The World of Beast Control: Starting from Manzhushahua

The best beast-controlling text that Tomato has seen so far, there is no brainless use of system evolution and upgrading, and it perfectly expresses the communication, progress and cultivation between pets and beasts. And it is creative. Some of the feature mechanisms in the article are original, and they are not unreasonable, but become powerful through cooperation. The potential and strength are complementary, each pet beast has its own charm, there is no so-called trash fish. If the author can persist, he will be forced to become a god

The writing is quite good. I like the calm protagonist and the step-by-step improvement of the plot. The degree of cheating is also very good. This is no better than the exaggerated styles on the list. Come on, author, give it a thumbs up.

It's very beautiful, and the bond with the elves is great! It's rare to see such beast-controlling stories, but generally they get better and better the more you read them. However, I feel that An Qin's presence is not high, and the bond with the protagonist is more like family. Maybe it is better not to have a female protagonist [Chigua] [Chigua]

It's not overly brainless, nor overly invincible, nor does it have any bloody scenes such as forced emotions or human justice, but it does not neglect the description of emotions😁😁. But after entering the school, Manzhu became the number one so easily, which is a bit puzzling. She said that this kind of elf is not that strong in the early stage. Moreover, the difference in strength between the protagonist's classmates in the same period is a bit too big, and the classmates didn't notice that any of them had a strong background. Really, except for the protagonist, all the ordinary people didn't have any opportunities😅. The combat power system of this book will easily collapse if you don't use the late and mid-term writing in this way. I think that the protagonist's strength gap with his friends is always too large, and there is no other way to maintain the balance of strength among his peers except changing the map. This will make the subsequent writing very weak😅. Also, the division of strength is a little bad. Since we have used data to specifically reflect the five dimensions of the elf's attributes to reflect strength, why do we really only rely on moves during a fight🤨. I always feel like the protagonist doesn't know whether he will win or lose when fighting with others. Without reference, he can only look at the author's skill description. If the author writes that he wins, he wins, and if he writes that he loses, he loses. I hope the author can have more aspects to reflect the gap in hard power in the future. I hope the author will lay down the basics better in the early stages of the book😝, after all, the requirements for writing skills in the middle and later stages of the book are too high. If you write well in the early stage, even if there are loopholes in the middle and later stages, it can be easily corrected. Many great writers are not particularly good at handling the middle and later stages, but they write well because they handle the plot strength so well in the early and middle stages or even the entire middle period😁. I have also written several books because the strength in the early stage was not compared in many aspects, which led to the collapse of the strength system later on. I want to write that the protagonist wins in ten thousand ways, but it is too difficult for me to write that he loses. Come on😊 The protagonist can refer to Luan's pet charm to reflect the strength of the elves, master the elemental crystals, and restrain his own level attributes. Even though his own strength system collapsed later, it can still be used as a reference. After all, there are too few well-written pet novels. In addition, you can also learn his setting of summoning up to five elves. Otherwise, if you recover too much in the later period, wouldn't it be too embarrassing to summon 20 or so of them in one fight [laughs awkwardly].

Very well written! The whole world is very real, a bit like Pokémon, but much more real than Pokémon, while retaining the dreamy feel of Pokémon. The protagonist's elves are all great! I like every one of them so much Originally it looked pretty good at the beginning, but... The back part seemed to turn the younger sister into the heroine. The younger sister thought about conquering the protagonist every day, and even followed the protagonist for a long time. If I had been told that my sister was the heroine, I would have run away. I really can't stand pseudo-orthopedics, so I'll drop one star.

Objectively speaking, this novel is not worthy of five stars. The writing style is okay, but because I am a newcomer, some of the descriptions of the appearance of the elves are not delicate enough and some very vulgar routines are used. Of course, in the outline, plot direction, and settings, it can be seen that the author has put his heart into it, and there are traces of Pokémon, but he also has his own innovations, which are basically slightly better than other novels of the same type.

A pretty good beast-control story. However, I feel that the protagonist's current cheats have no sense of existence. For a type of cheat like the protagonist, I think the author can write a little more about research, such as learning how to make the spiritual seal, or researching several new beast-controlling evolution plans. Although it is also very useful in training beast-controlling, but, if it is just training beast-controlling and fighting, it feels a bit boring. Personal opinion [laughing and crying] author, come on [love] [love] [love]

It's really well written, I hope it doesn't become a eunuch.

I have read too much elf fan fiction, but this original elf must be more attractive. And the plot is okay too. But there are not many words, so I read it in one go. But school starts tomorrow, so let's put the bookshelf first [face covering] The title of the book has changed from "Lord of the Towers" to "Manzhushahua". I want to know whether this initial setting will be lost? Why do I feel like I haven't transitioned to the main plot yet? But this kind of daily life is still very beautiful, don't stop updating [Thinking] [Please update]

This novel is slow-paced. Although it is not like Shuang Wen and Wudi Wen, this novel can be written very well. It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing, and the writing is also very good. I don't want the other writing to be purely superficial, but this novel is very attractive and does not feel redundant or watery. But it is slow-paced after all. In the early stage, there are almost more than 200 pictures, which is still okay. In the middle stage, it will be a little boring. But it's not a big problem. After all, it's slow-paced. If you watch it in the middle and later stages, you will definitely feel bored. It's still okay if you watch it slowly.

