City: Masked Travel

If you don't know how to write, don't write. If you really can't do it, find a job in a factory.

It's really a bit messy

I really don't understand

Come on, author

You write a Hammer novel

Not bad Author, you have written a world view that is too big. The plot is pretty good and can be praised well, but to be honest, the fact that your protagonist is hypnotized is a bit strange. Although it is not an invincible system, at least the system should be able to relieve certain confusions. Most of the systems are auxiliary to the protagonist. It is impossible to even remove the confusion. Also, your writing is a bit messy. Although as an old bookworm, I understand most of it, but it is a bit too difficult for some newcomers.

The author wanted it himself

I really don't understand

It looks okay from the beginning, but what the hell is going on in Chapter 30 and beyond?

Is the writing too messy? And this is the first time I've seen a novel in which the main character is controlled? I can't understand the timeline, it's so confusing

You've made the world view too big, and I'm completely confused before you explain it. Didn't you suspect that the hero's empty belt was taken away? Or should we investigate?

The protagonist and the system are both terrible. He was actually being controlled tightly by a girl from behind.