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From the beginning of reading this book, I felt that it was very plain and not very interesting, and the heroine appeared too little, especially in the first world. Maybe the author wanted to write about film and television, and just wanted to make up for the regretful parts of the play. But the author also forgot that this book is based on the heroine Chen Yuanlin. The protagonist does not appear in as many scenes as the supporting roles, and the protagonist and the supporting role are reversed. Such a result is not what readers want to see. Here are some suggestions for authors: 1. When writing plots, bring in more emotion so that the article doesn't seem like vernacular. 2. I hope that Chen Yuanlin's appearances can increase and she can truly play her role as a heroine. The author also has enough advantages in writing this book. For example, the author has essentially made the bad things in the original plot better, which is also the original intention of this book. The plot is written quickly and is easy to understand, so that readers will not feel that the number of chapters in a world is too long and abandon the text. After reading the comments, I summarized it. Everyone thinks that the most important problem with this novel is that it is too vernacular. The writing style needs to be refined, so the author also needs support.

I like this novel, but I have no love brain

I like to watch movies and TV shows, but the writing and plots are not rich and vivid enough. From an outsider's perspective, it may seem cold and lacking in emotion. I think: I have to put my own true emotions into them, as if they exist in the real world, and the real world will be more fascinating. I hope the author will continue to make further progress! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Great author, please come on [sending heartfelt wishes]

Come on! Work hard to update the article. (ง ᴛ ʏ ᴛ)งCome on. (ﾉ=>王<=)ﾉ Cute tiger attacks

Five-star review first. Let me talk about my feelings about reading the book. The first point is that the heroine has a low sense of presence. I feel that most of the writing is just some descriptions of bystanders. I hope that the heroine has more presence and not be written like a running account, or there is almost no difference from the original drama. The second point is that the name of the heroine is a bit gender-neutral. The situation of separation is not bad, but sometimes it is unclear. Thirdly, I don't think that the heroine is omnipotent or anything, but since you want to change the original ending, don't wait too long. I have been struggling with the villain for a long time. It is clean and crisp. In the end, come on, author ^0＾~

Females should be more involved

Is it okay to write about magic next? [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart]

I hope the book will be read by many people

The heroine story, the quick travel story, the system story.

Very good book, thank you to the author

The writing is very good. Xiangmi, Sansheng III, Immortal Sword III, Splendid Weiyang... Make me look forward to Shanhe Ling more and more.

I think it's okay, author, keep up the good work

It looks good. It would be great if the heroine has CP.

It's beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

Can the author write about Qiangu Juechen? ? ? ? ?

I really want to see a world where the male protagonist is so good-looking, so that I won't get tired of watching it. The female protagonist also needs the male protagonist to accompany her when she is pursuing her career. Hehe [smirk] [smirk]

It's very pretty, but I always think of the name as a male [facepalm]

Want to watch The Legend of the Condor Heroes

Can the author write a new version?

Very beautiful. Love it. Love it.

I just like to listen to all kinds of stories

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

Can the author change the ending of Tuoba Yu? He became like this because he was abused as a child.