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The author has worked very hard, and the short story is good, but I personally think that since the heroine is a non-CP character, she should not be unclear with the original husband. Of course, every story is very real, and it is impossible to find a widowed or divorced person. But since the heroine is a strong female character, I can clarify it at the beginning of the storyline. If small details such as mental suggestion or hypnosis are given to the male protagonist, then I think the future story line will be more reasonable. Otherwise, several stories show that the original heroine's husband must be treated well to maintain a perfect family and it will last for decades. The relationship between the heroine and the hero is a bit inconsistent (don't criticize if you don't like it, personal opinion,)

The story is very good, I also like the heroine's temper, but it's unfair to the husband in the opposite position. In the star chapter, the husband is very good, but the heroine keeps asking him to be a monk. I feel that this is not good. If there is no CP, it would be better to just write about divorce or death.

Well written. It's just that the ending is a bit sloppy. I could write a sequel. He died like this inexplicably without an ending, and he could have written more about the characters other than the protagonist. It all revolves around the protagonist. It's a bit sloppy and a bit fast. Although it's pretty good-looking, it's a bit lacking. Personal opinion

There are too many typos. I originally added it to the bookshelf after reading the introduction, but because there were too many typos, I didn't feel comfortable reading it. I don't know if the author has corrected the typo. After all, someone commented that the typo was wrong. The author responded that he had corrected it, but after reading it, it was still a typo. I hope the author will correct it, and don't just say that he won't correct it.

The pace of each story is very fast. Although I like heroines who do things straightforwardly, I always feel that this one is too fast and seems to have no feeling. It is purely a personal feeling. Don't criticize me, but it's okay. Give the author a big boost and like it.

Love short stories 🤭

It's very interesting, but for me it's too bland, and the text feels very tight. Of course, that's not to say that the author's writing is not good. The main reason is that the previous books were all about joy, tragedy or earth-shattering. At first glance, this book felt too bland and uninteresting.

There's nothing to say but I love reading it. I just love reading refreshing articles.

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Not procrastinating, short and nice