An ordinary young man in the 21st century traveled to the parallel world of Pokémon.
He originally thought that he could have a golden finger like many time-travelers, but it turned out that he thought too much.
Practice again and again
grow step by step
. . . . .
No system, no invincibility. Slow pace.
Reader comments
It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, so any suggestions from everyone will be adopted. The protagonist may be a little weaker in the early stage. I want to write the protagonist from 0 to gradually become stronger.
I estimate that the word count for this novel will be several million words, and I will write it as long as a few people read it.
As a new writer, I think the writing is pretty good. It is very in line with the mentality of real people. It is not the kind of article that will blow up the world immediately. The world view is very huge, but the writing at the beginning is a bit hasty, which may have something to do with the number of viewers and comments. The writing of combat is not satisfactory, most of it is written in passing, and the description of cultivation is also pitiful. Most of the plots are about mythical beasts, which makes the protagonist's elf presence very small. This is what I said earlier that the writing is too hasty. Overall, the view of time is exciting enough, with a lot of obvious foreshadowing. I hope the author will slow down the pace of the text and not be too hasty, let alone eunuch!
Give Shaggy a better ending, don't just forget about it.
I still support it, but if Eevee evolves into Leaf Eevee, shouldn't it be possible to level up and evolve near mossy rocks? Ice Eevee also seems to level up and evolve near rocks covered with ice, right?
It's pretty good, I don't feel invincible, and it's pretty fast to recover the elves.
Although I don't really like the protagonist who is too weak, I do like to watch slow-burning stories. However, after so many chapters, the protagonist still has too few skills. But I still look forward to the protagonist becoming stronger. Come on!
Great writing, keep up the good work, author!
The writing is quite good, it's not a mindless novel. The protagonist is in line with the changes of normal people after time travel, but it's a bit missing. The author will continue to work hard and make more updates! 🤗
In addition to improving the qualifications of elves after evolving, can elves continue to improve their qualifications later?
It's not bad, but the protagonist feels too frustrated. Keep up the good work (*˘˘*). .:*♡
Also, I hope there will be no female protagonist and no cp
I saw 80 photos, I can accept them, they look good
This book is quite good, the characters have distinct personalities and have their own characteristics [please update]
The front looks good... High-level villains are flying around in the middle... The protagonist's elf is still at level ten or twenty, and the enemy is at least a king...
It's not bad. It doesn't start with La Lu La Si or Yu San Jia. It's a bit strange. Apart from a few minor bugs in the setting, it's still pretty good.
Come on, new author, I hope you can write better and better (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on
Good books don't need reviews, right?
Good, good, good
Still pretty good
Really a great book
Come on, I hope it will get better and better [Love] It's also pretty good-looking!! [Love] [Admiration]
It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, so any suggestions from everyone will be adopted. The protagonist may be a little weaker in the early stage. I want to write the protagonist from 0 to gradually become stronger. I estimate that the word count for this novel will be several million words, and I will write it as long as a few people read it.
As a new writer, I think the writing is pretty good. It is very in line with the mentality of real people. It is not the kind of article that will blow up the world immediately. The world view is very huge, but the writing at the beginning is a bit hasty, which may have something to do with the number of viewers and comments. The writing of combat is not satisfactory, most of it is written in passing, and the description of cultivation is also pitiful. Most of the plots are about mythical beasts, which makes the protagonist's elf presence very small. This is what I said earlier that the writing is too hasty. Overall, the view of time is exciting enough, with a lot of obvious foreshadowing. I hope the author will slow down the pace of the text and not be too hasty, let alone eunuch! Give Shaggy a better ending, don't just forget about it.
I still support it, but if Eevee evolves into Leaf Eevee, shouldn't it be possible to level up and evolve near mossy rocks? Ice Eevee also seems to level up and evolve near rocks covered with ice, right?
It's pretty good, I don't feel invincible, and it's pretty fast to recover the elves.
Although I don't really like the protagonist who is too weak, I do like to watch slow-burning stories. However, after so many chapters, the protagonist still has too few skills. But I still look forward to the protagonist becoming stronger. Come on!
Great writing, keep up the good work, author!
The writing is quite good, it's not a mindless novel. The protagonist is in line with the changes of normal people after time travel, but it's a bit missing. The author will continue to work hard and make more updates! 🤗
In addition to improving the qualifications of elves after evolving, can elves continue to improve their qualifications later?
It's not bad, but the protagonist feels too frustrated. Keep up the good work (*˘˘*). .:*♡ Also, I hope there will be no female protagonist and no cp
I saw 80 photos, I can accept them, they look good
This book is quite good, the characters have distinct personalities and have their own characteristics [please update]
The front looks good... High-level villains are flying around in the middle... The protagonist's elf is still at level ten or twenty, and the enemy is at least a king...
It's not bad. It doesn't start with La Lu La Si or Yu San Jia. It's a bit strange. Apart from a few minor bugs in the setting, it's still pretty good.
Come on, new author, I hope you can write better and better (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on
Good books don't need reviews, right?
Good, good, good
Still pretty good
Really a great book
Come on, I hope it will get better and better [Love] It's also pretty good-looking!! [Love] [Admiration]