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I think it's very interesting. The theme of this volume is very good, but it's too little, that is to say, I don't feel like I've learned how to roll it up, but it's still very interesting! ! ! ! [Full]

The Philosopher's Stone is the beginning of a dream, the Chamber of Secrets witnesses the friendship of the Iron Triangle, Azkaban is the beginning of darkness, the Goblet of Fire is the advent of darkness, the Order of the Phoenix is everyone's regret, the Half-Blood Prince is Snape's regret, the Deathly Hallows is a cruel reality, but... That is the most beautiful ending we have ever seen. The author does not like it╥╥

I hope this book will be updated every day, the author will be happy every day, his inspiration will never run out, and there will be more and more readers ~ (I can't help but feel sad, Sawako quickly sent five stars❤️❤️❤️)

As a reviewer, I highly recommend it. The content is very exciting, not only is it reasonably adapted, the humor is moderate, but it is also serious and humorous, making people applaud and praise it from time to time. Although it is a system, it is a time-traveling type, but it is not a smooth journey and a joy to the end. The author has a deep understanding of the original text, is rigorous in setting the structure, and will respond promptly even if there is a disagreement with the reader. I hope to keep the quality high and not unfinished.

I haven't read much of the Harry Potter series, only the original books five or six times, and the movies only two or three times. This is the first fanfic I've read. I think it's pretty good. First of all, the appearance of the protagonist is not very abrupt in the entire Hogwarts. Secondly, I feel that the plot is going quite normal, and the combat power has not collapsed so far, and it's still pretty good. It's a cool story (probably), and the relationship between the characters, the dialogues, some actions, and the description of some scenes are quite good (´∀｀*). I can only say that it's a rare cp between the protagonist and Hermione in the magic academy... I have to say... It's so sweet (￢㉨￢) (only personal opinion), author, come on! Come on code words (ง•̀_•́)ง Moreover, the author did not make any major changes to the original plot. Although there were modifications, there were no major actions. Although the Basilisk was killed alone, well, it was very ordinary and nothing happened. And looking at the posture of this Horcrux, and Dumbledore told the protagonist about the posture of the Horcrux, and the protagonist's growth rate, I feel that Dumbledore can survive... The child has been stunned by the knife! The knife is here!

A very good fanfic, with very few obtrusive words, making the language closer to the original. In HARRY POTTER 20years, Rowling said that Gryffindor is not satisfied with books like other houses, but does its best to leave its own mark on the world. (It is translated by myself, and it is a free translation, which may be somewhat different from the original work.) The protagonist of this book perfectly fits this point. There is also a shortcoming of this book, that is, in the creation of characters, the original scenes have some deficiencies in details. For example, when the protagonist deducts points for the first time, according to the original book, Hermione will probably say "How could Professor McGonagall do this?" But thinking about it from another perspective, maybe this is just because they haven't been divided into schools yet and don't know that Professor McGonagall is their dean. Therefore, this book is an excellent HP fan work.

Seeing it now, I feel pretty good, and the contract with Thunderbird is also very novel. So far, it seems that it is not related to the four deans. I think it is good. There are too many settings where the four deans are still alive, which is a bit tired. In my opinion, Harry Potter is a beautiful fantasy of the magical world in everyone's heart. Everyone in it has flesh and blood, as if it presents a real world, and the protagonist does not want to change the magic. The idea of ​​the world is not bad. Generally speaking, the setting of the king of scrolls is very novel, and the strength is steadily improved, not so outrageous, but there is not much description of the main plot (friends who don't like this can avoid this pit). This book ranks third in my heart of fan fiction. It is good and good. I hope the author can keep writing. Don't be pigeons, I am looking forward to it, and some emotional dramas can be added (my own thoughts, light spray) Indeed, I have always had an idea in my heart, that is, a male protagonist (it doesn't matter whether he travels through time or not) can use light magic, because I feel that the final battle in the original work is too ridiculous, and it does not reflect the power of magic. The most lethal thing in the whole show is always black magic, but Dumbledore is a character. A white magician, he must be very 🐮. He can't say "Avatar" when fighting. Then it's not the white devil who becomes the dark devil. In fact, the original book doesn't say much about magic combat. I want to see the kind of magic confrontation, and then add the main plot, and you can contract a dragon (personally want A white dragon with a horn, a pair of wings, and a high sense of magic. The protagonist can sign a contract with him.) There is also an interesting point about the magical feeling of time. The original time converter has always been very good. I hope someone can fulfill my wish. In my heart Harry Potter is a world like ours. Their lives should not only be about the Dark Lord and learning. That is to say, they like to describe everything (a bit like the book "Checking in at Hogwarts"). I still hope that someone can really create a world, a world with magic. Finally, if anyone really wants to write, privately contact me and I can tell you my thoughts.

