Superpower *********

The idea is pretty good, the writing is okay, the plot is average, and the pace is average. Let's focus on the boss. I originally wanted to complain about why the protagonist was so obediently "trapped", but judging from the author's reply in the comment area, it seems that there is a foreshadowing. There may be explanations later, such as taking good care of the protagonist, providing help in times of need, or some kind of reversal. But the key is there is no foreshadowing. For readers, the emphasis is on a sense of immersion. A character who deceives the protagonist in the first appearance is difficult to like, and it is even harder for readers who have a sense of immersion to accept it. Even because there is no foreshadowing, it is difficult to even have a "sense of expectation" for a reversal. The first impression is very important. What you write is very discouraging and can only make very patient readers stay (this is because your writing style is not bad). One suggestion is to add a conversation with the boss (either by phone or in person) to the scene where the protagonist is delivering food. Through the dialogue, establish the general image of the "boss" character and the relationship with the protagonist (closeness or distance, for example, various gags can reflect their close relationship). If you are confident in your writing, you can also modify the plot of the plot that "cheats the protagonist" without adding any previous dialogue, and try to see if you can make the character who "cheats the protagonist" more interesting and charming (the protagonists of many classic works have an old and crooked character who loves to cheat the protagonist but also gives the protagonist a lot of help. These characters are not very annoying, which is a reflection of the author's writing skills)

It's nice to watch and quite funny, but it's just missing a bit! Update quickly!

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The book is okay, but there are so few people?

The book is very interesting, and I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot, but I was forced to quit at 40, so four stars is the limit. Now I want to ask, is there a group? I can't accept it without Chapter 40! It's very uncomfortable to have a section cut off in the middle. Is there any inside? ! [Cry][cry][cry]

How to say it? There was nothing about this book that appealed to me. But there are not too many poisonous points. Well, the name of the book is Awakening of Superpowers, Heaven Conquers All Humanity. But the focus is not on abilities. And I didn't understand it a little bit.

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Very good Although logical thinking is a bit like that But overall it's still good

Why doesn't anyone read such a good book? Author, you must not be a eunuch!

I feel like this book should be popular [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

Who lowered the score? It's so beautiful, but it's just a little bit lacking.

I don't know why the rating is so low. I think it's very interesting anyway and it has always been on my 9.9 Bookshelf, but! Why is the update discontinued? Author! ! ! ! I hope I can continue writing. There are really not many books that I can pursue! ? ! [Almost crying]

The author is so talented in writing, why are there so few people?

This deserves a 5-star rating

The author must not be a eunuch. He has just solved the book shortage problem.

I've just been busy reading books and watching memes, so here's my belated five stars [laughter]

The author LOL has a lot of fun The author has too many elements

It's very interesting, but if the author can maintain the status quo of the novel and not jump, that would be great. The author has laid too many foreshadowings.

Well written, not too toxic

The plot is funny. Logical and rigorous.

It's a very good book, but not many people have read it or commented on it.

Why haven't you told the boss yet?

Such a beautiful book, why does it only have one point?

If you write well, you should write more slowly. 200,000 Words a day is not too much [shy]

I feel that the skill that restrains the enemy has little presence. It's not easy to write this book and it hasn't collapsed yet. The plot is NB and the setting is NB and the writing is NB.

Since I haven't seen much, I won't comment yet. At the beginning, the protagonist saved the woman? Didn't the woman save the protagonist? The writing is so poor, I gave it two stars to three stars because I didn't read much. I wanted to add humor but the author couldn't write it, so it was very blunt and funny. Mainly for language description, the description of facial expressions is quite poor. The description of details is a bit poor, but the plot is okay.