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Come and see, Mr. Reader [almost crying]

A very interesting novel, please update it! I hope it will be a full-length novel with 3 to 5 million words!

Come on, author, elf texts are a niche genre, but there aren't many that can be written well.

It's a pretty good article. The elf training race value is quite interesting. I think I haven't seen it in other places. As for the level that other people said, I think there is no problem, but extraordinary, commander, king and so on are indeed a bit awkward. Haha, a group of students who have not fully evolved in the first few months are the commander of the elf. I feel that this title is very worthless. It is a very impressive title and does not have the feeling of display. However, this classification is more convenient to combine with the setting of training racial values. I will take a look at it later.

It took me a few days to catch up I can't fault it, it's just that the rating is too low to attract people. To be honest, I actually clicked on this book many times, but the rating was too low and I never read it. It wasn't until I started watching it a few days ago that I realized it was really good.

Although it is a short story, of course, the previous content setting is a bit problematic, but the content behind it made me a little excited. The content is very substantial. It writes about a world that has just been exposed to Pokémon, and the progress and development are launched by the protagonist himself. The author is adding more updates to me. You are the only author I recommend to you, and you are also the only one who gets angry at the person who commented on your article when he saw a negative review. Somehow, I feel in my heart that your book is popular, and it will not be good if it is not popular.

When I see 286, I'll give it a five-star review first... There are actually some minor problems, but as long as it's not glass poison resistant, it should be able to withstand it. If I have to say it, the protagonist has a lot of trouble. In addition, the setting is a bit strange. The upper limit of human subjective consciousness in the article is really not high. I haven't seen a few elves with trainers who have exceeded the racial value. Maybe the protagonist has not been exposed to that level yet? In short, it is a bit excessive for the protagonist to outshine other normal geniuses for several years a year. But in fact, it's not a big problem. This book is also the third elf novel I've been following on Tomato. I'm just sitting there, cheering, cheering, cheering. When I saw 416, it was generally okay and quite satisfying. However, the protagonist was a bit irritable because of his shamelessness too many times. The main team was not systematic, but the author was prepared to make up for it starting from the second team. In addition, the strength grew too fast, and it was almost impossible for other people to explain and make up for the protagonist, so the feeling of satisfaction was reduced.

Nice book, I don't know why the rating is so low

I am an old book fan from Chapter 50 to now. The rhythm, plot and other aspects of this book are good. The most important thing is to add this novel theme with elves. I really hope that this book can reach 2 million. If you don't like to read elves and like to read mythical beasts, please quit voluntarily. I don't need you to give five stars. I just ask you not to deliberately lower the rating. This book is really good, but there are still many book lovers who have not discovered this book. I hope it will not be buried because of the low rating. Thank you

This book is very good and worth reading. Friends who like elves can check it out!

Indeed, the author's own settings have been added to the original games, animations and movies, but I have to say that settings such as emotional energy, skill levels and proficiency give people a refreshing feeling, and there is not much sense of violation.

I have found a Pokémon novel in Tomato that suits my taste the best so far, and all the Pokémon I have conquered are my favorite except for Gardevoir. Many of the things described in it are the world of Pokémon in my imagination.

The author writes it well, but I'm tired of reading Gardevoir, and the author seems to often forget the system's tasks.

The book is interesting, but why is the rating so low? ? [Think]

Elf literature itself is a niche book, so come on, author! But after reading the latest chapter, I personally feel that there are several poisonous points. 1. The elves themselves are actually TV or theater versions, including most of the elf novels. Humans and elves protect each other and grow up. However, since the protagonist appears weak in this book, the elves will become stronger through practice. In the beginning, the protagonist was weak and the elf was worried. Later, he wished that the protagonist was weak or injured and had a training buff to become stronger. Here begins to appear poisonous points, because the elves themselves can have their own personalities, but the willingness to protect their trainers should be the basis of elf novels. 2. There are some or too many elements of Naruto. In a book called Elf Master, although there are eight monkeys, there are too many elements in this book. Although it is a means, it is still a bit overwhelming. 3. The protagonist's own sprites have a very small audience, whether it's a game or a TV show, such as the sticky dragon, the various monsters, and the bad dragon dragon. Although it's not that there is no audience, it's a bit small. The above are my opinions on this book. Of course, they are personal opinions. I also hope that the author can remove some of the poisonous points. After all, there are indeed few people who write elven literature.

Very nice book. First time rating. Very nice.

It's great, looking forward to the next episode

Although I say it doesn't look good from the front, it's not too bad from the back, and I'm following the invincible flow. Overall, it's okay. Generally speaking, as long as it is related to Kemen, I will basically give it five stars. Come on, author.

The article is very well written. I have read more than 100 chapters now, almost 200. I personally think it is very interesting, and then there is the single heroine. I like the articles with the single heroine the most, and I don't like to read about that kind of harem. This book is very suitable for me. There are many other people's articles about Yushu, but all I have seen is that kind of harem. I really don't like harems, so I think this book is very interesting, so I will give it five stars.

Okay, this is a book that I can read after I can see everything. If I get a perfect score, I can give it an 8.7. Some parts are a bit weak, such as repeating how powerful the protagonist's combination of skills is. But when I think of him updating two chapters a day (actually six chapters, but this is obviously a three-part chapter), this can be ignored. Also, this book has been rushing to the plot, and the training has basically been wiped out, which makes me feel that the strength comes out of thin air. By the way, can there be a special one for the new elf? What's going on with this score? Because there are not many people watching and some people make random comments, I say it is very low. Many people in the comment area said that changing the level names is very troublesome. What I want to say is that Pokémon fan fiction is really difficult to write, and it is difficult to innovate. If you release a new Pokémon, there will definitely be people who criticize it without thinking. If you don't release a new Pokémon, you will still be criticized for all kinds of bad things. Now that you have changed the settings, you will still be criticized. . . . .

I think it's okay. Except for the love story between the male and female protagonists, the writing on Pokémon is pretty good. It would be great if the Pokémon writing focuses on Pokémon. Is the rating so low because it was attacked by peers and hired trolls to write bad reviews? Come on, author, fight to the end with the evil forces and write seventy, eight or one hundred thousand words a day! ! ! !

Please support me and keep following me. It's ok. Slow heating type [please update]

The author of Wakaka is too short and not enough to read [shy](￣▼￣)

I like this process of growing up together

It's okay, the subject matter is quite innovative.

8 Chapters a day is too short, but 20 chapters a day is not too much [smile][smile][smile]

It's a good book, but not many people read it.

Energy cubes can be used for reference in "Pokémon Era of Evolution"

Good-looking, but too short (crazy hint [anger])

I think this book is good. As long as he doesn't panic about this book, I will continue to read it. I hope the author will update more.