After reading Chapter 122, if I were to evaluate this book on a scale, I would give it an A-. There may be a little too many jokes in the early stage, especially Chinese memes and some Chinese conversations, which may give readers a feeling that they don't fit in well and are a bit stripped of this Western background. But it will be much better when you see it later. The setting of Thunderbird Xander is quite novel. Judging from the author's reply to the book review, the protagonist should be heading in the direction of the White Devil. The protagonist of the first grade content looks a bit immature in the early stages, but you can watch it in the later stages. Regarding the heroine, this book does not have a specific label or maybe I didn't see it, but I can guess that it is Hermione, the single heroine. I see that there is no love element in it now. The center of this book revolves around "volume", which means learning for yourself and letting others around you learn passively along with you. This book (as of now) uses more words to describe how to use your own achievements to challenge other students. I feel that the only one who is really involved is Hermione. Overall, this is a pretty good HP fanfic. Writing B+, plot A, characters A- Come on, author! [Send heart][Send heart]

How to say it? The book is great, and the content is very interesting. It is a male version of the system that is rarely seen, and it is also a master of volume [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] It is worth mentioning that the author is very cute, especially when he criticizes anti-fans! ! ! ! Let's express our love for the author every day [shy]

I think the protagonist is very interesting, and the plot is quite good. I have always felt that the story of Gryffindor (Lion), who can interact with the system to a certain extent and is very sensible at the same time, will be very interesting. Because the characteristics represented by each house are that we have a certain fixed impression of the students, so I actually understand it as Ravenclaw in Gryffindor, but I have a question, is it possible for the protagonist to learn wandology in the future? Because I always thought wands were cool, well, this was a rather naive idea, In addition, the author please note that physical and mental health, continuous updates are always much better than one-time updates. Although I am very poor, I can't give you any actual gifts. I can only give you psychological comfort (verbal comfort). Please forgive me.

Why are updates so slow? The characterization is very detailed! The plot is also relatively smooth. The author really put emotion into the article! The only pity is that the update is too slow. If more fighting plots are added later, it will easily attract readers! Men all like passion and heroic colors! The above are the thoughts of a certain reader. Please correct me if I'm not good at writing!

The author's writing is very good, and the subject matter is relatively new. The other HP fanfics I have read are not of this type. They are more attractive. Now the involution has reached this point, and the magical world has begun to involute, hahaha o(≧v≦)o

It's a very interesting fanfic, with a few flaws. Professor Snape deducted points because the protagonist entered the classroom with his left and right feet (although it was a joke, but it felt a bit broken), but there are basically no flaws. Not all plots follow the original work. The author has his own ideas and innovation. For example, what about contracts and magical animals (in fact, I really hope that the author can write more about magical animals. I am very interested in it personally). Although this book is systematic, it is not an invincible novel. The protagonist is strong, but not outrageous. It is a cyclical and progressive type, but not procrastinating. However, if you want to see the protagonist punch Voldemort in the first grade, I do not recommend reading it. After all, it is not an invincible novel. Then after reading the author's insights, I feel that the stereotype that some people think Gryffindor is only reckless is not very compromising. It is like saying that Slytherin is sinister and Hufflepuff is naive (derogatory). In my opinion, every house is great. The shrewd little snake, the brave lion, and the loyal and cute "flat-headed brother" do not need to have a stereotyped image for the house. Next, the author should work hard and pay attention to the balance between work and rest. Regarding the scoring, I heard that the mechanism has been changed. Don't worry too much. It is definitely possible to be rated if the writing is so interesting. There is nothing you can do about it as a black fan. Don't care too much. I can only say

The author's writing is really good, and the setting is amazing, but I still hope that the author can write the details better. The story and characters are very good, but there are not enough details to support it. Also, I hope to have more interactions with Hermione. They are both childhood sweethearts. It is not normal to have more interactions. After all, she will still be the heroine later on. Wouldn't it be great to do some foreshadowing now? Finally, I can only say that the author should work hard. I haven't seen such a beautiful fanfic for a long time. We are all waiting to appreciate and read your masterpiece.

