Pirate************

It's pretty, but it's a bit sparse, so I need to keep it up.

So pretty! Invincible Liu, the setting is great! Although the plot may move forward in a situation where it has been crushed, it doesn't matter. The protagonists and their different abilities are very exciting.

I gave it 4 stars. After all, the author is a novice. It is still worthy of encouragement. There is no Luchi in Naruto because he has to do tasks. You asked how Luchi can be a ninja, but he can't find the place to do the tasks. Moreover, Tobirama is one of the few perceptive ninjas. He was reincarnated by Orochimaru in front of Sasuke, which was clearly stated. He could feel the Hashirama cells on Orochimaru's body and the huge chakra fighting in the distance.

It's such an interesting setting. The ability props in various comics are added to the plot without affecting too much. It also adds a lot of potential, strength and various tricks to the various protagonist team members. After the magic has changed some settings, I feel that the plot is going very smoothly. But after seeing the latest update, I suddenly discovered one thing. Almost all the members who gained abilities through comics rarely use props and abilities, and their appearances are too few.

OK, very good, you can continue

There's no need to be afraid of Nami! After all, she was the one asking for help, not to mention she hadn't completely returned to the team yet. It is impossible to obtain

Come on, author, it's your first time writing a book, and you must stick to it.

There aren't many boats that I like to see anymore.

So pretty, but a little lacking

Looks good, looks good, come on!

Good luck to the author!

The author can consider teaching Nami a lesson. I'm afraid that the protagonist manga artist will be pushed to death by Nami before he reaches the new world! A very humble suggestion! .