Quick Transmigration: Here I Come, Darkened Big Shot

I have only read the first and second planes, and I can only say that the writing style needs to be strengthened, the tasks are not fully developed, and there are no details that should be there. They are all written in one stroke, and there is no sense of substitution. Some things that could be written in detail are not written, and the development is too fast. I will give lemonade in the second plane (should be Yes) I understand, and I understand asking for contact information, but it's only been a few days, and we've been friends with each other directly, and then he said that he wanted to go to his house to visit, and said that he didn't regard her as his future wife. What the hell? Is this wrong? They really only knew each other for a few days [Petrochemical]. The storyline is okay, but there are areas that need to be strengthened.

I like this kind of speed

The emotional line is not well written, there is no ambiguous heartbeat process, and there is no inner drama 😂 so it feels a little lacking, especially in the first world, they got together out of nowhere without any confession or anything.

Looks good!!!!! Although I can't say what's good about it, I just feel sweet and happy watching it, and it looks good!

A cookie that you can safely eat, the length is appropriate, and the rhythm of the emotional line is a bit fast but acceptable (except that the second world is too fast). But I don't understand why my son insists on clearing the heroine's memory through the system. The heroine didn't have any memory for the rest of the book🥺 The writing style is relatively straightforward, and the plot and setting are okay.

The 4th World Interlude 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 I think this novel is quite interesting, but if I want to interject it, I can only say that we are not destined. Oh my god, I am so heartbroken. It is not easy to find a novel that suits my taste. It also has my lightning points. Oh my god, sisters, please avoid the lightning on your own. I will withdraw the article first.

Don't like bad reviews! Checking in is a bit stiff! Some of the stories in Small World are a bit long-winded! Some worlds only have a guide but no follow-up, which is a bit sloppy! Overall, it's pretty good, so I'll give it a 4-star rating! The differences in opinions above only mean that if you don't like it, please don't comment! The evaluation scores are written in the evaluation for reference only. It's not easy for the author to write a book. Come on!

Come on, come on, come on^0^~ The writing style needs to be improved, but the story is great. There are no misunderstandings, love rivals, difficulties, and surprises.

I read some of the aspects I was interested in and the writing was quite good. The heroine really couldn't bear it. If the hero said to use it, he would use it. After all, the shop belonged to the hero. What kind of redemption did the hero's people have to redeem for the heroine to save for 5,000 taels? The heroine sold her land to buy a shop to get the money. Isn't this abuse of a woman? It's so painful to watch

Yan Jie Dan is really a bit incapable of accepting it. It was quite good-looking.