It's so damn good. It's the conscience of the industry! I found gold in shit, which is incredible to me! Grandma, I want all my classmates to read this novel! Let them stop reading those novels written by jk. I really don't understand how it can be as good as this in a small skirt? ! Ahem, this is the end of the nonsense. The novel is wonderfully written, and the protagonist's life experience is more appropriate compared to other fan fiction protagonists who have a great background or a small bowl. Of course, it's not that others can't do it, it's just that the author handles it better. Judging from the plot, it is very interesting that the author has developed his own plot development on the map of Harry Potter while the original plot has declined. In terms of writing style, the author is undoubtedly great. The expressions of paragraphs and sentences make people feel... Like a spring breeze. It is not pretentious. Anyway, it is not a good voice (the first time). It makes my eyes blurry and comfortable to read. This book is undoubtedly the king of Harry Potter fandoms in my mind, well... At least on Tomato. I hope the author can work hard! (If the review is not good, please don't step on me)

It's quite interesting, but there are some trolls in the comment area. I personally recommend turning off the comments before reading, otherwise your mood will be compromised. Of course, if you like to argue with others, you can also open it and then start talking with others [laughter]

This book is really well written, the best fanfic I've seen so far, really. [Adoration][Adoration] Doesn't the author want a new spell? I think it can be based on a contract. I can use the apparation to support, create a spell that is always available, and sign this contract with Hermione. I have already thought of the name, so it's called "I'm Always Here". I think you, the author, should write more about your interactions with Hermione, instead of just briefly mentioning her during exams or classes. If so, even if you write about them being together in the dance later, it will be very abrupt. Although they are accompanying each other, it still feels a bit uninteresting. Really, write more about daily interactions, such as being together. Eating, practicing spells, making medicine together, etc. Even though you are the master of reading, there is no need to eat alone all the time. You can show Hermione the professor's notes that you have read. I think this is better. When they get together later, Hermione is worthy of the protagonist, and there is a natural feeling that the two of them were meant to be together.

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I really like the derivative novels about Harry Potter. This is the second-ranked Harry Potter derivative novel I have ever read. In one word, thumbs up! But I really don't want a heroine!

A very nice book, a breath of fresh air in Harry's book circle. People who like daily life can read it. The rhythm of the plot is normal, not too fast or too slow'. There is not much sense of inconsistency in the role substitution, and overall it is not bad.

This book seems to be very good so far. I have read twenty Harry Potter fanfics. This one has nothing bad about it. I have little knowledge and can only say one wonderful thing about a good book. You will definitely make money after reading this book (be sure to read the introduction before reading the book)

I saw this book a long time ago The main character gave up when he was sorted into Gryffindor before. I think it's boring to watch too many of this genre. As a result, Emma is so delicious. I finished it in one day. The more I watch it, the more I feel attracted to it. Strong recommendation

Emmm, although I haven't read many Harry Potter books, it doesn't affect my opinion that this is a good book. First of all, the character of the protagonist is very distinct, and the personality of each character is well written. Secondly, daily life and some interesting things are well written, unlike some books, which have a main plot and no daily life, which is too rigid. All in all, I really like this book and hope the author will continue to work hard! ! [Please update]

It looks great [blowing kiss] By the way, the author is great, please keep updating! ! ! (ઇ•ω‹)Wink♡

It's very interesting. It's my favorite type. Those HP fics with female protagonists are so cool.

I've read a lot of fanfics about HP, and most of them are pretty much the same, like books, systems, etc. But this book really gives people a bright feeling. I personally think this one is really worth reading.

Overall, this book is one of the best HP fanfics I have ever read. The author's use of some jokes and texts is also a highlight. It's very interesting to read, and the writing style is quite humorous... In addition, the setting of this book is more in line with my appetite, and I feel very comfortable reading it! Highly recommended! ! Support the author greatly! ! !

Overall, this book is pretty good. It has its own setting. Although the plot doesn't have much innovation, I like to read this kind of book. Even though I know the author is trying to make fun of me, I think it's a bit inappropriate for a Western novel to include too much Eastern culture. Maybe it's because I just finished reading "Lord of the Mysteries", which is also a Western novel. When writing the dialogues between the characters in the book, the author specially changed some Eastern idioms into Western styles. After just reading a few chapters, I can feel the full Western style. I think other authors don't necessarily have to write too Western, because it's really difficult to write, but it's still a bit inappropriate for a Western novel to include ancient poems in character dialogue.

I'm looking forward to it with four points. Although there is innovation in the setting, the innovation in the plot is still not enough.

The only thing is that the author is not very good at writing about emotions, so there are not many emotional scenes in the article, but this is also a rare feature of fan fiction.