Located in Wiltshire, England, Malfoy Manor is particularly extraordinary today.
Lucius Malfoy stood in front of a door, walking around very anxiously. Soon there was a cry of a baby from behind the door, and our little master Draco Malfoy was also born into this world.
But what everyone doesn't know is that there is a soul from this world living in this small body of Drake.
When I was 6 years old, I awakened to a video chat cheat. The first time I met Captain Jack, he was tricked into the world of Pirates of the Caribbean. Can you imagine a 6-year-old child being chased by the navy every day under the leadership of Captain Jack?
Starting from the Caribbean and traveling across the world
(In addition, the protagonist is reborn, not taking over his body. He may have been a bit naive when he was a child)
Reader comments
Pirates of the Caribbean is too poorly written. What's the use of the protagonist being a witness? It's of no use at all and the sentences written in the novel don't make sense. It's so uncomfortable to watch. Please don't separate what the next person says from the actions he does next time. When the last person says something, the action is followed by the next person's action and then the next paragraph is what the next person says. How do you let people read this novel? What attracts readers is neither cool novels nor developmental novels, neither infinite flow nor behind-the-scenes novels, daily novels nor romance novels. I don't know what series you belong to. Did you create it first? Then I can say that it is useless at all. If you write it to attract readers, you just read it for yourself. It is uncomfortable to watch and it doesn't take a lot of thinking to watch. You don't have to think about the plot at all. Just looking at your grammar is already very uncomfortable and I can't stand it at all.
It feels a little messy in some places, and even confusing in some places. The subject matter is quite new, and I feel like the world view is too big and I don't have a good grasp of it.
It's so messy that it makes you feel uncomfortable
If you keep working hard to write a novel, just write it well. The plot is too messy and useless.
Pirates of the Caribbean is too poorly written. What's the use of the protagonist being a witness? It's of no use at all and the sentences written in the novel don't make sense. It's so uncomfortable to watch. Please don't separate what the next person says from the actions he does next time. When the last person says something, the action is followed by the next person's action and then the next paragraph is what the next person says. How do you let people read this novel? What attracts readers is neither cool novels nor developmental novels, neither infinite flow nor behind-the-scenes novels, daily novels nor romance novels. I don't know what series you belong to. Did you create it first? Then I can say that it is useless at all. If you write it to attract readers, you just read it for yourself. It is uncomfortable to watch and it doesn't take a lot of thinking to watch. You don't have to think about the plot at all. Just looking at your grammar is already very uncomfortable and I can't stand it at all.
It feels a little messy in some places, and even confusing in some places. The subject matter is quite new, and I feel like the world view is too big and I don't have a good grasp of it.
It's so messy that it makes you feel uncomfortable
If you keep working hard to write a novel, just write it well. The plot is too messy and useless.
A bit missing