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Overall, I don't see any major drawbacks now. What I like most about this article is that there is no deliberate whitewashing of Tom and Dumbledore's plot. As a not-so-experienced HP fan reader, the stories I have seen with Riddle as CP can be roughly divided into the following categories: 1. Brother and sister orthopedics 2. Riddle changes his nature and caters to the heroine (a strong female novel) 3. The double strength of the heroine Riddle (pull) 4. Riddle's nature remains unchanged, and the heroine is the firm choicer Among them, I think 4 is the most difficult type to write (for me, who has written HP fanfiction). The heroine of this type of novel is easily labeled as a "dog licker". Therefore, the best thing about writing 4 is to clearly explain why the heroine firmly chooses the inferior Riddle and describe Riddle's complex perception of the heroine (possessiveness, interests, etc.) That is not just about love. Although the author briefly mentioned the former when describing the former (please point out if I missed it), which made the heroine's contact with Riddell seem a bit abrupt in my opinion, but the plot and emotions were handled very well. The ending of the "Sun Generations" extra chapter was very attractive to me. This is also the reason why I can continue to watch the novel after Riddell's CP literary shortage for a long time. Finally, I hope the author will not cheat and encourage the author to update! ! (Looking at the pace, it should be a long article) is a new book with potential

It's a very good book. The author has a good handle on Tom's character. He is like a bewitching male demon who can be called a stunner in the wizarding world. 👍Tom understands Lilia so well, so no matter what unforgivable things he does, Lilia will forgive him, and he will try to lower her down with a little sweetness from time to time. Ya's bottom line, whenever the heroine is confused by Tom again, I have a feeling of powerlessness that I can't put my mouth into the screen and shout to the heroine to wake up. In addition, I praise some ambiguous small movements and small pulling descriptions, including but not limited to poking Tom's waist, touching the collarbone, touching the neck... I feel Xingyu is high after watching it (throwing my crotch) Finally, there is the question of whether Tom really loves the heroine. After reading all the chapters so far, I think he does, but he is sick (? All in all, I really like this book. After reading more than 100 chapters, I am still unsatisfied. My only regret is that it is not finished😢

Oh my God, it's so exciting and I love it! ! The plot is well conceived, and I really like the gentle and kind-hearted Lilia. Tom in particular is paranoid and crazy. And Lilia did not lose her true nature because of her liking for Tom. I really like them! ! The plot is also really attractive, better than most Tomato novels. I just hope that the author will update it soon. Please [love] [love] [admiration] Why is such a good book not popular?

Ahhhhhhh it's so beautiful! This is definitely one of the best books I've ever read! Recommended recommended recommended!

Damn, I really want to see it! But the heroine is too humble. Tom doesn't believe the heroine every time. When the heroine doesn't believe him, he says "You don't believe me?" And the heroine is at a loss. He snubbed the heroine for no reason, but after a kiss, the heroine said, "He must have his reasons." Every time, the heroine comforts herself [almost crying], woo woo woo

Tom's fanfic is really the best one I have ever read, and I feel that the two of them are very successful in their character creation, and their interaction really makes me laugh every time. If it is a fanfic of Tom, this is really a super recommendation. I want to give it to my heart, but the author stopped updating it, which is a bit sad💔

Really super exciting

Big cheers for the author!

It's really beautiful

It looks good, but it's a bit lacking [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

As far as I can see, Tom has no OOC, but the heroine showed me an unknown fire. Although Tom has a very charming personality, he can't be like this. I don't see why the heroine likes him and always obeys him. . Love-minded enough

Is this a behemoth? Suddenly I didn't dare to look. But I really love you

Very nice! ! (~￣▽￣)~But! Great author! ! Update soon! ! ! ! ! (￣へ￣)

It's really good-looking

I really enjoyed reading it and it was so well written.

Very good, very detailed writing, author, come on (´-ω-`)

The interaction between the two is very sweet. I like the heroine's character, she is brave, warm and tough. Wherever you arrive, it will be warm and sunny, suitable for taking a nap.