Time Travel: I Came to the World of Bone King

This book is very good, but it has one shortcoming, it is too few, so you can make up for this shortcoming with ten updates a day [sneery laugh] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter]

It's really good. It's a rare masterpiece among Bone King fanfics. The writing is excellent. It doesn't have the embarrassing self-indulgence and stinky writing style of other fanfics. The characters don't have a broken character. It's in line with the original setting. This is the fan fiction I have always wanted to read, rather than a hodgepodge of comics mixed with various miscellaneous elements. This is a very pure fan novel. The plot progresses very smoothly and is very comfortable to read. I have not seen such a well-written fan novel for a long time. The key point is that the protagonist does not have a system. System stories are easy to write but are too routine. The lack of a system for the protagonist feels like the best setting. It can make the protagonist look like he is not just a jobber who only follows system tasks and does whatever the system tells you. Although system-free writing is less troublesome than systematic writing, it can better portray the character of the protagonist, instead of making the protagonist look like a waste who only relies on the system. All in all, it's great to finish this book. It's great to be able to find this excellent book among Qingyishi Yuanju Bengluo Template Fans. Thank you for accompanying me. Spreading flowers to the end [blowing kisses]

I enjoyed watching it, and it basically fulfilled all my fantasies about Long Aotian's fan fiction. Thank you, the author, for allowing me to complete a fantasy world. As a front row reminder, the setting of this fan fiction is that time travel is already invincible, so if you want to see some intrigues, you can run away. If you want to see cool stories, warrior cows, sword explosions, 999 with one sword, and attacking the sand and destroying the whole audience together, you can check it out. Highly recommend. Thank you for accompanying me all the way, and I will finish spreading flowers wwww

I originally thought it was another self-created Supreme Invincible style, until I saw Shizi say, "Albedo-sama laughs so wildly," and then burst out laughing with the protagonist, hahaha. The author is a true fan of overload, and the characters of these NPCs are well grasped! Come on! If you need money, please send us the payment code! Don't cut it in half! ! ! [Learned]

It's a very good fan work. When I read it, I felt like I was reading Maruyama's original work. In terms of character creation and background setting, because it directly follows the original work without too much ink, it is very unfriendly to casual readers, and even animation fans may not understand it. Although this may reduce the difficulty of writing, it also limits the performance of the book. If it can be promoted in the overload circle, I believe the results will be much better. In terms of plot, I have to say that the author is very good. He has basically re-opened a new plot line without falling into the trap of traditional fan fiction. Personally, I feel that the development of the plot is as attractive as the original work, but the plot progresses too fast, as if it is over just after it begins. The main plot is too clear, resulting in the branch plots not being full enough, and losing the strong "sense of adventure in another world" of the original work. Nothing that has happened so far has exceeded the protagonist's expectations. It's like trying to answer a question without the joy of exploring the problem in the process. The original novel "Grass Snake" gradually understands the world in the process of conquering the world. A grand different world slowly unfolds in front of readers. The customs, history and culture of each country, and the rich experiences and joys, sorrows and joys of each character are all highlights. The key to all this is "novelty", which is the core competitiveness of different world novels. If fan fiction wants to transcend "fan fiction" and reach the level of original works, it must be innovative. Except for the protagonist group who cannot move, other supporting characters and unimportant characters can be changed at will. Adding some new characters and new areas can greatly enrich the interest of the article. Otherwise, all the characters who appear have appeared in the original work, and their personalities and experiences are already known, and the interest will be reduced a lot. After watching the overload, we not only remember the protagonist group, but also Annie, Gazef, Mieguo and others. These people also greatly promoted the development of the plot in the original work, and their characters also appeared vividly on the page. Since these people left early in this game, there should be new original characters to replace them. Vivid and three-dimensional characters are a precious asset of a work. I wish the author better and better as he writes and achieves good results! [Praise]

For every novel that I put in my hard work, no matter whether I like reading this kind of subject or not, I will leave five stars, which can be regarded as an affirmation of the author's hard work. To be honest, this novel is not bad, and there are not many of this kind of subject in Tomato. [Sending Hearts]

It's a rare Bone King novel. The main character is not the Holy Mother. He kills decisively and his IQ is online throughout. I personally think it's great. I hope the author can finish this book. I've been coming to Tomato for more than three years and I haven't seen a completed Bone King novel [face covering]

It's okay. As a bookworm of ten years, this kind of novel is very new. I recommend it. I recommend it. I have seen too many good books that are half-way through. The author must not give up on the book midway. Come on, come on, start and finish. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned]

As an Overlord fan, it is really good. Friends who are familiar with the original work or animation will like it very much. The author's writing is very good, there is almost no moisture and it is very dry, which is rare! Come on, finally a good novel has its score wiped off! Support the author!

