uchiha, and Koharu, who are looking forward to accepting Tsunade and others. "This also allows Kurama Yakumo to truly return to his heart." Now that I have a 100% good impression, what should I do next? [Sneaky laugh]

I actually don't like to read books where the protagonists travel through time and become Naruto and Erzhu. I prefer to read books where the protagonists travel through time and become original characters. But the author's writing is really good and the genre is what I like to read. It's just too short. I hope the author can make it longer. Come on, author [Like]

Very good, the writing is not sloppy and the plot is smooth. Although there are some typos, I don't think it matters.

This is one of the best looking movies I've ever seen

It is one of the better books of the same type. The author has a very good grasp of the image and personality of Naruto, as well as the reasoning and in-depth exploration of the political methods of the Naruto world. It can be seen that the author definitely understands the Naruto anime.

This is good, this novel has good ideas. But this book can be read as a harem. 4 Stars.

In fact, after seeing it, the senses are pretty good, even very good! But there is no need to sew things from other worlds in, such as Devil Fruits and Death Gods. It is not necessary. Adding them in will lower the impression score and give a sense of fragmentation. Because I have watched Naruto and the other two famous cartoons, I have some understanding of their settings, such as Devil Fruits, Bayou Plus Punk has already researched the composition and principles. Another example is the Shinigami. The Shinigami from the Ninja World are different from the Shinigami from the Soul Society. They are different in terms of appearance, equipment, capabilities, and duties. It would be a bit confusing to forcefully add them in. So far, to be honest, they still look pretty good. Oh, yes, one more thing, neon is neon, and China is China. There is no need to bring Chinese culture into neon. It is okay to bring China into otherworldly fantasy. In the final analysis, it is still ancient China. There is no sense of violation, but bringing neon into it feels too heavy.

Author, I miss you so much. My eyes are super invincible, super super invincible, and the first one is so beautiful. I finally read your article. I don't want to read other articles. Other articles are either too boring, and your eyes are dazzled by this simple and easy-to-understand content. It is vivid and useful. Yu Huawen, whose interesting words can be called the world of Naruto, really moved me. Don't die. The author gives you a five-star praise. You must not die. You can't be like this. At least I am following 400 chapters. Even if I rewrite it, it will be fine. The author is great. The author is great. The author is great. The author is great. The missing ninja returns

The plot is exciting, the characters are well described, and it is not brainless. Except for the slow plot, everything else is very good. I am a very picky person when reading books. This book is very suitable for my liking and is updated quickly.

This book is very good. It is not as childish as the real Naruto. It reads very smoothly. It is not like other books where you don't know where you are reading. I hope the author will keep it good and not end the book in a sloppy manner like some authors later.

Invincible, cool writing, with foreshadowing of the Puppet Gundam, and two of the Four Shadows Talking. . . The story is not biased towards the protagonist, it is like a mesh to me. For me, the world view of Mowuga Technology is quite big. Must. . . There is more than one alien. .

Well, the atmosphere is so high-end and classy compared to other fan fiction. Other novels are still hanging around in the ninja world, but you have actually reached the universe. Why hasn't it been updated in the past few days? I can't help but update it during the New Year.

So far, the main character's color writing has been watertight. It looks particularly enjoyable, and what's particularly good is that the protagonist doesn't feel aggrieved as he grows up. I hope the author will work hard and update [smile]

There are still many flaws in this book. For example, the consciousness space communication in the early stage is gone later, and there is also an obvious behavior of suppressing the combat power. I guess it is to prevent the plot from being too invincible. It always breaks through at critical moments, or saves the day. But in any case, the author has a great imagination and a comprehensive understanding of Naruto. Of course, different from other fan fiction, this book has added many author settings, such as the martial arts system and the technological powerhouse.

The writing is very good, the plot is very reasonable, and I have my own ideas about the character setting of the original work that make up for the character setting of the original work. The golden finger for the protagonist is also very good to use. The skills developed with the help of the golden finger are also very interesting. Forming your own force is also an unexpected direction, which is very thoughtful. Come on, author, this book is very interesting

I roughly read the reviews and found that it was basically because of the dispute between Sandai and Danzo. Let me give you an objective review. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and eggplant, so there is no need to lower the rating. It's a very good article. People who like it think it's good, but people who don't like it think it's ugly. Just three different views Anyway, I think it looks pretty.

The book is good and the author writes it well. The author is very good at summarizing. The service is also very good.

It can be said that this book is almost the most perfect novel about Naruto. It can write a more perfect story about Naruto's unification of peace. The description is more reasonable, the expression is clear, and it makes up for the regrets.

After reading it for a long time, I struggled for a long time and posted a comment with emotion. I can only say that it is a novel that can change a person's mind with just a few words. If it were replaced with reality, it would kill me directly. Haha, five-star praise. Good luck to the author.

I think it's still okay, but I wish there were more, it's not enough [I'm about to cry]