After Reading the Book, He Criticized the Male Protagonist for His Wrong Style of Painting

There are no comments on this beautiful book. After reading the book for a long time, I thought I didn't leave any comments. The Ninth Elder is so sassy, ​​she is the perfect match for a strong woman with courage, beauty and strength~ I feel sorry for the heroine who pretended to be calm and indifferent in order to lie dormant for five years and was regarded as a joke by many people. When the Ninth Elder said that no one really respects me, it really made me feel bad. The male protagonist was a powerful demon cultivator in his previous life. From his attitude towards cultivation and Duetian as well as the world's view of him, he was also a poor little person who no one cared about. When he met the female protagonist who sincerely helped him twice, he had the urge to protect this beauty, and he was gradually conquered by the charm of the female protagonist's personality. The most attractive part of the relationship between the two is that the heroine originally wanted to reduce contact to avoid cause and effect for the sake of the plot, but she couldn't bear the male protagonist taking the initiative to approach again and again. The two were attracted to each other and the fate of fate tied them together. Every time I see the big devil secretly jealous and God Gugu assisting, it's super funny. Gugu is so cute and always complains about the male protagonist, and he also likes to post comments about the female protagonist Xiangxiang~ Big support for the author, be sure to stick with it, more people will definitely see it! ! O(*≧▽≦)ツ

So pretty! The heroine turns out to be Chong Hua Mu, who is the key to immortality for monks in the world of immortality. She has always been dedicated to the common people, but she has attracted a steady stream of greed. It was her friend Ji Xiangsi who made a wish to Tiandao to turn her into a human, and then she was reborn with her memories. Then Chonghua became her daughter Lin Xiangsi, but Tiandao retained a ray of Chonghua's soul and was reincarnated into another world. The heroine Lin Xiangsi returned from another world and was reborn in the world of immortality. Lin Xiangsi thought she had passed through a book and became a cannon fodder female supporting character. Unexpectedly, the male protagonist was not the original one, but the ancestor of the demon world. It's wonderful, and there are no clichés in the whole story.

I like it very much, and I will award you a five-star review. I hope you will read ten more novels in the future [Chigua]

1. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are free of abuse and mistakes, and there is no bloodshed or amnesia. 2. The heroine starts out as a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle, and her endurance reaches new heights, so she is frustrated in the early stage, and does not start to show her talents until she can't bear it anymore and gives up. But it's still not very strong. It can even deal with ordinary disciples. 3. The male protagonist is not strong in the early stage, but he can't bear it and will fight back. 4. The second heroine (original heroine) has a peach blossom physique, white lotus and green tea. She acts like a monster and targets the heroine. She can be found everywhere, throughout the text. 5. Lightning rod: The male protagonist has a non-biological "sister" who was his savior before he met the female protagonist. The two have been together for hundreds of years, and the male protagonist's first tenderness is to his sister, who is thoughtful for the male protagonist. The article describes that the male protagonist is cold to everyone, but only when he sees that person will there be tenderness in his eyes. She will try her best to help her find whatever she wants, and she also vows to protect her for the rest of her life. The heroine is not alone in many things. I saw that many book friends didn't like this plot, so please proceed with caution! 6. The heroine has stumbling blocks on her way to growth, so it's not a great novel. For me personally, it's a medium to low level of enjoyment (everyone has different feelings, this is for reference only!)

Highly recommended. The writing is good and not childish. The plot is also very smooth and reasonable, full of expectations and fascinating. They are more about the career line and the love line. The friendship line is light but a bit light. They are sisters who have no sense of presence (ah this). Why did Zhu decide to make this friend? Suddenly he would help with everything, like a tool for charity, or an investor who took a fancy to Lin's talent. The sisterhood is too quick, which is not as reasonable as the love between Jane. The other priorities are also reasonable. There is no long list of memories (four or five chapters of long-term memories, with psychological descriptions of the environment, without pointing out who is whose) but the main line is very clear. There are no weird points, the whole story is based on the thinking of normal people, and it will not be inexplicably popular. Moreover, he is HE! There is no knife at all!

