I Was Doing Business in Another World and Was Discovered by the Country

It is written by a very good author. It takes into account the role of the protagonist and the country. I have read this type of novel before, but many of them are about the protagonist alone. There is no novelty and not enough atmosphere. The author's writing is really the best I have ever read in this type. However, the author can consider writing more from the perspective of other characters. It feels more realistic. Other novels are too empty and I haven't read them much. So let the author continue to work hard and not strive for more and more refinement. Of course, more and more refined is better. I will give it a 5-star review.

I thought it was a cliché routine, but it didn't collapse in combat power. It was very real. It's really nice to have the support of the country. I support it and keep working hard.

It's been a long time since I've seen the characters in fantasy novels, elves, titans, angels, goblins, magicians. There is also Traveling with a Country to Another World, which is a comprehensive novel and quite interesting.

A very interesting novel. Although it seems childish in some places, it is really enjoyable.

I read the comments in the comment section. I think it doesn't matter. Everyone's aesthetics and preferences are different. Anyway, I just like to read it.

Most people may not like the plot at the beginning of this book. After all, human beings are greedy, possessive, and aggressive, so there are many negative reviews. The more you read, the more exciting it becomes... It is recommended to turn on the audio to listen! To a certain extent, making things bigger and being discovered by the state is a plot that most people expect, such as being caught, being confronted and confessing, etc., But it must be in line with the theme of education! It complies with the national review system, mainly due to the rapid development of science and technology. The power of monitoring big data is that you don't know or understand it! The Galaxy Sky Network is magnificent, sparse but not missing! Only Brother Zhou Zhoubai understands the power of it! Instead of struggling, it is better to be an ordinary ignorant commoner, selling gems and fruit wine. The discovery of "clues" fully illustrates the soundness and strength of the country! This is the beginning of establishing a relationship link with the country! There is a saying that there is no airtight wall in the world!

It's exciting, imaginative, and the main character seems a bit silly.

It's a very good different world story. Pig's feet are the key factor connecting the worlds. It's not brainless, but it's not too exaggerated. The motherland is our backing. The writing is very addictive, I hope the author will keep writing! ! ! 5 Star review.

Personally, I think this book is definitely one of the best novels. Although it seems to be a bit of speculation at the beginning, the more you see it, the more exciting it becomes and the more you can't bear to let it go. The author's ideas are refreshing and the structure of the work is very exquisite.

Personally, I think that when looking for books and novels that you like, you should first look at the setting, and then whether the content conforms to your own three views. One of the previous comments is particularly correct. If you read it with everyone living in peace and being kind, you will find that this book is very good.

In terms of character creation, although it still seems a bit simple, the protagonist and character traits have been basically created. Some other more important supporting roles need to be enriched. Even so, it already accounts for more than 80% of online articles. The story structure is a bit simple. Maybe the author just wants the protagonist to be the key to the door. Basically, it is to open a door to time and space. After establishing basic contact and trust with the aborigines of the new time and space, the rest will be left to the state. In fact, there are many things that can be created after opening the door, such as the new civilization encountered is not friendly, the protagonist is in danger when he comes up, the new world is a primitive planet where civilization has not yet appeared, the new world is an abandoned planet where the civilization has become extinct or is about to become extinct, etc. There is also a lot that can be created between the new world, such as how to communicate and build trust with indigenous civilizations, conflicts, wars, reconciliation, exchanges, construction, conquest, integration, etc. With indigenous civilizations, all of which the protagonist can participate in. Although the author may only want the protagonist to be a tool man and a key man, the usage and purpose of the key are not necessarily fixed. Let's talk about what seems to be a problem. The first imperial world the protagonist visited was later named the World of Morning Star. This world is very much like a colander, with time and space gates everywhere. It depends on whether you step on them when playing Minesweeper. I feel that Daystar should be a world similar to a transportation hub, so national-level policies will never be as simple as just guarding each space-time gate. It should be exploration, conquest, and control. This is the logical and reasonable strategy responsible for national security. Let me talk about a few areas where I think there are problems. Putting aside the random random travel of the protagonist, according to the author's setting, the space-time gate should be at a fixed location, so the space-time gate on Wasteland Alpha should also be at a fixed location. However, in the article, the location where the protagonist is waiting for support to open the door is not in Red Moon City. This is inconsistent with the previous setting rules about the time and space gate. The author must have forgotten the setting and made it messy. Although the reason or principle of the protagonist being able to open the time and space gate has not been explained, the skill has also been arranged to allow him to travel through time and space at any time and at any time without having to use a fixed location of the time and space gate. That's okay, but the rules for each time you travel are not fixed. From the Empire in the Morning Star to the Ancient Dragon Kingdom, people and objects within a certain range can be teleported together; when the Venus goes to the native earth, the protagonist can only teleport without bringing anything; from the Flying Dragon Valley on the Beast Ear Girl to the wilderness roadside on the Wasteland Alpha Planet, the protagonist can bring things (dragon eggs) to be teleported again; when the Wasteland Alpha goes to the Morning Star or the native Earth, he can only bring things but not people. In short, it's just random dressing with no fixed rules. As for the various scientific and unscientific things, I won't talk about it. Just have fun reading casual online articles, don't take it seriously. Finally, I personally feel that it is a good online article and worth reading. I hope the author can keep up his efforts and write better and better.

