The Adventures of Lolo: the King of Battle at the Beginning

It can be said that this book has completely surpassed the Adventures of Lolo and has developed into a new world. It is very interesting and worth reading. At present, the author has written the "Redemptors" behind the scenes as a group of conspirators who want to overthrow the motorcycle clan and the beast clan. It is recommended that the author strengthen the protagonist. The adventures of Lolo are not the highlight The race is more about scheming. The protagonist feels more silly and sweet as the writing goes on. I don't realize how strong it is. Then there are the Sky City and the Endless Sea. At present, they are all beasts. Lu Tianming, the motorcycle race, is too strong. It is recommended to weaken it. There are too few scenes of tigers and orangutans. The tiger does not have the temperament of the hero in the original drama and is more like a Erha. Collect The wolf soldiers are too slow, and there are no intuitive statistics. I always feel that I can't figure out the strength of the protagonist. Now that the beast tribe is attacked by lightning, should we help the beast tribe? The author wants to write that the protagonist will benefit, but both sides will suffer. The beast tribe is now one-sided, and the protagonist is still fighting among themselves. This is a bit difficult to accept. Sorry, the progress of the mission is also a bit slow. Not to mention the system sign-in reward, the mission is a big one once it is given. Can the protagonist kill a few war kings or motorcycle generals to replenish themselves? Or there is no need to divide it into so many perspectives. It seems like five or six chapters divided into one day, but in fact it is like one chapter happening in each place. The plot and material selection are well written by the author. The characterization and combat power standards are a bit poor. All in all, five stars. It is worth watching. Good luck to the author [Top post][Top post][Top post]

A pretty good book and very attractive

... Why is this one only rated 7.7? I think it's quite interesting. I've read several books like this and I feel that this one is better than others. It has a grand world view and basically no typos (I haven't found it anyway). I give it five stars. Cheers to the author.

The book is very good, very exciting, and very interesting, but the update speed is too slow.

It's really unconventional, the world view is huge, and the content is beautifully connected. The author will also respond to comments in a timely manner, and there is no buying or asking for gifts, and there are no other errors in writing. There are almost no typos. The author will also draw on readers' opinions on the content. Very good, recommended

It feels completely in line with my appetite. It's a pity that the student party doesn't have much money. Otherwise, I'd definitely give you a few hundred rewards. [Like][Like][Like] Do you still need to fill in the author's world view? If you want to recruit names, you can call us and help you think about it. There are also settings and so on, the same [thinking]

It's pretty good to watch, but the overly heroic idea of ​​mobilizing a million-strong army is a bit too useless. I feel that small soldiers are useless at all, and conquering a city is too much fun. Just relying on a few generals can decide whether to defeat a battle involving 2 million soldiers or to defend a heavy city. The story is quite exciting.

This is the quality that 9 points should have [like] Looking at those paragraphs and comments from 2022, it seems that the writing was not very good at that time, and the plot was messy and so on. This is also a classic pitfall of group portrait writing. But for readers who are late to the game, there is no big problem so far. Moreover, there are "revisions" in 23 years and "new revisions" in 24 years. Even starting from the beginning of the chapter, it is said to be a revision, but it is actually almost a rewrite. With this set, the entire workload is no less than opening another book. I can only say that the author is really serious about it, and this is really unreasonable. There are still some problems behind it. For example, the original theme of the game is war. Although the three war kings are separated from the others, their magnitude is not large. Even numerical monsters like wild orangutans will be attacked and killed by a group of black panthers. And this book makes the gap between each level too big, which raises a question: since the war king/quasi-emperor are all ants, can't you do it alone? Why do you have to bring a group of soldiers with single-digit levels to increase casualties and send energy to the opponent? Another thing is that the later battles have obviously gone beyond the game world of the original work, and have developed towards cultivating immortals. Especially for the quasi-emperor, all kinds of phantom laws and even the laws of space and swallowing have come out. However, this problem is not very serious. The problem that has the greatest impact is the question of the quasi-emperor's B-square, which again involves the question of why a person should lead minions when he is able. However, the rating will not be changed. After all, overall the flaws are not concealed, and it is indeed rare for an author to be so attentive. It is much better than other mindless articles on this subject. --- The final quasi-emperor battle (the battle process is very confusing), the demon king battle (same as above) and the unification battle (several beast emperors are a bit subdued and OOC) are all a bit failed in writing, but the extras are really a plus.

Handsome and unrestrained, jade tree in the wind, extremely smart, handsome, sword-like eyes, fresh and handsome, handsome and elegant, dignified appearance, calm and elegant, elegant and peaceful, majestic, throwing fruits and carts, majestic, handsome features, dignified appearance, graceful and well-dressed author, update quickly. (Otherwise it would be like sending a blade to your family)

It's okay, it's one of the better books among Lolo's adventures.

