Genshin Impact: a Bad Start. I Am from Qiuqiu.

Hey, hey, it looks so good. I hope the CP is a mandrill treasure and it will be updated soon to make it more delicious!

This is definitely one of the few Genshin Impact fanfics I have seen. The Genshin Impact fanfics I have read before are not about swords (if you are curious, you can read the book of Ninth World), but they are a little bit wrong with the three views. How can I put it? That is. It's the kind of book that would collapse the characters in Genshin Impact, and then the method of increasing the popularity of the characters is a bit outrageous or too simple. Just write the character a little bit like that. But this one is really well written. It's still very good, although the writing was not very good at the beginning, but later on, the author's writing seems to be getting better and better. I didn't really have high hopes for reading this book at first, but as I got to the end I couldn't stop. In short, this calligraphy is very good. I hope the author will not stop working harder to update it. I will support the author. ╭(￣▽￣)╮

It's very interesting, but it's too short. I don't know if I was fascinated by it, but I finished it without even realizing it. I was thinking hard in bed for a long time, and the air conditioner outside the window was buzzing, accompanied by the chirping of cicadas. Everything proves that summer is here, but it is extremely hot in the heart of a cool place. I just heard a ding-dong sound, picked up the phone and read the message. I immediately put on my shoes, stepped out and walked to the street to find my grandpa and said, "Grandpa, the author you follow has been updated!" After hearing this, he said with tears in his eyes, "Twenty years ago, he entered the palace, and twenty years later, he came back. Do you know what I have been doing in these twenty years?"

It's very beautiful and the writing is also very good. The part where Mandrill goes to find the male protagonist made me laugh to death. It's stuck very well, don't get stuck again next time. Why have you learned so badly recently? I like Kavin so much, there are all Kavin in my bookshelf [cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's very interesting. It's the most interesting Genshin Impact fanfic I've ever seen. It's not awkward, it has its own setting, and the characters are not too OOC. Even if they are, they are fine-tuned to follow the plot and won't offend anyone. I really like it, especially these recent chapters, my family understands them all [laughing]

They're all pretty good, but the skills are a bit weird. I don't play Genshin Impact very much. Is this how it is when you read the skills? (●°U°●) "It's a little embarrassing, come on! Very beautiful! !

It's very interesting~ The CP between Sen Morihu and Wendy is very well described. However, the author of this book cannot talk about the harem, and hopes to have some extra stories about other characters (little CP together) [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I hope this little opinion can be adopted [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Author, update quickly, where is your home, what are you doing every day, why is the update so slow, woo woo woo

Great... I read it all in one go... Wang Chuhong... And Wendy... Although it made my head hurt... There were a lot of big knives, and countless small knives... Ah... But... Very exciting... Good-looking... The connection of each story is extremely appropriate... Every part... Has deep meaning... Worth savoring slowly... Repentance...(But why is Mandrill still not available? Could it be that my dear Mandrill only deserves unrequited love awaoooooooooooo

It's very interesting. I hope it will be updated soon. I support you. The author is great, but I hope the protagonist can return to Liyue as soon as possible and continue to be with Gan Yu (hehehe, personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you)

🐴I really like it, don't you? At first, I didn't expect that the CP was actually Wendy. I thought he had so many roles, but the relationship between the two of them was really sweet (not abusive at all!). I really like the writing style.

The author is great, please update quickly, it's not enough ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉﾞ❀~

It's nice to read, but the Inazuma chapter is a bit confusing, which may dissuade some people, but it doesn't affect it. Also, the author has too few words, which is not enough to read, which is not good. Not many words will also dissuade some people, so author, do you understand what I mean? [Laughing evilly][love]

