Ultra: Road to Redemption

Taboos in fan fiction writing... First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be omitted, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, enemy and enemy, and other multi-angle story plots. You can also make appropriate modifications or extensions to the original story plot. But you must also pay attention to moderation, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes do not go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. No. 6. Can withstand abuse and stick to principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, so you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and release packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, the chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. Fifteenth, try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

It would be better if the author could update it faster [laughing] I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, but after a second thought I decided to give it 5 stars. Cheers to the author.

I'm in chemistry class and there's not enough water in the cup The chemistry teacher said: Add drop by drop So the chemistry teacher became the light Since the teacher is gone, the alcohol burns up My deskmate yelled: Cover it, cover it! So my deskmate also became the light The monitor yelled: Oh no The monitor also became the light The students are in a mess, where is the water? The class representative said: In the cup The class representative fell into darkness At this time the principal came and I asked him how many people were left? He said: seven The principal also became the light The teacher next door shouted: Don't move, stay there The teacher next door also became the light Damn it! (Although this review is only 2 words long, its grammar is rigorous, its wording is neat, its structure is clever, and it is catchy. It can be said to be concise and concise, which shows the reviewer's solid writing skills, as well as his creative writing skills and brutal creativity. In addition, it ends with an exclamation mark. It is really a magic touch and has the finishing touch. It is really the best choice for reviews. The first of all reviews, damn! Although this review is only 2 words long, its grammar is rigorous, its wording is neat, its structure is clever, and it is catchy. It can be said to be concise and concise, which shows that the reviewer has solid writing skills. The writing skills, the ability to twist and turn the writing skills and the brutal creativity, coupled with the exclamation point at the end, are really a magic touch, have the finishing touch effect, and are really the best choice for reviews. The first among thousands of reviews, damn! Although this review is only 2 words long, its grammar is rigorous, its wording is neat, its structure is clever, and it is catchy. It can be said to be concise and concise, which shows that the reviewer has a solid writing skills, as well as his creative writing skills and brutal creativity. In addition, it ends with an exclamation mark. It is really a stroke of genius and has the finishing touch. It is really the best choice for reviews.) Wo is pronounced three times and cao is pronounced four times to express anger; Wo is pronounced in four tones and cao is pronounced in four tones to express exclamation; Pronounced "wo" and "cao" to express contempt; Wo is pronounced four times and cao is pronounced two to express doubt; "Wo" is pronounced four times, "cao" is pronounced softly, which means to be startled; "Wo" is read softly and "cao" is read four times to express appreciation. However, I am uneducated and can travel the world with just one word.

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This book appeals to my taste in general terms I really don't understand. I read it again and most of them are five stars. Why are the ratings so low?

For the time being, trying the poison, overall it's good. Finally, I don't want to watch Otwin with a female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. Because that is basically a harem article criticizing Otepi, which is the most annoying thing.

I personally think this book is very well written, and the writing is also very good for me. I feel like it could be made into a TV series, a proper text-based TV series.

This book about Nexus is the best one besides Super Ultra Biography. What is a hero? This is called a hero! At first glance, the protagonist only acts for revenge. Later, he develops the bond between himself and his students, the bond between his comrades, and the bond between humans and Ultra Warriors. Even if he is seriously injured, he must protect the students and deal with the alien beasts; he must not be afraid of being devoured by Griza but still fight for eight hours for humanity. This is the real hero, the hero named Nexus!

This is the best Ultra fan I have ever seen, especially Chapters 77 to 83, and Chapter 44 which reflects real-life issues and is thought-provoking. I don't know why only Ba Ye gets it. It's a masterpiece in my mind.

The writing is very good, but the first part is a bit depressing. Because the first part is too depressing, I almost gave up. Fortunately, I persevered and things got much better later on. I still hope that the second part will be without a heroine, or that the heroine's presence will be weak, and don't appear too much. You can write about sweet love in the extras, but don't appear too much in the main text.

Not bad, keep up the good work

Come on, update it, author, it's too short [smile][smile]. I really like reading Ultra fan fiction about Nexus and Earphone Baby, but it's a pity that I can't find a few satisfactory ones, so I stare at your book every day and wait for updates [shy][shy]

Otvin (I don't need to say more about this), the protagonist is similar to the background in Eddie + Yi (Tega), he abuses the main character lightly (Xiao Nai abuses most of them except Wuweiwen), and has his own form (I hope it's not the same as what I've been thinking, so I don't have a patent [laughter]) Language description The writing is pretty good, even with the battles, I feel there is something a little bit wrong, but I can't explain it, so I'll just treat it as done [laughing] This novel, in my opinion, is in the middle-to-upper range among Ultra novels, slightly lower than Ultra's Son-in-law [laughing] and Super Ultra Biography [laughing]

