Akainu******

I've only read Chapter 26, and I can't help but comment. This book made me feel for the first time that Akainu is a human being, not a tethered dog. In the animation, he obviously takes many things into consideration, but all behavioral standards are based on his own justice. I really feel his determination to be a Marine, but he is more like Free America

This book by the author is super nice, the content is unique, and the protagonist Akainu is also my favorite character. I hope it can be published soon. The recently updated pictures are still very nice, so the author keeps up the good work.

A great Akainu fanfic, it's rare to see a pirate novel with a thoughtful character

It's very beautiful. I'll pursue quality and strive for excellence. I hope you will persist as always.

The author of this book is very careful in writing it. Whether it is the mastery and analysis of the background of pirates or the people's hearts in the simulated world, it can be said to be very close to reality. However, this novel feels that it will end after writing 5.60 Million words. As far as the problems discovered so far The first point: Since you can strengthen yourself and gain new understanding every time, why is the frequency of entry so low, even only 3 times in several months? Second point: Whether to overthrow the Tianlong people requires personal strength or the power of the entire navy. This must be grasped carefully, otherwise the combat power system will collapse in the later period. But it is undeniable that this novel is really good. I hope to get good results. Come on

It's so good. I've read the most chapters of the pirate novel so far. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. The author doesn't want eunuchs. , The author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs The author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs The author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs, the author does not want eunuchs,

For those who have read the novel "Lu Bu's Life Simulator", the first world will be a bit uncomfortable. But the author has written his own world since the second world, which is not bad compared to "Lu Bu's Life Simulator". It is also friendly to book lovers who come here because of the simulator title. For book lovers who have not read "Lu Bu's Life Simulator", this first world will make your eyes shine. Looking forward to the quality of the author's subsequent writing. After all, Tomato is just a platform for new authors to practice their skills.

This book is really good to read. The plot structure is good. One person can hold 50 tomatoes.

The book is very good. So far, except for the serious plagiarism in the first simulation, there are no bad points. Oh, by the way, Akainu's strength value of 10,000 is not suitable, at least 40,000. There is no plagiarism in the subsequent simulations. It looks pretty good.

This is the first time I've seen this kind of subject. Except for the Three Kingdoms part, which is a bit draggy, I still like the plot so far. Five-star praise author, please keep updating~\(≧▽≦)/~[Love] Author, have you been kidnapped? Why are you updating so slowly? I'm wondering if these five stars can be given to you in installments. Quick, quick, quick! ! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. [Angry][angry][angry] I don't expect you to be able to update more than a dozen chapters a day, at least once a day. Otherwise, I will forget what the content is as I keep reading. [Cry][cry][cry]

I feel that the fan fiction in Tomato is quite good. The advantage is that the subject matter is relatively novel. It transforms Akainu from a radical image who only executes orders and believes in absolute justice, to a process of gradually becoming a hexagonal warrior through a life simulator. But what may be missing is the foreshadowing and control of the plot of the simulated world. The first role of the first simulated world is probably to suppress Akainu's character and teach him to think differently and deal with things diplomatically. Since the author has said that he learned from Hu Hu, the first reminder of the system in his book is "As a destined loser, are you willing to change." For a proud and conceited Lu Bu, this aroused his curiosity about the system. In this article, in my opinion, Akainu, who entered the system right after the timeline was explained in the first chapter, does not fit his image of being firm and not allowed to be interfered with by external objects. Akainu did not even suspect that a certain Devil Fruit ability user was plotting against him? In the second simulated world, to be honest, the background of space pirates and rebels feels inexplicably disconnected compared to the background of Yuan Ming. What I learned is completely different from the economics I wanted to learn before.

I think this book is quite good, but I don't know why the rating is so low, only 8.4. Maybe it's a bad review. The author guides Akainu to become a true naval marshal step by step. Maybe because of the original work, people don't like the character Akainu very much... Of course, I am the same. But it does not affect my opinion of this book... I highly recommend everyone to read it. I also hope that the author will continue to work hard... Keep writing... But don't let it end.

Very good. The only pirate novel I've read so far, the others are all about harems. I really can't stand the stallion novel anymore. I rely on missing persons to return

It's a good book. The Three Views of Positive Values are also very good, and the analysis is also good. I've almost finished reading and there are still more than ten chapters left. I hope it won't be unfinished. The choice of crops is very good and well-founded. If it is a lightsaber, the pirate world will directly collapse, and the combat power system will collapse directly. Vegapunk can study the energy of the lightsaber and use it more, and give him enough time. Time, it is estimated that it will only take one or three years to wholesale produce meteor cannons if you are new to lightsabers. In science fiction movies, meteor cannons are basically powerful enough to destroy an entire country with one shot. It is absolutely no problem for a province. Based on the size of the planet in science fiction movies, you can analyze some general situations. Then the so-called Pluto can be wholesaled, and it is even stronger.

The style of this book is different from another one I read about Akainu, but it is also very good-looking. The other book is called Pirates of the Rampant Volcano. The author can read it. The style of that book is very good. Well, it is vigorous and resolute. I give it a five-star rating.

The front part is the same as the book at a certain point, but I wrote my own thing at the end. It's still a pretty good book. I hope there are fewer simulation chapters. After all, this is not a hegemony book. It's different from Lu Bu's book. It's better to focus on the world of pirates. I skipped the simulation part.

I feel that the score of this book is low. It is obviously well written. Akainu's character, ideas and changes are all well described, and it does not make people feel stiff. I hope the author will update more soon, otherwise it will not be enough to read.

This is the second well-written book I've read with Akainu as the protagonist, come on! Also, the cover is very cool!

The pacing is spot on, and the whole thing is not good. I can only say that among the pirate novels I have read, one is a general, and the other is very comfortable for me to read. Okay, why did you lose points? .

It's very similar to Lu Bu's Life Simulator, especially the Sims part, but the Pirate World is also worth looking forward to.

It's good-looking and interesting, and Akainu is also interesting! Like Lu Bu Life Simulator, but with Akainu style. Nice! ! ! Why didn't the author write anymore?

The masterpiece in my heart is not as black as that of other fans. [Like] [Like] [Like]

What's not bad about this book is my favorite Akainu fanfic

A very good pirate fan book. The look and feel of the pirate novel is closest to the original character design in recent times. You can clearly feel the author's skills and accumulation. Combined with the novel subject matter and unique style, I believe this novel will shine in the future.

It's very interesting, the pace is moderate, and the subject matter is novel and unique. I hope the author will not give up because of the low ratings. It is normal for the book to be a little low at the beginning, but it will get better and better in the future. Come on! One final compliment, it's really good. It's been five years since I read One Piece. It's a really good book. Come on, author.

Very good, Akainu is the same but different. He constantly improves himself by traveling through different world simulators. Don't be subjective and criticize Akainu. Learn more about Akainu.

The writing is very good, and the character description is very good. It can give you a personal insight into the lives of many people.

Yes, I was amazed even though I have never watched One Piece [Like]

I've read Chapter 49 and it's very much to my taste. Good cheers, author.

Very good, just too little. The plot is very neat and there are no shortcomings for the time being.