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It's so beautiful. It fulfilled my childhood. I recovered Latias, and then recovered the cub Lugia, so that I can better face the male divine beast Dakto of Sinnoh.

It is definitely a good book, and it really makes the regrets of watching animation come true~Support the author! ! ! By the way, will the contents of the theatrical version appear in the main text or will there be separate extras at the end of the trip to each region [laughing][laughing][laughing]

This book is really good. I hope it can erase the regrets of xy. The wise frog went to chop down trees, Semei went to challenge the gorgeous contest, Nianmei Lulong went to the wetland, and Semei only met once. My enthusiasm started from the Wuyin chapter and ended with xy

Not enough, too little. Open Tomato and you will see the recommendation column. The author has accumulated a lot of experience, so he doesn't look tepid. Only if he is as plain as water can he last a long time. If you like to listen to the sounds of spring and people laughing, you just like to listen. The force of the breeze is astonishing to the eyes and ears of the mountain and the rain.

It must be five stars and Shinji's one is as good-looking as it is

How can I put it this way? This book is the best among all the Pokémon fanfics I have read so far. He didn't hit any of the bad points that I couldn't stand. This is exactly what I think of as a Pokémon fanfic. I was hesitant before because of its low rating, and I am the most impatient person to follow novels bit by bit. But it's different now. It will be the first novel I follow from beginning to end. This book not only made up for my regrets when watching anime. And it even has a lot of details that I missed when watching the anime. Although the number of words is relatively small, it does not hinder my love for him at all. I sincerely hope that readers who like to read Pokémon fan fiction will also take a look.

It's really good and fills a lot of regrets about Pokémon in my childhood. The plot and character settings are also very good. Thank you to the author for allowing me to see such a great work. I will continue to follow it until the ending. Please continue to work hard [laughs]

It's a very good novel, so I don't mean to be disrespectful in the following remarks. I just want to see how elves with low racial values ​​shine in competitions, and how they use tactics and wisdom to make up for the inherent defects in racial values.

This book really made up for the many regrets I had about Pokémon in my childhood, and made the right changes. Everything developed in the direction of the most perfect Pokémon in my heart, including the return of Pidgeot, the evolution of Bulbasaur, and the docility of Firesaur. It also conquered many powerful Pokémon along the way. Ash is not as naive as before. Under the evolution of the author's writing, he has become a truly super newbie, talented and calm. The most touching thing is Zhina's relationship. I think this book will develop in a better direction.

It's very beautiful, but I still hope there are multiple female protagonists. After all, each female protagonist has her own characteristics. I prefer Xiaoxia, Xiaoguang and Serina (purely personal opinion, everyone has their own favorite female protagonist). The dog head saves his life∪･ω･∪

Five stars, this book is very good. Shinji is also very good looking. Awesome to say. Please torture the dog more. [Laughing awkwardly]

This book is amazing. Did you know that there is an enlightened Xiaozhi in this book? He actually gave a gift to Serena, and he got Serena in his hands✧( ु•⌄• )◞◟( •⌄• ू )✧

This book, including Shinji's one, I have been following from the beginning to the latest chapter. I clicked in at first because of the high ratings of this book. Now that I have seen it, I feel that the early plots are really well written. At least I, who is an original novelist, feel comfortable reading it. I can also feel that the author really wants to write a good Pokémon fanfic. I have something to say about this book: I liked this book at first because when he was in Kandu and Chengdu, Xiaozhi was really a pure traveler and dream chaser. The author did let us make up for a lot of regrets, including Bada Die, Monkey Monster, and the winners of the Quartz Conference and the Silver Conference. However, since Serena from the Hoenn region joined the trip, it feels like the author's writing seems to be more focused on love. The adventure that should have been the focus has become a tool for Ash and Serena to cultivate their relationship. In fact, I think the reason why we baby fans like Pokémon is because of Xiaozhi's passion, sincere adventure and the protagonist group's journey of constantly overcoming difficulties, helping each other, and pursuing their dreams. When Xiaozhi lost the competition, we also felt regretful. After Xiaozhi won the championship, we were sincerely happy for him. In comparison, love is more like a foil. After all, everyone likes a different heroine, and it is impossible to take into account everyone's feelings. Therefore, I feel that the focus of a truly excellent Pokémon fanfic should be on the description of travel, so that readers like us can re-see Ash's constant struggle for his dreams, instead of putting the cart before the horse and letting some irrelevant things affect the travel. The above are all personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them. [Smile]

Serina, I actually hope to appear in the Kalos region, and the newly debuted Zhiye and Serina are progressing too fast. I think Zhiye and Serina in the ⅹY period are the time to fall in love with each other. ⅹY Zhiye left a deep impression on me. I also want to make a comment: the author, your emotional scenes are a bit lacking in writing, and you smell like a domineering CEO of a female channel. Generally speaking: youth, passion, childhood! Very cool! But Xiaozhi's essence feels a bit lacking, and the energy is enough.