Yes, this is the second book I found accidentally. It is a good novel about martial arts. The author is very innovative and adds many races. The plot is also very different. What is the point of watching a fan blindly copy the original plot? Just like puppets, you have to have your own thoughts. Fan fiction is about innovation. The author originally scored 9.1 On Tomato but changed the scoring system and dropped to 6 overnight. Now the author has scored 9.2 Again, which is really awesome.

Very good, the world view has been completely expanded.

It's so well written, but why doesn't Jingjing follow the protagonist? The protagonist is so strong. It's definitely fun to control a strong person through time travel. How many chapters are left and when will it be updated? Update it quickly, hurry up, hurry up. Say the important things three times! [Like][Like][Like]

Super pretty! Better than what I wrote [crying][crying]

After reading the book that starts from scratch for a long time, it feels boring. The author is very creative. He starts with the King of War. It feels like there is a sense of freshness. It is different from the previous feeling of always starting from scratch. The subsequent writing is very good. Keep up the good work.

Chef/Supporting Role Chef is ecstatic, this all-star protagonist looks great! A big tip for readers who haven't read it yet: Be careful with the large number of secondary settings. The protagonist (also called a high-level character) may not appear frequently. Readers who like the kind of invincible and exciting novels where the whole world revolves around the protagonist, please pay attention! In the early stage, I felt that the shots were a bit messy and the lines were too many, but later I gradually understood it, it's very beautiful! Each of the original characters and the secondary characters are very unique. I highly recommend them (eyes closed). After reading the first 300 chapters, I finally realized, why are you, my Crazy Split Ape Marshal, gone (orz)? Oh, why didn't I read for almost 24 hours (touching chin) I feel like this General Jin is a bit slow, but I think it is a bold idea to think that the marshal (brother) is no longer the original marshal, and it fits the character very well. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Jin Shen Wow, every time I see Xie Youhuang resenting the habits brought about by his brotherhood with the Kuangshuang, to being grateful for the trust of Jin Shen, to using his ability to take action after the war... I no longer dare to read on. Worship, worship... I just watched Pseudo Crazy Split Orang Pseudo Aid Advanced Matching, Golden God, I really like him. -----

It's great, it's great, but the update speed is a bit slow. I can only watch one or two episodes every day when I get home.

Although the title of this book is not very good, the content is very good, but the progress is too fast, right? (Personal feeling)╮(╯＿╰)╭

I've only read Adventures, but I've never seen Wu Zhan Dao. There are many names, and I'm not used to them. But I just found it quite interesting. It doesn't seem boring. There are a lot of innovations. Overall, it's pretty good [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's beautiful. It's not easy for the author to write this kind of work. Although it's a bit sketchy, the main plot is very clear and simple to me. Don't let it go unfinished. The main reason is that I'm worried that the author has promised too much and won't be able to take it back. Looking forward to how it will end. Update soon or I will send the author a razor blade, no more than 100 million points. Hey hey hey hey [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The update is too slow, but I like it very much. I hope the author will update it soon! One hundred and six hundred thousand words updated a day! 😘😘😘

The characters are full, the plot is rich and colorful, and there is no brainless invincible writing.

Very good, can't fault it, very exciting I don't want to give a single star later, that's all.

It's okay. The world view is relatively large and has its own creativity, but it tests our memory. I took a screenshot after looking at it for a while, and took a screenshot after looking at it for a while. There is a flaw in this. It should look good in a comic (unfortunately, it will not be a comic).

It's well written. I prefer Martial Arts to The Adventures of Luoluo. After all, the mechas and special effects inside are as good as those in The Adventures of Lolo.

How can I put it, the subject matter is very novel, but the author, do you think that the names of the robots in the motorcycle tribe's field camp are a bit convoluted, without their own style characteristics, and there are too many other quasi-war kings, and their combat power is somewhat broken! The big boss behind the scenes has already appeared, and it is estimated that there are still thirty or forty chapters left, so other types of wolves can come out soon. Finally, I wish the author good luck, the more he writes, the better he will be. Looking forward to the next work.

This book is very interesting. If you like to watch this cartoon, you can read it. It is equivalent to the second book. It is very interesting. It is from a God's perspective. Just like the cartoon, there are many more plots. The people behind the Blue Poison Beast are also gradually appearing.

Big cheers for the author, the rating has been changed from ★★★★ to ★★★★★[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It is considered the best novel among the Adventures of Nono. Is there a female robot in The Adventures of Lolo? Not asking for a female lead, just curious how they increase the population. Very nice

I had read this book a long time ago, but then I stopped reading it. Then I came across this book by chance, and found that it was being updated again, so I started reading it again. Overall, this book is well written. The adventures of Lolo are also childhood memories. Although the author wrote the last part very hastily, it still has a perfect ending.