Come on, author, this is the only Bone King fanfic on Tomato that I can read (♡˙˙♡)

So far it's pretty good, I'm just worried that the plot will stagnate due to too many main characters dying too early, and then it will start to become stagnant and stop updating. Therefore, I would like to make some suggestions, which include long-term concerns, near-term concerns, and hidden dangers. I personally recommend adding some original characters and scenes, but I don't recommend writing about daily life or too many love plots for this article, because I think this fanfic is more suitable for writing about aggression. The strong will kill them in a planned way, and the weak will be killed directly according to the situation. People who die immediately after appearing do not need to portray an image. Important characters who are active and useful in the future should pay attention to portraying the image. This is Tongtong (or a manifestation of hydrology). If you find it difficult to accept this suggestion, you can ignore it and retain your original strength. The above are purely personal suggestions. If you have any objections, I will not refute them (the suggestions do not contain any derogatory connotations, I believe in the current ratings).

I feel it is one of the best Bone King fanfics I have ever read. Unfortunately, the number of words is not very large. I look forward to the author updating it soon!!!

I haven't read a few overlord fanfics, it's quite novel. We must also admire the author's courage and confidence in completely abandoning the original work and creating an original plot. Without the writing power and outline, it is easy to fail in writing. I look forward to the future direction.

This plot is more humane than the characters in the original work, and the values ​​​​seem to be slightly more suitable for the public, but because of this, it is a pity, after all, I cannot experience the anti-humanity story in its original flavor. But as an online novel alone, it can already receive five-star reviews.

It's really the most realistic thing I've seen so many times, and there's no deliberate sensationalism in the whole process, and the most important thing is! ! ! No mess! ! ! The writing style throughout the article has always been very stable, and the plot is online. I really like it. Regarding the plot: the protagonist is a good friend of the Bone King, and the friendship atmosphere between them is well grasped. It's really not a lie. The above is just my opinion after watching it for such a long time. Personal preferences may be different. It depends on the individual.

The writing is very good. It comes from the last book. The author has to work hard and don't stop [laughing]. Also, I would like to ask silently, if there is a heroine in the future, can you add more love interactions with the heroine or interactions with other female characters? Just like to eat sweets

The most exciting OVERLOAD fanfic I have ever seen, the characters and plot are well grasped, the fighting descriptions are very detailed, the original setting retains the connotation of Bone King, and has unique innovations. In short, it is very good.

This is a readable fan fiction at the moment. I shouldn't have such a low rating. It's definitely 9.0.

The quality of plot and plot advancement is very high, and Bone King is well-deserved to be the ceiling of fan fiction. The disadvantage is that the core is full of the logic of who is stronger and who is reasonable in Japanese light novels. He launched a locust plague but said he cared about ordinary people. He was a powerful man who clearly had better options but gave them up because of low efficiency. It was like the captain of the transportation brigade who was the God of War at Huayuankou but said he was fighting against Japan. In the early stage, the logic that they are just NPCs and you will trample them to death if you encounter ants in reality covers up the fact that "when you travel to a different world, everyone, including the weak, are already intelligent beings of flesh and blood." In the middle stage, the good and evil value settings of the original racial characteristics were borrowed to explain why they were so unscrupulous. In the later stage, it was said: Momonga can launch a locust plague without any scruples, but he still attaches great importance to the lifestyle of ordinary people. This explanation increases the plausibility of the plot. To sum up, the protagonist and the Bone King have been lowered to the level of the Blood Emperor Plus, and they can only be heroes, which is a pity. But it is the best novel I have read recently, very nice.

Purely based on the settings of the original work, this book undoubtedly has the same settings as the original world view, and the professional race and skills of the protagonist can be found in many prototypes in the original novel of Overload. The writing is excellent, and it is not just a fan for the sake of writing a fan. To be honest, this is the only one with a score of more than 9 points. Overload fan work is also one of my favorites. It does not deliberately follow the main plot of the original work. This is a big challenge for the author. However, the author of this book did it, and the newly created main line is no problem for the original world view. , Such an excellent fan work is indeed better than other Bone King fan works of the same period. It is awesome and highly recommended. I wonder if the author can write another one that is different. Although it is highly likely to be impossible, I still hope to see the author's works of the same period. Thank you for this book's reading experience for me. Come on. Oh, by the way, why did the author only write more than 200 chapters before it was finished, and it was not enjoyable at all?