I didn't understand the first few chapters, but it started to look good from the seventh chapter. It's great. The names of the elves are well-named. It would be better if there are pictures! ! Come on~ [Sending Hearts]

Come on, I really like this beast-controlling novel! The plot is smooth, and the choice of beasts is also good. I hope there will be more than 6 in the later stage, so that we can see more possibilities. After all, the cooperation between the beasts is also very important. For example, Manzhu Shahua and Hell Demon are very suitable for cooperation, but other partners seem to be more difficult to integrate. I look forward to how the author can improve it. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs! Come on, come on, come on!

It's really good. To be honest, the writing is delicate, and the title is not useless. The framework of the first few chapters may not be clear enough at the beginning. This is a small problem, but the plot is really made up later. I hope this comment can make readers who want to quit at the beginning see it. Thank you, this book is still good.

I finished reading it in one go, and I think it's quite good. Manzhushahua is also very unique. There's nothing particularly invincible or bloody (except for the inexplicable threat at the beginning). The progress is faster and it's not enough.

On Tomato is a very good novel. I followed the author's suggestion and started reading it from Chapter 7. After reading it, I felt like I had been reading it for years. In fact, the framework of the article is quite good. The main chapters after going to college are mainly about Manzhu and Shahua attacking the monarch, Yemo attacking the emperor, Yemeng attacking the emperor, and then Xiaomi bug attacking the saint. I feel that this is also the author's ingenuity, specifically in the order of the contract (Manzhu Shahua first, Yemo second, Yemeng third) and the evolutionary stage (Yemo one section, Yemeng two sections and the impact on the saint) At that time, the protagonist's elves were only millet bugs that still had a chance to evolve) to drive the plot. If you look carefully, you can see that the author has carefully thought about how to write this article. At that time, I thought that the protagonist would be over after reaching the saint, and then came up with a somewhat middle-class and humorous plot of "saving the world" to drive the protagonist to attack the supreme saint and then fight the villain. As I read along, I could feel that the article was about to come to an end, and that there might be a happy ending after defeating the ghostly skeleton. However, I was cautious about the ending because I had learned from the "God's punishment" laid by the author. I also like that the author integrated the biggest gold finger into the daily elf cubes. I really like the way of directly absorbing it without choosing to obtain the treasure. This feeling that the gold finger is not strong but is actually very defiant is actually very strange, because most of the beast-control novels are designed to make the protagonist invincible hahaha, come on, that is really boring, "I can see it "Boy, I can see the evolution route" is a plot where you can directly see the elf's qualifications and skills, evolving towards dragons, phoenixes, golden crows, unicorns and other mythical beasts, and then shock everyone. The plot is much older [laughing and crying]. Of course, everyone's taste is different, and I respect that. But after watching too many similar plots, I feel that the author's writing is a bit "fresh and refined". The protagonist's elves are also very unique. The twin flowers of Manzhushahua, the Lord of Yama Hell, the Jade Rabbit's medicine and poison are of the same origin, the general characteristics of Cangzhu and Cangyan + Red Flame, the long night and the bright night of Xiaoxiao switch forms, the life-destroying thunder and soul-cutting wind disaster of Tianzhu, yes I don't have Tiyemeng, it's not that I think Yemeng's eternal posture is not special. Color, but after Ye Meng evolved into the Eight-Eyed Emperor Armored Snake, the author did not add new characteristics to this snake. In the chapter after the evolution, Ye Meng did not even write a panel introduction [cry] [cry]. In terms of skills, everyone has one or two supermodel skills, but in terms of characteristics, we, Ye Meng, only have one who can change it easily! ! The author even forgot that Yemeng can copy the characteristics of other elves. On the offensive end, Yemeng only has a freely changing giant + collision. If we add the scene of thousands of weapons during Yemeng's evolution assessment and cooperate with the Sealing Sword Formation, our brother Yemeng will not be in a war of attrition! ! Even if it doesn't work, you can still use it by strengthening the metal storm. If you are a good metal type, we won't show it in the form of being beaten. I want to redress the injustice of Brother Yemeng [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] This is my first time writing a long review, I hope the author can read it, and I also want to know if there will be any extras after the end. Dear, if you approve or relatively approve of this book, I hope you can give me a thumbs up after seeing this comment.