Five stars, nothing to say, it looks very enjoyable, I just support it.

There's nothing to say. After reading too many other fanfics, this book by the author really stood out to me. I've been reading fanfics from major games or anime before, but now that I'm reading it, it's this kind of childhood memory that really captures people's attention. The writing is good, although sometimes it can be rushed, but overall it is still very good. It is detailed when it should be and abbreviated when it should be. I feel that the author must have had the same childhood as us and knows what we like to see and what we don't like to see. This alone should be given extra points. The emotional line is so-so at the moment, because the author has made it clear before that Xiaoxia will not be the heroine, so there is not much description of the emotional line. I don't particularly like Xiaoxia, but I don't hate it either. After all, it has helped Xiaozhi a lot (Zina's party is crazy about stacking shields). At the current speed... When will Carlos be ready? ! ! ! Author, have you fallen asleep? I can't sleep. How many cards does Carlos need to open? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (If it can't be opened in the short term, please give an approximate number of chapters. It can be a few hundred or even a few thousand. Then you can write a sweet letter to us. We can wait. Believe in yourself and please believe in us.) The book is very good and worth reading.

I think this book is great. Because it fulfills our dreams. I think that when it comes to fan fiction, you only have fan fiction because you have your own dreams for the original work, so don't leave too many regrets. And this novel too, I like it very much. Super recommended.

It's very good, a warm dream-fulfilling routine, but Shinji also needs to pay attention to his health. If you don't like it, don't watch it ￣ ￣)σ but don't give it one star. It's not easy to trust it with two stars.

It is a very good novel, but I am very curious about the plot behind it. Anyone who has read Pokémon knows that there are 123 seasons, xyz and the latest Sun and Moon, and the following. If the author can write it slowly, it will probably be a large novel with no less than two or three thousand chapters. I hope the author insists on it. If possible, I can also connect the plots of the theatrical version.

I like the author's style very much, narrating in a plain way. It's like being in that world. I don't like the kind of people who go there and mess up the original world. After all, I have been seeing the big one since I was a child, and I still hope that it will always be warm. The only shortcoming may be that it lacks a little impact. It's like if I don't read it for a while, I might forget about this novel. But I still liked this novel. Come on, author.

Five stars for you, Zhina yyds Zhina yyds Zhina yyds I'll say the important things three times, ah~ I'm so happy after reading your novel. When it comes to realizing dreams, I am an old, two-dimensional fan, and bookworm. I would like to call you the strongest and name you Dream Master.

This is the first book that I rated only after reading it halfway through. Today, when the information about Zhuzi came out, I felt numb. Zhuzi changed the protagonist. Xiaozhi was really unwilling to end the journey. I hope the author can let Xiaozhi go to Zhuzi later.

It is a good book. It is written with the central idea of ​​dream fulfillment. It captures our past regrets and desire for perfection, so we will find that there is less bias. However, I think that some system levels should be introduced more. Like this time capsule, maybe a specific plot can be added to find it. This will probably be more interesting, and it will not appear so suddenly in the backpack. At the same time, the plot of the story should be speeded up appropriately. It is said that adding specific plots can be done on the road. Just speed up the battle plot a little. I hope it can be adopted and adjusted.

It's very nice, it's like sitting in front of the TV when I was a kid, waiting for that "I got a Pokémon!" The regrets left by the anime will be made up for here, and the narration at the end of each chapter is a bonus! The author should keep up the good work! ! !

This book is very beautiful. Not only does it make our pain come true, it is also a casual novel, and I will keep the promise! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Looks good. More mythical beasts! When the time comes, Sinnoh and Divine Beast Man will be more fun than Divine Beast! Can the Three Fools of Hoenn accept Groudon? I've read a lot of Pokémon stories and it's basically about Rayquaza, and I hate it just because it can't fly, right? (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

I like it better. Although there are no big changes and I just follow the original plot, it still solves a lot of regrets. I hope it will continue like this.

Although it was very satisfying to make up for the regrets of childhood, the battle was won too easily, which reduced the passion and excitement of the past. I hope Xin Er can change it. Of course it's well written. Keep up the good work!

Again, regardless of the low rating, this book is worth reading. This is the content of most of the plots based on the original work, and it is more comfortable than the original work. It looks so comfortable, and you can understand the content of this book just by looking at the title. Come take a look and find the happiness you had when watching animation on TV. A message to the author: "Come on, it's well written. And thank you, I like this world, and I hope the world you write is as beautiful. Maybe this is the charm of Pokémon."

It made up for my regrets when watching the animation, and I was very satisfied. I saw a strong, enthusiastic and intelligent Xiaozhi. Pokémon can also be regarded as a symbol of our love for life. I hope this book can go further. People who love this book will definitely live a better life. There are surprises everywhere in life, just like in the elf world, you don't know which Pokémon will be next. Come on, author, there are thousands of readers behind this book. This is not only your dream, but also our common dream! Come on, author, you are the best