In the Twin Cities, I Somehow Reborn as Jayce

Let's shout harem, harem, harem, harem together

First of all, because I personally don't play League of Legends, nor have I watched League of Legends videos. Anime and the like. Watching this mainly out of curiosity. I have seen about eighty of them so far. Just looking at the plot alone is okay. But I feel that the protagonist's strength is a bit low. Hope it can be strengthened. Sit back and pay attention. There are many typos here. Or there is one more word here and one less word there. Some of the sentences are not fluent. Change the position. If you don't look carefully, it's just a general idea. If you take a rough look, it's okay. If you look closely, it will look strange. I mentioned the errors I found in comments, and I hope the author can correct them. Of course, it's okay if he doesn't. I heard that if you make a mistake and look back, the author will be deducted money, so I won't use it. When I get home, I find an error and post it in the comments. Although I don't know why this book is so less popular. There are few comments. I hope the author can pay attention to typos and unclear sentences. This might make the novel better. Because I personally like having a harem. He doesn't like the kind of mindless driving. Finally, I hope the author can persevere and update.

The writing is good, and the changes in the plot are fun to watch. I just like the harem [laughing]

It's beautiful, interesting, and comfortable to read. Of course, the most important thing is to increase the size of the harem. It is recommended not to stop updating or finish [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][please update]

As a fan league book, I feel that it is very advanced. It looks very comfortable and deserves five stars. The only shortcoming at the moment is that Mel is pregnant a little early, and the relationship is a bit awkward. After all, Mel is a latecomer. I feel that the characters in the book are quite restored. It looks explosive. Wei is doing well and healed. In the later stage, Shu Rui Mar, Noxus, Demacia, Shadow Isles, Freljord, Void, Protoss, Darkin, Bilgewater, I hope the author can describe half of it, the requirements are not high, you can have a harem, after all, there are many heroines, so you can just accept it, end the journey with at least 100 chapters in one place, come on, I am optimistic about you

The theme is very good. It focuses on the twin cities and technological construction instead of quickly adding a lot of other messy elements. It may also be because the author hasn't written it yet. . Although it is very white and the characters are very flat, it is also easy to read. By the way, Mingming Wei is more handsome! It's a pity that there are too few stories about Wei as the heroine.

I have read more than forty chapters. The overall plot is good, there are no major poisonous points, and the behavioral logic can stand up to scrutiny. It's just that the style of writing or the writing skills are too damn uncomfortable. It uses too much, and then what, some meaningless action descriptions, like entering a door, pushing the door open, etc., It has to be broken into and then pushing the door open. For me, it affects the perception a lot, but everything else is fine 🤦

If the system wants to absorb energy, you can exchange it for an Ark Reactor. Isn't this thing better than some magic crystal? After all, the reactor can be continuously used (as long as the raw materials are available). Later, it can be directly exchanged for an anti-matter reactor and taken off directly. After all, the raw materials for anti-matter reactors are everywhere 😎

I want to see how long it took me to read this book. But I have to say it's really beautiful. Not perfect though. But we can't force it. After all, there are only a few books on the alliance. This is one of the best books of its kind.

This is my first time seeing a fan of Battle of Two Cities, good luck.