One Piece: When I Traveled Through Time and Became Luffy, I Was in Charge of the Navy

Not bad! The jokes are moderate, and the empress must stop them! If she feels a little too old, you can ask Ain to make her younger [laughter]

The entry point is quite good. When I was reading the original work, I was thinking about what the ending would be like if Luffy became a marine. I hope you won't write it down. Come on.

The novel is very good, and all the beauties should be included.

Author, can you make this One Piece free from tragedy?

Not bad, I'll give it 4 stars. It's just that the power is a bit messy, and the sound of thunder is a bit redundant. Nika itself already has thunder and fire attributes. Nami is more suitable for Thunder because she has a natural intuition about the weather and is best suited for this kind of weather-type fruit.

I just like fan harem stories like this, come on💪 OK, it must be a five-star review

I just finished reading Chapter 76. According to this plot, Luffy will be arranged by Sengoku to go undercover as a pirate. He will remove the cancer that appears in the later anime one by one. The navy will clean up its butt and tail. Slowly follow the plot and the navy will gradually become independent. Finally, through the final island, it will become completely independent and defeat the world government [top post]

Very nice, don't be a eunuch anymore, the author shouldn't be so short, please work hard to update [Adore][Adore][Adore]

I just came from "This Navy Likes to Kill Manslaughter", and I feel that this one is more humorous and has its own style.

Perfect but a little short

This book is very interesting, with multiple female protagonists, great! Come on, author! [Laughing evilly][like]

I watched it all in one go today. I skipped a few chapters along the way. I wonder if you have picked up the story about the girl who worked as a thief with Nami in the Golden City Movie when she was a child. [Thinking] It's time to keep the rabbits, and you can't miss the Pure Gold movie version. It can extend growth and keep the body like a child for two hundred years. [Thinking] Is she a real legal lolita?

Great Luffy article, no poisonous points so far. Recommended for those who like pirates.

The content of the article is clearly arranged, the subject matter is also very novel, and the author has a lot of imagination. Haha, I hope the author will write a million words a day [get it] [laughing evilly]

It was quite interesting, but it was a pity that it ended before I saw the Empress and Luffy together.

It's very interesting. I hope the final plot will be perfect [Like]

Good book. Ha ha ha ha

What can I say? This book is really good. The only drawback is that there are too many jokes. There are several old and new jokes in one chapter. However, the many female protagonists in the introduction attracted me. [Laughing evilly] I hope you, the author, can include all the girls. [Laughing evilly] If you are a fan of Laohai, there are quite a lot of beauties in it. [Laughing evilly] Do you understand what I mean?

One of the few completed novels in One Piece fics. The plot is quite reasonable. There are no outrageous arrangements or messy original characters like other Pirates fics. It's also enjoyable to read. You can read it. Recommended

Such a beautiful book deserves a five-star rating.

I gave up. Although this novel is an alternative pirate novel, I felt awkward when I saw the navy actually talking to some pirates. There is also a revolutionary army (father-son relationship) and this article is also a harem story (especially if you start from a young age) or others who like this type will like it. After all, as the introduction says, the people who died in the original work have changed! It is also a kind of beauty...

A good book, worth recommending. The author has a good personality, so don't be cowardly. People who have low self-esteem in life will find a sense of presence on the Internet. I hope the author will not be affected by these people. I look forward to your future chapters. Come on, Ollie gives [upvote]

Come on, author Very well written

Brother, write well and don't collapse later.

It's very nice, but can there be more updates?

I've been reading it all night. It's a very good book and it's very in line with my interests. I hope the author can give me a good ending. Thank you [sending my heart]

Highly recommended. It's a new book. The rating is low but the content is very interesting. Please rate it more.

A good pirate novel. The new book has low ratings. Please rate it more and don't let the good books get buried.

First of all, give me a five-star review. I read a part of it before and kept reading it for a while before it was finished. Now that I have finished it, I started watching it again. It is quite funny, a warm harem, and the little loli is so cute. I saw that the author has opened a new book and I have saved it. Please keep updating. By the way, please continue to stick to the harem path in the new book After reading it, overall it is quite enjoyable and the writing is also very good. Although it seems a bit rushed at the end, it is still timely. If it had been longer, the author probably would not be able to write it and the readers will be tired of it. It is considered the first level in Tomato fan fiction.

Why wasn't Kaido's daughter included?