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The original bad guy Li Xingyun in the painting world was an out-and-out Adou. He couldn't help him. Yuan Tiangang couldn't help Li Xingyun in 300 years.

It's okay. Although there are flaws, it's good. There's no act of giving away girls. Lu Linxuan should have been Li Xingyun. The act of giving away girls in anime is disgusting.

I hope you can have the feeling of Ruo Sen and write more fully about other people. The most typical ones are Zhu Youzhen and Zhu Youwen, which you did not handle well. You wrote very well but lacked some feeling. But with your five-star praise for your writing, I hope you can write about human feelings. People are all contradictory. There are no perfect people and no completely beastly people. You didn't write about Zhu Youzhen's young child, and you didn't write about Zhu Youwen's martial arts and madness, but you didn't write out the feeling. You turned them into villains, and the characters were not very full. Painting Jianghu is very full, including the commander's loyalty, Zhu Yougui's madness, Zhu Youwen's insanity, Zhu Youzhen's love, Zhu Wen's coma, Shui Yunji's difficulty, Li Xingyun's leisure, and Zhang Zifan's hatred.

To be honest, this book is okay. It has no bad points. It basically makes up for the regrets in the original work. The most important thing is that I have also collected my favorite empress. However, this book is indeed a bit boring, so I stopped reading it later. There is nothing particularly attractive. You can still read it when you are short of books.

The plots are linked to each other, there are no loopholes, the ups and downs of the plot are perfect, the only shortcoming is that the update is too slow, the bad guys are almost finished, and it won't be that long [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

So far it's pretty good. Readers, be careful not to comment while watching. What the hell are you talking about that is cliché and sloppy? I'm a childhood sweetheart. I didn't think about it before. It's natural for someone to lead the relationship between a man and a woman. Why does it have to be pulled back and forth like a romantic drama? Children of the world, like it or dislike it, it's that quick. Besides, online novels are all pretty much the same. If you read them too much, they will naturally become the same. Do you find them clichéd? Go read the novels of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign literature writers. Isn't Diary of a Madman delicious?

The author of the fierce general, where has my fierce general gone?

The story is super exciting, let's see how Li Xingyun defies the will of heaven and makes the Tang Dynasty reappear and become the most prosperous Tang Dynasty. Come on, author, the update is not finished yet, please continue to update, I will be here soon, please look forward to it! ! ! ! !

Small star position, medium star position, big star position, Small heaven position, middle heaven position, big heaven position, Little Hunyuan position, Middle Hunyuan position, Great Hunyuan position I don't know what it is, it's not available online.

I just want to ask a question. Since time travel, you should know about the existence of fake Li Xingyun, why didn't you mention it?

Come on, good writing I am really convinced that Ji Ruxue is not the heroine.

I think it should be small star position, medium star position, big star position, Small heaven position, middle heaven position, big heaven position, Xuanxiao position, Qingxiao position, Shenxiao position

Very good. This ending is much better than the TV series. People with imaginative personalities will love watching this show.

When will the general summoning card be used?

It's very interesting. I hope to write more novels about bad people [Like][Like][Like] I strongly support [like][like][like]

To be honest, this is the best fanfic about bad guys in Tomato. Although there is a slight flaw in it, the part where surrender is a minor issue. It must be because the sixth season has just been released and the book ended very early, but it does not affect the quality of the book at all.

There were a lot of bad points in the early stage, but it got better and better in the future. Generally speaking, it is a good book, but the hanging is too good. In the later stage, because it was written too early, I did not watch the sixth season of Bad People, which resulted in a slightly less engaging feeling, but the concept is still very good.

Not bad, but shouldn't an emperor rule the world? I feel like Li Xingyun is a little timid.

Guys, get the ratings up quickly

Ying Gou must be the creator of Jiuyou Xuantian Kung. After all, he has cultivated two personalities. The general probably just wanted to improve the technique and gave the technique he fooled to the two ghosts. Otherwise, who would want to pass on the technique he cultivated to outsiders?

I finally understand why the author made it private. In fact, the author should listen more to everyone's opinions and read more of the original work. Only by combining the two can he write a good work. I gave it five stars because I like bad people, and it is one of the few works written by bad people.

The book is great, I support it

There are very few fan fictions about bad guys, this one is good

Why is this book rated so low?

The author listened to me and accepted the empress😭😭

I think it's still okay. After all, I can't make a conclusion until the end. I'll give it 5 stars🌟

Let me give you some details [laughs crookedly] Your plot is a bit fast. Slow down and work on the details. , [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly]

The writing style has a lot of room for improvement, the details of the plot also have a lot of room for improvement, and the ratings also have a lot of room for improvement. In short, come on, author, you still have a lot of room for improvement. There are fewer and fewer books to read now. I hope there will be more powerful authors.

Not bad, not bad. Much better than Li Xingyun in the anime.

I still like it very much, at least it meets my requirements. Why can't the rating go up?