Do you deserve one star? If you don't deserve it, you only deserve five stars [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

A rare traditional Owen. I have the same feeling as when watching TV. —— My favorite part is still Luo Gan during the Tiga period. At that time, he lost his hometown and wanted revenge. He seemed cold and reserved his unique tenderness for the friends and students who cared about him. He is steady and calm, and he is a warrior forged from suffering, hatred and faith. From the beginning, I didn't want to get involved too much and just wanted to die after taking revenge. Later, I accepted and gained many bonds. I watched him grow up and watched him get bruised and bruised while protecting mankind. In the end, for the sake of revenge, they died together without regrets. It is like the moment when the phosphorus fire burns out, and the shocking spiritual beauty is like the ultimate light of all-out efforts. —— The plot after Tiga is indeed not as exciting as the previous one. Maybe it's because no matter what Luo Gan does, someone will tell him the truth. Luo Gan himself didn't have the mental tension that he had before, having to take revenge before he died, so he was much more routine. It's also a joy to watch him get along with the other Ultramen. —— If I could choose, I hope he is just a political teacher from Blue Star, or Luo Gan who later belongs to the Kingdom of Light. The former did not have to go through so much suffering, while the latter completed his revenge, regained his family, and had a place to return to. He can regain the cheerfulness that he should have had before experiencing suffering. He can be less stable and joke with his friends, because there will be people who understand him and tolerate him. At least it was much better than the pressure during the Tiga period when he was forced to squeeze himself to the extreme. —— Perhaps it is difficult for the subsequent plots to surpass the feelings brought to readers by the Tiga period, but since Luo Gan did not die after revenge, and his life continues, then these subsequent daily lives should be what he deserves after going through hardships.

Dark Zaki's human body is female, but unfortunately she can't be with the protagonist. Blanch, the woman is gone.

Yes, I have read that the protagonist can transform into Nexus before, but I felt that the character of the protagonist was very out of touch with the whole book, and it was written like a child's play. This book is quite good, not too sadistic, and does not deviate from the style represented by Nexus.

Come on, author! If there are less than 500 chapters updated, please be careful to close the dark room.

Hello, author of the novel. I have read many fan fiction novels, but you are the only one who made me read every one of them through your efforts. Also, there are not enough to see. Can you please take ten pictures every day? I love you, okay? By the way, the following can be seen from Tiga to the emergence of the new generation, so the Ultraman world view can also be added to it.

This is an online novel. Who doesn't read online novels just to enjoy it? It's too depressing. Today's society is accelerating and there is a lot of pressure. Reading this book will make you feel depressed. It is recommended not to read it.

Very good. I haven't read traditional Ott texts in a long time. At first glance, they are all about systems. This one and a few others are traditional.

Owen is pretty good, but the character of the protagonist seems to have changed too quickly. In the Tiga chapter, he was bitter and angry, but in the Kingdom of Light, he became funny inexplicably. There is also the issue of the heroine. The heroine is a bit short and probably won't have much emotional description. Overall, a high-quality Owen.

A very good novel, it is best not to have too many emotional scenes between men and women, otherwise it will easily lead to failure [Like][Like]

The character design is relatively successful, and the protagonist is an ordinary person (pseudo) on his journey of revenge. It's just that the plot transitions are a bit stiff, and the characters still have a lot of content to dig into, so it's not very three-dimensional. For example, the protagonist goes from revenge to redemption to relief, Lao Tuo's mixed love and hate for Taylor, his disgust for the protagonist Taylor's son and the feelings he has nurtured for many years. Overall, it's a good fanfic and worth reading, but there is still room for improvement.

I just hope that this book will not be discontinued, because every time I give a gift, there will always be an author who will discontinue it! ! ! ! ! !

It's a pity, this book is good. Although there are some problems in the middle, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The narrative of the story is not bad, and the character creation problems are not big. However, the emotional drama and inner monologue are a bit poor, but overall it is good. It's just a pity that too few people have read this good book. I feel pretty good. I hope the author can work harder to complete it, and I also hope that the data of this book will be better [Like][Like][Like]

It's not bad. It's the third book among the Nexus fanfics and it's still readable. However, there are too many foreshadowings at the beginning, and it's a bit confusing and has some twists. It's not particularly smooth. But since I'm a new author, I don't pursue that much. Just don't let it end badly. In fact, I can add a little bit of the protagonist's psychological activities. It might be better to describe the growth of the protagonist using facial expressions, etc. Come on, author.

There is no Agur among the Eight Ultra Ultra Brothers, it should be Dyna.

"Every existence in the world has a future. Even the most rubbish existence will have its own future. It's the same for everyone!" Babar, you ***!

It's super good-looking, come on, author