After reading it for the most part, I can say a few words. The theme positioning is really well chosen, but the cp I'm obsessed with is Mandrill. I was quite upset when I saw that the CP at the back was Wendy. After two days of quiet reading, I finally came across the latest chapter. The author's writing style is quite good, but you can clearly feel that the following chapters are written in a state of thinking wherever you think (maybe it is still in the stage of laying the groundwork and digging holes?) But after all, this is fan fiction, so this is understandable. Although other people's comments said that this book would not be a harem novel, but after careful review, I found that the protagonist is still a heartthrob. Since there is a heart-throb setting, there will still be more or less Shura Field plots later on. Personally, I still hope that the protagonist's emotional relationship won't be as messy as a ball of wool, like a Neptune who has no self-awareness. (The protagonist is so crazy... Forget it, I still don't have such hope) In short, although it is not finished, this novel is still worth reading. If it is not finished, I will not comment in one sentence (kick me if it is finished, I will give it after I finish reading) Come on, author, don't imitate Baba and update as soon as possible! No one in the production team would take you to rest like this!

This is the first movie I've ever seen where the main character has a god's eye, and the plot and characterization are also very good. I like it very much Until I read the end, I finally understood why this novel has so few people. It was well written in the early stage, but just messed up in the later stage. It can be said that your book collapsed and you don't even know how to write it.

More updates from the author! Two chapters a day is not too much. Not too much at all. There can also be one more chapter. I believe the author will not make us sad. Come on! ! ! Author, please move forward to update three times a day.

The writing is very good and makes people want to read it. Come on, author, how about 10,000 words a day? [Sinister smile]

Author, you wrote this book very well. It didn't ruin the character either. I feel very comfortable looking at it. But the biggest flaw of your book is that there are too few updates. I hope you can make more updates. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

Ah ba ah ba ah ba [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] The book is very good, but it is updated too slowly. After saving it for two months, it only has a dozen chapters! ! ! ! [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] (angry｀Д´angry) -_-|| ヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ The story was pretty good until the end of the Kanreia War, and the plot was okay. I thought it had a female protagonist, but who knew that it would be picked up by Wendy and develop into a story with multiple male protagonists? I've been following it for so long, so let's take a look!

I really like reading about gay men. The story between the male protagonist and Wendy is very good in the early and middle stages, but Wendy's character is a little sloppy in the later part. However, it doesn't matter. If you like reading it, it will get better. This is a gay book.

Wow, it's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Also, can it be a little longer? I was very unsatisfied and heartbroken (´-ωก`) Ah, also, I very much hope that CP is Mandrill~ Can it be done? Can it be done? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] (⑉°з°)-♡(⑉°з°)-♡(⑉°з°)-♡

It's very good, but if you don't want to watch the same thing, don't enter. I personally like the interaction between the protagonist and the characters. This overwhelming feeling drove me crazy in the middle of the night, but if you can't accept it, don't watch it. Don't come in and look at it and point at it, it will affect your reading mood. One more thing, the author really writes well and I support the author. That's it... Update! Can you... Hurry up! ! !

It hit my mark and stopped updating suddenly, but overall the writing is very good, but the emotional line is a bit complicated. I personally hope that Mandrill and the protagonist are together. It is not impossible to have both, but being alone with Wendy will make Mandrill feel even worse. After waiting for thousands of years, Wendy stole her home and forced her to do it.

Hmm~, how can I put it this way, when I saw the Rice Wife chapter, I thought it was a male pornographic harem affair, mainly because it had too much of a male pornographic flavor. I originally went for the two male protagonists, and I thought I had read the wrong label. Then I jumped to the two chapters of Mond and Liyue and found that it turned out to be a pure dual male protagonist style. The author's style is diverse.

I really love the author to death, the writing is super great, I love you, okay?

Wow, what a great book, the author will update it soon [cry][cry][cry]

It's very beautiful, the cp with Mandrill is really good, and the cp with Wendy is also very good, so I don't know which one I should like. Ah!

It's super good-looking, Wendy and Wang Chuhong really enjoyed it!

Wendy's parts are super sweet, they're so exciting, like a roller coaster

The details are superbly grasped, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and it is full of things I like to watch ~ every plot just caught my heart! The emotions are handled very well, and everyone has flesh and blood! But did the author forget that he wrote a book? ! Please, update quickly! ! !

I really like this book! It's really good looking, but I don't know when it will be updated, so just keep it for now [send heart] [love] I haven't seen an update for a long time [crying] Author! Where are you?