Fine. It has great love and is not bloody, but the emotional description part is not enough [laughing and crying]. There is not even a kissing scene at the end of the whole story. These days I like to read books like this that are not highly rated but are super exciting. As we watched it, its rating gradually increased, which gave people a sense of accomplishment [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Show them all to me, the plot is very compact and one after another. It's not a crazy villain falling in love with a powerful master/uncle, it's not a jealous male protagonist who kills all the creatures around the female protagonist, nor is it a confrontation between good and evil sects, demons and immortals. The male and female protagonists have changed their souls. The female protagonist travels through the book but does not rely on the plot she knows to make judgments. She has a brain and can analyze events, and she has made little progress in practice. She is a wood-type immortal body, and the scene of cultivating the immortal is very beautiful. The description of the scene is particularly delicate and picturesque. The male protagonist is the reborn demon lord. Revenge is no longer the main theme but protection of the female protagonist. He does not have so many awesome buffs. In fact, he plays less roles than the female protagonist, but he respects the female protagonist very much and is not particularly jealous and paranoid. In the early stage of the plot, the main focus is on the promotion of two people through training. In the later stage, they have been looking for the reason why the male protagonist was reborn after his parents died. The battle between good and evil is not a team battle, but there are good and bad people in every sect and race. Everyone is selfishly pursuing immortality, but some people take shortcuts and others practice hard. Even if the male and female protagonists are soul-transporting, there is no absolute God's perspective and overwhelming strength. The audience still has some parts to guess, and the plot is pushed forward bit by bit, and there are hidden points in the early stage, instead of forcibly reducing the buff. The only shortcoming is that there are too few love scenes. The characters in the cultivation scenes and fighting scenes are all well described. Let's turn it into a film and TV show, I really want to see the special effects of Thousand Silk Grass.

The first few dozen chapters of this book are quite discouraging, because there are many flaws in the writing or language, which makes me a little tired. But! But! The characters and plot throughout the book are great! ! ! I really like the author's layout! This is the first time I have seen the heroine's treatment at the end be similar to martyrdom, rather than as a rebellion or struggle. The setting of the fate between two lovesick people is also very good. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very simple. Well, it is indeed the way of getting along with Taoist couples. The pattern is very open and they hold hands every day. It's relatively smooth, let nature take its course, and there are no mindless conflicts or bloody plots.

Show it to me, I love it, the heroine is my ideal, the heroine has a good personality, I love the heroine, the heroine is the casual, affectionate and cool type [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Not bad, not bad, very good! The whole book has a clear route and no flaws [shy] Alas! The rating of the book shouldn't be so low [Thinking] It's just a little bit different at the end, but it's still pretty good [I understand] You can read this book. Since the rating is too low, I looked at the negative reviews again [Research] I can only say one thing, don't believe too much. You have to rate the book yourself because some of the reviews are really not pertinent [Cool] Hahaha, of course, hahaha, everyone's point of view is different [Read carefully] Everyone

It's been a long time since I've completely read a novel. This novel is really a masterpiece, and I feel like I've earned something by reading this novel. At first, I read it as a sweet love story about a man chasing a woman. Later I found that the story structure of this book is very good, the writing is very delicate, the plot is coherent, and the twists are wonderful. It is not a simple love, nor is it a desperate attempt to sacrifice one person to save others. The structure of the story is very large. Sometimes you will read it with excitement, and sometimes you will burst into tears. I really recommend reading it❤️

It's very interesting. The male and female protagonists are both in costume, and they didn't follow the plot of killing each other in the original book. Now that they are here, they have to change it. It is this change without prejudice that allows the two to be together. I can understand each other's secrets very well, there is no hiding or doubting, everything comes naturally, very mature. Feel the other person's feelings for you without entanglement or avoidance. It's a very good article, sweet but not greasy, and it could be a little deeper emotionally (I like it personally). It's a bit trickling, but it's appropriate for the subject matter and not obtrusive. Support everyone to enter the pit

The heroine is flesh and blood, the plot is also very compact and exciting, and the family and friendship between the two lovesick people are very moving.

Really good! The writing style is concise and not sloppy, and the subject matter is relatively new! It's worth watching, I didn't skip a chapter, [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]!

Objectively speaking, this novel is very readable and the emotions flow smoothly [laughing] The heroine Lin Xiangsi: At first she thought she was traveling through a book, but then she slowly revealed the mystery. It turned out to be Chonghua. Because of the greed of the world, she gave up her body as a fairy tree and reincarnated as a human. She met Jian Qing, and they experienced various companionships and achievements and finally got married. ❤️ The male protagonist Jian Qing: In his previous life, he was a big demon who was harmed and killed by his beloved sister. After his rebirth, he met the female protagonist Lin Xiangsi. They gradually got along and fell in love with each other. In the end, Jian Qing would only draw his sword to protect her in this life. Just to protect her❤️

The book is very good, I hope there will be more chapters. For example, Ji Xiangsi and Lin Dengxian (is it the way of heaven or not). Who is the child sacrificed by the devil? Why do Sisi and Aqing live forever (don't you come to modern times). Gugu and Zhuzhu (siblings or partners). What's the story between Qingqing and the Holy Son (or inner demon)! Hahaha, there are so many things I want to know...

This is the first book I've read that doesn't have any unfinished content. It's really great. It finally caught up with the previous settings and it's very stable.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is very exciting. Compared with the immortal novels I have read before, this one is not a good novel. The male and female protagonists have a really difficult journey along the way. In the end, they almost became BE! Fortunately, both of them are fine and the ending is also good!

