Beast Taming World: Beginning with the Red Spider Lily

The best beast-controlling text that Tomato has seen so far, there is no brainless use of system evolution and upgrading, and it perfectly expresses the communication, progress and cultivation between pets and beasts. And it is creative. Some of the feature mechanisms in the article are original, and they are not unreasonable, but become powerful through cooperation. The potential and strength are complementary, each pet beast has its own charm, there is no so-called trash fish. If the author can persist, he will be forced to become a god

It's very beautiful, and the bond with the elves is great! It's rare to see such beast-controlling stories, but generally they get better and better the more you read them. However, I feel that An Qin's presence is not high, and the bond with the protagonist is more like family. Maybe it is better not to have a female protagonist [Chigua] [Chigua]

The writing is quite good. I like the calm protagonist and the step-by-step improvement of the plot. The degree of cheating is also very good. This is no better than the exaggerated styles on the list. Come on, author, give it a thumbs up.

It's not overly brainless, nor overly invincible, nor does it have any bloody scenes such as forced emotions or human justice, but it does not neglect the description of emotions😁😁. But after entering the school, Manzhu became the number one so easily, which is a bit puzzling. She said that this kind of elf is not that strong in the early stage. Moreover, the difference in strength between the protagonist's classmates in the same period is a bit too big, and the classmates didn't notice that any of them had a strong background. Really, except for the protagonist, all the ordinary people didn't have any opportunities😅. The combat power system of this book will easily collapse if you don't use the late and mid-term writing in this way. I think that the protagonist's strength gap with his friends is always too large, and there is no other way to maintain the balance of strength among his peers except changing the map. This will make the subsequent writing very weak😅. Also, the division of strength is a little bad. Since we have used data to specifically reflect the five dimensions of the elf's attributes to reflect strength, why do we really only rely on moves during a fight🤨. I always feel like the protagonist doesn't know whether he will win or lose when fighting with others. Without reference, he can only look at the author's skill description. If the author writes that he wins, he wins, and if he writes that he loses, he loses. I hope the author can have more aspects to reflect the gap in hard power in the future. I hope the author will lay down the basics better in the early stages of the book😝, after all, the requirements for writing skills in the middle and later stages of the book are too high. If you write well in the early stage, even if there are loopholes in the middle and later stages, it can be easily corrected. Many great writers are not particularly good at handling the middle and later stages, but they write well because they handle the plot strength so well in the early and middle stages or even the entire middle period😁. I have also written several books because the strength in the early stage was not compared in many aspects, which led to the collapse of the strength system later on. I want to write that the protagonist wins in ten thousand ways, but it is too difficult for me to write that he loses. Come on😊 The protagonist can refer to Luan's pet charm to reflect the strength of the elves, master the elemental crystals, and restrain his own level attributes. Even though his own strength system collapsed later, it can still be used as a reference. After all, there are too few well-written pet novels. In addition, you can also learn his setting of summoning up to five elves. Otherwise, if you recover too much in the later period, wouldn't it be too embarrassing to summon 20 or so of them in one fight [laughs awkwardly].

Very well written! The whole world is very real, a bit like Pokémon, but much more real than Pokémon, while retaining the dreamy feel of Pokémon. The protagonist's elves are all great! I like every one of them so much Originally it looked pretty good at the beginning, but... The back part seemed to turn the younger sister into the heroine. The younger sister thought about conquering the protagonist every day, and even followed the protagonist for a long time. If I had been told that my sister was the heroine, I would have run away. I really can't stand pseudo-orthopedics, so I'll drop one star.

Objectively speaking, this novel is not worthy of five stars. The writing style is okay, but because I am a newcomer, some of the descriptions of the appearance of the elves are not delicate enough and some very vulgar routines are used. Of course, in the outline, plot direction, and settings, it can be seen that the author has put his heart into it, and there are traces of Pokémon, but he also has his own innovations, which are basically slightly better than other novels of the same type.

A pretty good beast-control story. However, I feel that the protagonist's current cheats have no sense of existence. For a type of cheat like the protagonist, I think the author can write a little more about research, such as learning how to make the spiritual seal, or researching several new beast-controlling evolution plans. Although it is also very useful in training beast-controlling, but, if it is just training beast-controlling and fighting, it feels a bit boring. Personal opinion [laughing and crying] author, come on [love] [love] [love]

I have read too much elf fan fiction, but this original elf must be more attractive. And the plot is okay too. But there are not many words, so I read it in one go. But school starts tomorrow, so let's put the bookshelf first [face covering] The title of the book has changed from "Lord of the Towers" to "Manzhushahua". I want to know whether this initial setting will be lost? Why do I feel like I haven't transitioned to the main plot yet? But this kind of daily life is still very beautiful, don't stop updating [Thinking] [Please update]

It's really well written, I hope it doesn't become a eunuch.

This novel is slow-paced. Although it is not like Shuang Wen and Wudi Wen, this novel can be written very well. It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing, and the writing is also very good. I don't want the other writing to be purely superficial, but this novel is very attractive and does not feel redundant or watery. But it is slow-paced after all. In the early stage, there are almost more than 200 pictures, which is still okay. In the middle stage, it will be a little boring. But it's not a big problem. After all, it's slow-paced. If you watch it in the middle and later stages, you will definitely feel bored. It's still okay if you watch it slowly.