There Is Indeed Something Wrong with Leziren's Youthful Love Story

Very good, I just want to ask who the heroine is?

Newbie, new book, please support me. Please fill the bookshelf.

I'll comment later when I think of a few saucy words to say.

The plot has ups and downs, the characters are well-developed, the story is full of fun and thought-provoking, and the alternation of first person and third person is refreshing. It does not have a lot of gorgeous rhetoric, but it can highlight the beautiful real things. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Come on, I quite like it! [Blowing kiss]

Really good, heroine?

Everything is deceitful, hypocrisy and deception coexist. The real thing (Yangno) that the protagonist thinks he has found is just a fake. The double baptism makes him never believe anything again, and he becomes the last liar (he does not need sympathy, only the weak will be sympathized with - he is not a weakling)

This book is really good, but there is a big problem: you are too short!

Can anyone tell me when it changed to first person? [Almost crying] I, I, I just read the new chapter, and suddenly it felt so awkward. I moved a few pictures forward and it was also in first person. Why didn't I feel it before? [Almost crying] There is a sudden strange feeling that I can't explain [crying] [crying] [crying] Of course it's still very interesting.

Why does writing become the first person?

Later on, my style of writing changed, and I felt emm, it felt pretty good.

In the early stage, the male protagonist's design was always a bit broken, but in the later stage, it was okay, and the emotional line was also well written. I hope there won't be too many swords in the future. Come on come on😘😘😘 Don't change your title all the time, it's a bit uncomfortable

Super super pretty! ! ! ! !

I read the first part and thought it was very good, but suddenly I saw a comment saying that the first person was changed later, so I jumped to the next and read it. I lost a lot of interest. The book is still very interesting, but the first person does not catch me. I personally don't like the first person. I will give it four stars [Chigua]

The casting of the characters is very novel, and among the books about Aoi Monogatari that I have seen, this book is also good. Worth a look (I hope the author won't stop updating [laughs])

Generally speaking, it is a very good work. The protagonist's image in the early stage is vividly portrayed and deeply rooted in people's hearts. The emotions of the protagonist and Yukinoshita Haruno are also well described. However, there is a little bit of knife in the back, and the number of words may be a little short. However, the daily life of the protagonist and the heroine can be updated later, but the words are a bit short. If it were written more, the score would not be so low. Overall, it is a relatively good work.

I am particularly looking forward to how the author will kick Tuanzi out of the game The plot is getting more and more wrong, and I originally thought the author was going to use a knife out of spite. I didn't expect that this would be a contest between "Big Teacher" and "Second Teacher" Hikigaya and Luge. Collision between real and fake

Yossi, the author is a great citizen

It's very good, and it can be called a unique show in the variety comics. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Halfway through, I switched to person pronouns. I'm not used to seeing them in first person, but I got the same feeling from the previous part. Five-star yo-yo

What can I say, the writing is indeed very wonderful, but I am not used to the first person, so I can only say goodbye [grievance]

Too bad! Too bad! Too short

Changed to first person?

Yesterday, I suddenly had a first-person view

Okay, another distinguished guest

I feel like I can't have a relationship with a girl like Yangno.

Please speed up your coding speed, my good brother

If the needle doesn't poke, it's just too short [eating melon]

Come on, author, don't be a pigeon, I am with you [Like] By the way, do you have a fan base? Homework

First person, the sense of immersion is really strong.