It's really good-looking, similar to Pokémon, but I think it's very fresh The more I watch it, the more addictive it becomes. The main reason is that the elf's emotions are so well controlled that it feels like he's come alive. I can't help but love him [lick screen]

Slow-burning, more everyday, relaxed, not recommended for those who like a fast pace. Competition, evolution, training, finding opportunities, carefully cultivating each elf (beast master), and interspersed with villain organizations and other accidents and tasks in the process, it is very interesting to watch.

Not bad, I hope the single heroine feels at ease

It's so good to watch, I just like the non-heroine. I especially like the non-heroine. I beg the author.

I feel that the writing is quite good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The first few chapters are also good. Come on [Like][Like][Like]

This book is very good, and to be honest, I personally feel that in this book, if pets and trainers can achieve 100% trust and understand each other's feelings, it is actually much more reliable than human women. In other words, in fact, for this book, I prefer that the protagonist has a female character rather than having a girlfriend. Humanoid pets are also good as partners or in a harem. After all, they can communicate honestly with each other about everything. This is much better than others. In fact, I don't want to have a human female protagonist.

It feels like it's very in line with my taste, but it's just too little to watch. I feel that this is the best beast-bending novel I have read that suits my preferences, except for Chong Mei.

A very interesting elf novel. It is different from other elf novels. It is slow-paced and the elf advances step by step. There is no such plot as the collapse of combat power. And it will not make you feel that the protagonist is weak, and every battle victory is very reasonable. As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep reading the book. It's been too popular recently. I changed it to three stars and moved it to the north. I said before that if I kept updating, I would keep chasing it, and I was slapped in the face like crazy. Change it to two stars. I have been fighting for so long. I don't dare to think that there will be more water in the future.

It's really good. It's not the kind of mindless novel where the protagonist can see the way of evolution and ignore the special evolution of the race. He can evolve anything. I'm speechless. And it is also very realistic. The evolutionary method is borrowed from the predecessors. Other novels by the predecessors are useless and useless. Moreover, it evolves into the same mythical beast, and there is nothing new at all. This book draws on the mythical beast, but it also has its own characteristics, which is relatively fresh, and the grass type is the main combat power, not an auxiliary. The world view is also relatively grand and clear, and it does not give people the feeling of being in the rain and fog. Although it will make it a bit dull, it is very comfortable to read and makes people want to keep reading. It's worth reading if you don't want to read Shuangwen.

To be honest, in the previous chapters, it can be called the best beast-control novel in history, but I don't know when the battle plot started to become more and more complicated, and the relationship between the characters began to become messy. I feel that the author has begun to change. I don't know what happened. I hope the author can return to the style at the beginning, so that it will not only have a 9.0 Score, and even the last comment will be gone. In short, I hope the author will get better and better.

The book is quite interesting. It is a kind of beast-control novel that is different from other styles and themes. The protagonist has strength and brains, is a bit realistic, and has wins and losses. The only thing I don't like is the possible heroine An Qin. The sister turning into a wife is a surprise. It won't be a reunion, my lover, or something like that? Putting aside the emotional line, the rest of the writing is very good and there is nothing wrong with it. It depends on who the heroine is in the future (I don't support An Qin) (suggestion)

It's okay. This is the first beast-controlling novel I've read. I have a complaint: many settings in the book were written and supplemented at the same time, which made it a bit awkward to read. Especially the original twins of the protagonist's elf group are a bit b-blocked, but the setting is said to be bad, and the protagonist's dog is even more heavyweight. The protagonist's resource acquisition is also a mess, and then there are some plot problems. There are too many adventure plots and many adventures. The advantage of this book is that there are enough words to read, except for the above ones, it is still good [face covering] I will continue to read, hoping it will be more exciting, and I will read the third volume soon.

It's really good-looking, but when the protagonist fights with others, he always expresses how strong the opponent is, and then reaffirms the opponent's strength by describing the protagonist's inner activities. This often causes the protagonist to appear weak, and the result is that when the protagonist wins, it will give people a strange feeling. The writing is indeed good, but it's just too watery, and I feel that the sister is the biggest flaw of the book.

_First of all, I really like the names the author gave to the elves in this book, unlike other novels where he randomly chooses names. Then, the plot is very coherent and not procrastinating. Some things jump directly to a month later, which is very good. Then, I feel that this book is one of the best beast-controlling novels I have seen on Tomato. If you want to try reading beast-controlling novels, you can start it.

The author's writing is very beautiful, and some parts are very attractive, but the emotional line feels weird. It means you can get away from it in no time, so whether there is a female protagonist or not, I personally hope there won't be a female protagonist, but as long as you write it well, I can accept it. Sorry, sorry, I have always read non-CP, single strong articles. If the heroine is really a younger sister, then I hope the author won't make her too petite or too squeamish, and just make her a strong character. I beg you, your pictures are really in line with my taste, and then you wrote so much, which saved my book shortage. I beg you, don't use Eunuch, it's really beautiful. ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