I read the previous book. I liked it very much, but the platform was too evil. I hope this book can be completed completely. The next season of the animation will be released soon. I am looking forward to it... [Laughs]

The writing is very good and worth reading. The author should have thoroughly understood the original work. There are not too many erotic chapters, and there is no saying that the beautiful character of the other party will be spared. Everything is written very naturally. The main character's goal from the beginning is to create a world where you can fish, so he insists on the belief that anyone who stops me from fishing will die. It is very comfortable to read.

This book is good. Although I have only read the animated version of Bone King, I think this adaptation is reasonable. I am just not familiar with the plot of Dragon King. However, I feel there are two regrets: first, the warrior commander appeared too hastily and was killed immediately. He should have been exposed to Sebas. After all, these two people have the same personality and have a bit of sympathy for each other. It would be better. 2. Nail Clipper This person should not turn into a vampire, but let him spar with the warrior captain (the warrior captain who had contact with Sebas) and then die, and then resurrect him and become a vampire and enter the big tomb. Overall, the book is well written, especially the use of small characters to set off the plot. It is similar to the original work. Also, I prefer anime and manga with a medieval background in Japanese comics. I searched Tomato and it seems that no one has written a novel about the Bone King, only you have written it here. I hope you won't interrupt the story in the middle of writing. That would be a pity. It's rare to find a time-travel novel about the Bone King. (๑> <๑)

I have watched the Bone King anime many times and have been looking for good fan fiction. However, there are very few Bone King fan fiction, but it is also difficult to find. There are only a few good ones. I finished it in three days. When I saw the finale, I really sighed that there are still good fans out there. Personally, it feels very good. It's perfect, and the final fight is also very exciting. The only thing that makes me feel bad is that the male protagonist doesn't have the strength to crush him in the later stage of the different world. But just my personal opinion, I also know that if he has the strength to crush the world, there will be no exciting fights with world bosses and other plots. If you don't like it, don't criticize...

After reading it, I felt very happy. The characteristics of each character are very consistent with the original work, with a strong sense of immersion, the protagonist is very decisive, and a must-have character for a good novel. But the shortcoming is that some important characters in the original work are mentioned in passing, or things are done hastily, which is a bit lacking, but well, as long as the article is enjoyable, it will be enjoyable! The ending is quite satisfactory, overall it gives 2 Kun stars! By the way, I want to promote my work. After reading the author's article, I also had the urge to write. It happened to be a holiday and I had nothing to do. I wanted to challenge the same kind of fan fiction and do something exciting. I took Nazarick and traveled to the world of pirates. First, I realized my dream and killed Taozi! Stay tuned.

The character of the protagonist is well developed. He has a qualified king's mentality and makes decisions when he is ready, instead of being indecisive and looking like a loser like in other novels. There are people in it who can't accept the protagonist betraying his former friends, but in fact I think it's a highlight, it has the flavor of a hero.

My literary skills are not good, so I don't have any fancy words to praise this book, but this book is really good-looking, and it suits my taste. The plot is novel, the plots are interlocking, and it is deeply rooted in people's hearts. The description of some plots exaggerates the atmosphere, and it seems that what I am reading is not a novel. Because this is a wonderful novel full of passion, suspense, and fascinating, and it is also a masterpiece filled with endless wisdom, humanity, and courage. This novel allows us to understand the complexity and dignity of human nature behind the ups and downs of the story, and allows us to feel the suffering and sorrow of life. ... The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, making it enjoyable to read.

It is a rare Bone King fan novel, and overall it is pretty good. However, in terms of personal preference, I have no idea about the race of the protagonist's Headless Horseman. I prefer the demon race at the end that eats the fruit of the World Tree and transforms into a demon race. Of course, this is just my personal preference and does not affect the excitement of this novel. It is a pity that the protagonist has no CP until the end. The Bone King has married Ya'er, but Ya'er is no longer the shame of a succubus. I am also looking forward to the author's next apocalyptic novel.

I'm really looking forward to it. Who are the heroines?

It looks good, and the style is completely different from the author's previous book. Maybe it's a shadow of the previous book, but the quality is still very good.