I Was Reborn as Jace in Two Cities

Let's shout harem, harem, harem, harem together

First of all, because I personally don't play League of Legends, nor have I watched League of Legends videos. Anime and the like. Watching this mainly out of curiosity. I have seen about eighty of them so far. Just looking at the plot alone is okay. But I feel that the protagonist's strength is a bit low. Hope it can be strengthened. Sit back and pay attention. There are many typos here. Or there is one more word here and one less word there. Some of the sentences are not fluent. Change the position. If you don't look carefully, it's just a general idea. If you take a rough look, it's okay. If you look closely, it will look strange. I mentioned the errors I found in comments, and I hope the author can correct them. Of course, it's okay if he doesn't. I heard that if you make a mistake and look back, the author will be deducted money, so I won't use it. When I get home, I find an error and post it in the comments. Although I don't know why this book is so less popular. There are few comments. I hope the author can pay attention to typos and unclear sentences. This might make the novel better. Because I personally like having a harem. He doesn't like the kind of mindless driving. Finally, I hope the author can persevere and update.

The writing is good, and the changes in the plot are fun to watch. I just like the harem [laughing]

As a fan league book, I feel that it is very advanced. It looks very comfortable and deserves five stars. The only shortcoming at the moment is that Mel is pregnant a little early, and the relationship is a bit awkward. After all, Mel is a latecomer. I feel that the characters in the book are quite restored. It looks explosive. Wei is doing well and healed. In the later stage, Shu Rui Mar, Noxus, Demacia, Shadow Isles, Freljord, Void, Protoss, Darkin, Bilgewater, I hope the author can describe half of it, the requirements are not high, you can have a harem, after all, there are many heroines, so you can just accept it, end the journey with at least 100 chapters in one place, come on, I am optimistic about you

It's beautiful, interesting, and comfortable to read. Of course, the most important thing is to increase the size of the harem. It is recommended not to stop updating or finish [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][please update]

The theme is very good. It focuses on the twin cities and technological construction instead of quickly adding a lot of other messy elements. It may also be because the author hasn't written it yet. . Although it is very white and the characters are very flat, it is also easy to read. By the way, Mingming Wei is more handsome! It's a pity that there are too few stories about Wei as the heroine.

If the system wants to absorb energy, you can exchange it for an Ark Reactor. Isn't this thing better than some magic crystal? After all, the reactor can be continuously used (as long as the raw materials are available). Later, it can be directly exchanged for an anti-matter reactor and taken off directly. After all, the raw materials for anti-matter reactors are everywhere [cool]

I have read more than forty chapters. The overall plot is good, there are no major poisonous points, and the behavioral logic can stand up to scrutiny. It's just that the style of writing or the writing skills are too damn uncomfortable. It uses too much, and then what, some meaningless action descriptions, like entering a door, pushing the door open, etc., It has to be broken into and then pushing the door open. For me, it affects the perception a lot, but everything else is fine [face covering]

I want to see how long it took me to read this book. But I have to say it's really beautiful. Not perfect though. But we can't force it. After all, there are only a few books on the alliance. This is one of the best books of its kind.

This is my first time seeing a fan of Battle of Two Cities, good luck.

Well written, the next step is the heroine [you taste it carefully] [eat the melon]

It's quite good-looking, the plot is reasonable, and the characters and personalities are relatively realistic. Some of the more scattered plots have not been left out, such as the interaction between Ryze and Jace when they were children. I found that the order of the plot was a bit wrong. Noxus should have won a great victory first, and then under the influence of heroes such as Sword Girl, Karma, Juggernaut, Zed, etc., Noxus retreated step by step until Presidio completely retreated. If Noxus has been defeated at this time, there will be no time to cause trouble for the protagonist. Swain is still eliminating the factors within Noxus (the black rose), and the yellow chicken seems to be awakened by the snake girl and the wheel mother later.

You're a good young man. I'm optimistic about your future, but you should update it quickly and don't waste your energy by going to Myanmar to cut your waist [laughter]

If you don't poke or prod, it just doesn't look good enough.

After reading the comment section, there are only two that are not five-star. It feels like someone is maliciously lowering the rating. Personally I think it's well written, please give it a thumbs up from the author.

Go read novels, novels that are not defined, novels that make you unable to sleep

Well written, I really want to see Jess and Caitlin

Not bad, very beautiful The story about the Battle of Two Cities was okay and pretty good, but when it comes to other places, I don't want to read it if I'm going to take risks everywhere.

Why do you feel like this Camille has no way out [laughs evilly]

It's okay, but it's a bit short. Please support me.

Stay steady and slowly write about the harem and slowly develop the emotional drama. You can write more, but the focus must be on the main plot. It is best to attract the happy man to make him happy.

I've always wanted to read a good book about alliances Thank you for your efforts and look after you.

It's really beautiful, thank you to the author! 5 Star praise!

The writing is very good, but the introduction of the author in the back is almost complete. Please update it soon.

Why no Ike?

Very good fan book

Personally I feel pretty good ^_^♪

Not bad, good looking.

Alliance background must support

It's so beautiful, cheers for the author.