It's really beautiful. Ignore the original rating. The writing is very good. It is not a cliché of world justice. Acacia is love and righteousness, and it is also a kind of plain, calm and indescribable happiness.

All in all, it's still very interesting, and the heroine is very cool. I particularly like the heroine's line: Xiangsi's sect, Ninth Elder, Lin Xiangsi! It's so damn cool, hahahaha, and there are a lot of moving parts, but I think it's a fly in the ointment, uh, the emotional line is a bit abrupt [laughing] In short, it's very good-looking [love]

Nice! The heroine, who came from the book with a bug, had to endure it in order to survive at first, working as an unknown elder and being laughed at. Until she met the male protagonist, the plot was constantly disrupted. The heroine gradually recognized her own heart and no longer suppressed her inner thoughts. She became more open and wanton, which attracted the male protagonist even more. The male protagonist's love for the female protagonist started out of curiosity due to the grace of saving her life, and is loyal to the female protagonist's personality charm. There is a sentence that moved me very much: "From now on, I am no longer the ancestor Duan Tian, ​​but just an ordinary disciple of the Acacia Sect." (This is probably what it means). Because of the lovesickness, he has a sense of belonging to this world. The only thing that makes me feel a little unhappy is that the emotional lines are a bit lacking and not interesting enough. The heroine also continued to grow during this process, and gradually learned about her own life experience. The ending was a bit reversed. She thought she was the reincarnation of Ji Xiangsi, but she didn't expect it to be the reincarnation of Chongmu. But it's no wonder that Qiansicao can take the initiative to get close to her. The author has laid the groundwork for it. Later, the heroine gave up her body to feed humanity. It was really touching. I really like the character of the heroine. She dares to love and hate, is decisive in doing things, and must avenge her enemies. She also has a compassionate heart that is similar to the way of heaven. Everyone in the world and the hero love each other deeply. It's really amazing, isn't it? Heaven did not live up to their wishes and allowed them to be together forever for all eternity. [Love][love][love]

I originally thought it was a love story, but in the end I found out that it was probably a detective story. The reason why I finished reading it was probably because it had too many questions, and I always wanted to see what the final result would be, right? Overall, it looks great [laughing][laughing]

The story is very exciting. The settings of Ji Xiangsi and Lin Xiangsi are really amazing. It's not a cliche reincarnation. It's really nice to watch. It would be nice if the finale was more detailed.

It's a very good novel. I don't know why the score is so low. There is no hilarious storyline, but it still makes people want to read it. The plot has ups and downs, which makes me want to know what happened next. I finished it without paying attention. The ending is very good, not cruel and slightly sweet. I put it on the bookshelf. I can read it again when I am short of books😀️

The plot has taken nine twists and turns, and I still can't bear to leave it after watching it. The plot is over, but their story is still going on. The beautiful life of lovesickness and simplicity is continuing in a place we can't see. Qingshui CP is also an unexpected surprise CP.

It's great. This book is really straight-forward and has no nonsense. The progress of the protagonist's emotional line is also very reasonable. There are no misunderstandings. There is no feeling of grinding and grinding and being afraid of this and that of other books of the same type. It is superbly written.

Nice! ! The setting of the male and female protagonists is great, very novel setting, dear, woo woo, this devil, he really makes me cry to death. At first, the male protagonist wants to protect the female protagonist silently, but the possessiveness does not allow it, but they both have their mouths, there is no misunderstanding, the female protagonist is also very strong, not the Holy Mother, the whole story is also very good, short and concise, and will not feel boring. The female protagonist upgrades quickly, the relationship heats up quickly, and there is no weird male lead. I emphasize again, the setting is really good, reasonable and novel, highly recommended!

December 15, 2022. After the first play, I feel pretty good. I wonder if there will be a second play to give me a chance to review [laughing] In the end, I like the open ending of Qingqing and Shengzi, as well as the ending of the male and female protagonists. It's beautiful [like] [love]

It looks good, but it's not too sweet [almost crying] [almost crying]

The unlucky author is so talented at writing that it really deserves my five-star rating. It's really good. But as a human being, I order you to give me more extras. If I don't hear you, please give me more extras. You will update more extras. Hurry up. Hehe, to tell you the truth, this author will be my only favorite author from now on. I am my favorite. This author is really worth it, really worth it I'm not a navy soldier or anything. If I were a navy soldier, I wouldn't be able to be so straightforward. I'm going to read the news. This article is a description of him and his many beautiful words. The description is also very beautiful and vivid, making people think of it. This article just doesn't have too many secondary features. For example, when you read it, you feel like your toenails are buckling. I think he doesn't have this kind of thing and it's very rare. It's really worth it Highly recommended