Super Beast Arms: Make a Choice and Become Stronger

A new book is released. I hope everyone will continue to support it. If you like "The Adventures of Lolo", you can check out my two completed old works.

Although I haven't read Super Beast Arms, I think this book is very interesting! [Smile]

Counting this book, I am a veteran of the Four Dynasties Author, since your book is coming to an end, would it be a good idea to write about Peking Opera Cats?

From the first book to now, it's just too short

Come on, don't play games if you have nothing to do. Staying up late is not good for your health. Wouldn't it be nice to code the time code? [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Okay, because it's too early to give stars I can say it's okay. Why give 5 stars? Because I understand the author's literary talent. He is also a veteran of the Four Dynasties. First of all, I give it 5 stars. I personally think the technique is good. Give five stars support and increase your points. Secondly, these are the pictures I wrote. Not bad. It didn't give me the feeling of exhaustion. At first I thought you, the author, were dying. I understand, there are too many people following the trend. Spread the traffic. Not much about super beasts. Plus your literary talent will certainly do the trick. Come on!

The subject matter of the new book is good, grasp it well, write well, don't let people down [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Good guy! ! This author is much better than other Tomato authors! [Laughing evilly] While others only finish one book in about a year, this author has already completed four! [Stare] Use numbers to suppress others! Much faster than other Tomato authors! ! As long as the author maintains this pace! Given time, Tomato will definitely be conquered by the author's book strategy! ! ! I would like to call him the fastest tomato shooter! [Sinister smile]

Pay more attention to your health. As long as you don't die, please give me the code as soon as possible.

Once upon a time there was a cauldron, called Next Time Cauldron, and inside the cauldron there was a ladle, called White Ladle. We wanted to use it to capture a creature called the author. Just like this, we slowly approached, then took out the reward and waved it at the author, and the author would rush towards you. Then we released the next cauldron with quick eyesight and hands, so that the author could only look at the white ladle inside angrily. No more. . .

I followed the author's first two books. I saw the author has published a new book and came here to support it with five stars. Chapter 14 and 15 are forced to add scenes. Sorry, I just can't see the protagonist being wronged.

4 Stars because the update is a bit slow! In terms of quality, I hope the author can improve it. Also, even though the protagonist knows the story of Super Beast, it still goes too smoothly in some places. The butterfly effect needs to be handled well, and it cannot completely follow the original Super Beast storyline. In addition, the protagonist's selection system can also have other attributes such as physical fitness or some selective tasks, which can increase the potential of the novel. After that, if you write smoothly, you can consider starting with Slim Jun's special ability to travel to other worlds. Also, you can write about the protagonist's will and thinking, which can reflect the protagonist's gradual growth and other senses. If you want to do this, you can consider that each author has his or her own preferred method. This is purely a suggestion. Um. . . There is also more work to do when dealing with emotions and characters. After all, animations cannot do too many delicate things. We can start with novels. It is up to the author to worry about how to master this point. I don't have any other suggestions, keep it up! [Ask for more updates][Working on draft] It's right to stop writing when you realize it's broken, but not filling in the gaps is the big problem! The fundamental problem with giving it three stars now that I originally gave it four stars is that if you have problems with your writing, you should not use the original author to write it. Also, if it collapses, it is better to finish writing and deal with it. The chapters to be completed are too casual. If you want to be a qualified author, you must improve the quality. Emotions need to be written well, especially if you are writing super beast fan fiction, most of the original characters with special colors need to be written vividly. It's right that the story should focus on the protagonist, but the supporting characters should be given some room to shine. If you don't care about quality, don't write it. This is a waste of time. If you continue the second book based on this protagonist, you will still collapse because you have not filled in the holes. Think about how to start a new Super Beast fanfic!

Good book. If you really look at it, the protagonist's special energy is still lacking. He will be very passive when encountering a really strong enemy. I hope the author can get a gift package to enhance it.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update. Because, I believe I can see it in my lifetime ending. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up More, no water, nothing is a problem, you and I will read faithfully Readers, please wait together. I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and Seriously, to put it bluntly, if you were included in the article, you would You are a senior performer, and I am the audience watching the video. The performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han I am in the same state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", watch more Episode, just one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. It's contradictory and... The mixed emotions drive me crazy. I'm just a bored idler, casually clicking on this short article Said, I didn't have the mood to finish reading him, but you succeeded, I almost finished reading it. Now, only feelings can make a thousand things! Only Yes, leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my heart at this moment. I hope you can see it by chance. Come on, do it I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours.

What can I say? The descriptions and some details are very vivid. I am a veteran, but I made a low-level mistake, and then finished it relatively early, but it is still very worth reading. The author should get rid of those low-level mistakes in the next book. It should be very immersive and fresh, and it is stable as a veteran. At least it ranks among the top three books about super beast weapons that I have read. It is the best super beast weapon in this software.

I think it's pretty good-looking! Why is the rating so low? At first I was almost put off by seeing such a low rating, but when I saw the cover I was a little curious and after reading the introduction carefully I became interested and read on.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist could be given a power lock

Hey, when can I achieve such results? Envy makes me feel separated [face covering]

That one is from the previous book, can you do some extra chapters?

It seems that I don't understand all four books~

Not bad, why is the rating so low?

I'm a long-time fan, so I won't say too much, but the author, please do your best.

Support, I finally read the book about Super Beast Arms. The key is that there is no female protagonist now.

Once upon a time there was a cauldron, called Next Time Cauldron, and inside the cauldron there was a ladle, called White Ladle. We wanted to use it to catch a creature called the author. Just like this, we slowly approached, then took out the reward, and waved it at the author, and the author would rush towards you. Then we released the next cauldron with quick eyesight and hands, so that the author could only look at the white ladle inside angrily. Strong fantasy craze All comments day

I have read all the previous 3 movies, but one of them has been removed from the shelves [cover face][cover face][cover face]

🌸I didn't want to use my brain, so I just finished it in a flash, so I don't know if it's reasonable or not. I just watched the main plot, and I still think it's OK. The protagonist achieves peace in the seven parallel universes with the help of the system. 🌸I think the author made the right choice to end it in time, because it was originally adapted from the background of Super Beast Arms, and if it is expanded later, it would be "off topic."

A very good book ^ω^ Although it is a bit short and weak, it is completed in a timely manner, because the combat power in the middle part has collapsed. If I continue writing it, the book will probably be useless, so it is completed in a timely manner. The author writes very well, and I will continue to pay attention to it.

So handsome, brother, you are God, you are my rose, you light up my dark life and make my world meaningful. I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. You make me realize that God does exist. I am so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world is no longer short of water, so follow me.

The book is relatively short and can generally be read in Tomato. It can be seen that the author wants to express a grand world view, but his writing skills are slightly lacking. A lot of the descriptions are point-to-point, a bit like reading a complete outline. If you write it in detail, it should be very exciting.

The content is okay, and I hope it will eventually be able to take the parallel universe Earth as the development point and extend to the interstellar space.