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Pirates of the Caribbean is too poorly written. What's the use of the protagonist being a witness? It's of no use at all and the sentences written in the novel don't make sense. It's so uncomfortable to watch. Please don't separate what the next person says from the actions he does next time. When the last person says something, the action is followed by the next person's action and then the next paragraph is what the next person says. How do you let people read this novel? What attracts readers is neither cool novels nor developmental novels, neither infinite flow nor behind-the-scenes novels, daily novels nor romance novels. I don't know what series you belong to. Did you create it first? Then I can say that it is useless at all. If you write it to attract readers, you just read it for yourself. It is uncomfortable to watch and it doesn't take a lot of thinking to watch. You don't have to think about the plot at all. Just looking at your grammar is already very uncomfortable and I can't stand it at all.

It feels a little messy in some places, and even confusing in some places. The subject matter is quite new, and I feel like the world view is too big and I don't have a good grasp of it.

It's so messy that it makes you feel uncomfortable

If you keep working hard to write a novel, just write it well. The plot is too messy and useless.

A bit missing