Swallowed Star: Tears of the Stars

Come on, author, I can't get enough of it.

New book, hope you all like it and support it!

Not enough to watch

So-so. Personally, I feel that after all, the original work is so good. If you write a fan novel, it's best to make it enjoyable, and your character is basically the same as Luo Feng, okay? Luo Feng is a poor man, and so are you. There is a disabled brother in the family, and you have a disabled sister. There is an enemy of the general in the family, and you are the same. There is a telekinesis ball in your head, and you will burst into tears. This is basically another Luo Feng, okay? I'm really speechless, it's so ordinary.

It feels similar to Swallowed. Even the growth path and family background are similar. I hope I won't fall into the same trap as other Swallowed fans. Swallowed is the first classic masterpiece I have read.

Big boost, the author, working hard to update, I'm all waiting for it [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

The plot is almost the same as the original work, there are no changes... The protagonist's skills and props are exactly the same... The names are different, the brother becomes a sister... The same disability... Except for the tears of stars... I also offended people, went out to hunt monsters and was tricked... It would be better for the author to make more changes! Come on!

Come on, author!

Come on, author, it's not enough.

Not bad, good-looking