Explaining Elves to the Campus Belle, Only to Create a New Myth

It's very well written. I give it a five-star rating. Now I'm going to criticize you. Why are you so slow to update?

The real book looks okay, but it has a lot of loopholes. Errors in the protagonist's spoken language during the live broadcast. The introduction is not processed at all. Compared with the green caterpillar and the iron-shelled kun, "... They fool the novices..." How could it be explained if the author didn't force the audience to ignore it and not force the root to be dug up. What are they? People from this world or people from another world? How did you know? When dividing the levels of elves, your division should not appear more than ten chapters in. It is too early to use numerical levels to divide them in this time period. Live more live broadcasts, for example, after a month, start to compare some live elves of the same type, and then use a broad classification of newcomers, ordinary, and elites. Then when the book has written one or two hundred chapters, the protagonist can say that I have been studying for a long time, and then specifically classify 1_10 as novices. Then there is the annoying thing about live-streaming novels, which is that there are only one or two women who go back and forth describing their appearance and status. This is still very bad. By the way, elf novels that only write about elves are really better than elf novels with female protagonists. After all, I have been involved in Qidian for so many years, and I have read hundreds of elf novels. Final summary: Come on, author, the book still has potential. More attention needs to be paid to some details such as the spoken language in the live broadcast and the relationship between the male and female protagonists and supporting characters. Chased! Treating guests to dinner, watching the school beauty and Zhuge Qing from beginning to end, the more I watched, the more I wanted to vomit. Author, I would like to ask, what do you think about the plot of treating guests to a meal in a restaurant? Just to show off the big-mouthed bird costume at the end? I really don't want to say more about this plot. [I haven't watched the plot after riding on the big mouth bird. I don't know if it's to elicit the school beauty's confession or something.]

The author is actually Qin Shihuang. As long as you update 100 chapters a day. I will make you a general.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Dear readers,

It's a very good fanfic, worth reading. The plot is coherent. You never know what the author will write next. But the only disadvantage is that there are too many afterwords. But for me, these can be ignored. If I can't make up for it in the future, I will give you a one-star review.

When will the three gods of Hoenn be released? They will be real dragons, and Gyarados will be a fake dragon.

Come on, come on, come on Can the author write more female protagonists? 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 (Multiple heroines, multiple heroines, multiple heroines)

It's very nice to watch, and the progress in recovering the elves is also very fast. All I know is that I feel that the author has written a lot of pitfalls, and I wonder when they will be able to fill them in? (Chi v Chi) Come on, author, keep updating (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

It's very interesting. I like it very much. I wonder if there are any novels similar to this one that you can recommend. I can't get enough of this new book 😢

It doesn't look like it's poked, it's just too short.