As soon as I was born, my grandfather gave me a divination. The horoscopes can defeat my parents, and the numerology can attract Yin and evil spirits. In order to save me, my grandfather did not hesitate to let me step into the Taoist door, and my legendary Yin and Yang journey began...
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Now that I've read it all, let's talk about the advantages first.
The rhythm is good, the dialogue descriptions are vivid, and once the wave is over, the male ghost comes again, and La is looking forward to it. It can be seen from the topic at the beginning of the article and the many Taoist formulas that the author has done his homework.
Disadvantages: The characterization is not good enough, relatively stiff, and there are a few language errors.
Overall it's good, give it five stars.
There are only two bad points: one: it looks too much like a living person, and two: it's too short.
Now that I've read it all, let's talk about the advantages first. The rhythm is good, the dialogue descriptions are vivid, and once the wave is over, the male ghost comes again, and La is looking forward to it. It can be seen from the topic at the beginning of the article and the many Taoist formulas that the author has done his homework. Disadvantages: The characterization is not good enough, relatively stiff, and there are a few language errors. Overall it's good, give it five stars.
There are only two bad points: one: it looks too much like a living person, and two: it's too short.