The book is very good, but why are there so many people who hate the country in the comment area when it comes to government officials? It's always a conspiracy theory

I have been looking for novels with this theme by the author, and I always find them. I think the protagonist is a little transparent. If it is to highlight the power of the country, there is no need to hide the protagonist. I remember that there used to be a fan called (GATE Fantasy Self-Defense Force) where the author could go and read it. There was a relationship between the protagonist team and the country. If you are interested in being an individual, you can check out (Knights & Magic) where the main character develops alone. This is my little advice to the author, and don't be a eunuch, come on! ! ! ! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Not bad, there are no big bad points, and the protagonist and supporting characters are not brainless. I like the subject very much. The only drawback is that the updates are very slow [face covering] It's too uncomfortable to keep up with the updates.

Fine. There's no crazy cheat. Unlike others that cooperate with the state and restore the entire system. Pure and innocent

Well written! Hurry up and write more [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

The subject matter is very good, but the author's skill is a bit uncomfortable to read😔. It's good to read if you haven't read this kind of subject matter. I hope someone can write about this subject matter well.

It can be felt that the author's writing style and arrangement of the story are relatively unfamiliar, but the imagination and ideas of this novel are very attractive. I believe that the author will be able to write quite good works after he becomes more proficient.

I really like the setting of your book. After ordinary people have special abilities, to be honest, most of them will be like Zhou Yibai. Many authors immediately put the protagonist on a high level and think that everything is simple. This is unreasonable. You are doing very well, growing little by little.

Good book, but there are a lot of 1450 and haters of the Kuomintang in the comment area

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. It's still a good book, and the plot setting is okay. (I worked as a farmer, but basically gave up on it when we got to the war. As I got older, I wanted to eat something light.) The demining is completed, the writing is average, the plot is okay, the pig's feet character design is a bit dull, and there is nothing wrong with the overall treatment. I hope it will not collapse in the future and the quality and quantity will be maintained.

This book has the flavor of the anime "Fantasy Self-Defense Forces GATA". Moreover, many content worldviews refer to the world background of the game "Heroes of Might and Magic" series. The rhythm of the book and the advancement of the plot can be seen in the "Handbook of Conquest of Different Worlds". Real-world technology and the weakened Western fantasy world are connected, technology, lifestyle, concept confrontation, peace and war

The background of the story is huge. Many of the designs are interesting, and the characters are also interesting, but as a novel, the contradictions and conflicts are not intense enough. But I think this is good. Too many novels have ordinary settings and rely on writing. It looks more boring and empty.

I give you a five-star review. It's a very good novel. It kills more than 95% of the novels in seconds. The writing style is very good. It doesn't delay the plot and the word count is not bad. These two items definitely kill other novels in seconds. One of the few good novels

It feels very good. Although the subject matter is old, the content is rich. The important thing is that the perspective must be good. As an ordinary person but not ordinary, there is no need to worry about being king and hegemony. The logic is also quite smooth. There is a small problem. One of the protagonist's strengths is language ability. Although the "wisdom tree" in Angel Village was recently destroyed, it is still there in other villages. After so long, the country should send some people to activate this special ability.

Sorry, I personally prefer military protagonists with serious personalities and toughness, but I don't really like those who are aloof from the world. In other words, they have advantages, but they don't suit my taste.

The author is awesome. It's the first time I read a science fiction novel. It's a bit shocking. It's such a big scene. It's much more enjoyable than time-travel novels. When I read those time-travel stories, I become a fucking businessman or a harem scumbag. The more I read, the angrier I became. Finally, I couldn't stand it anymore.

Very pretty. Good well

The logic is still good, but there is still a big pit behind it. The author decided too early, otherwise he should have a chance to become a god! This is the only science fiction novel I've read this year that didn't make me feel cliche and kept me interested in reading it!

This book is very reasonable, non-toxic and comfortable to eat. What is commendable is that it makes readers feel deeply involved. Ordinary people don't have so many protagonists like Long Aotian. Most people, like the protagonist in this book, are happy to make a small amount of money, and then they just snap their fingers with their own passion as much as they can.