[Non-time travel] [Non-system] [Mortal flow] [Classical fairy tale]
Qi training, foundation building, elixir formation, Yuan Ying, spirit transformation...
The protagonist is decisive in killing without being stupid, and the supporting character is not mentally retarded.
The story of a boy from a mountain village who broke into the world of immortality step by step.
Reader comments
Since the golden finger can only enhance understanding but not assist in cultivation, why is the protagonist's spiritual root so poor? Not to mention the first and second levels, he should have at least the third level. After ten months of practicing Qi at the sixth level, he only has a fourth-level spiritual root. Others' fourth-level spiritual roots have not reached the sixth level of Qi training for more than ten years. It doesn't feel reasonable. The rest of the writing seems to be pretty good so far. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
The details are vivid, and the mortal cultivating immortals is very suitable for the taste of old bookworms. The only drawback is that ancient cultivating immortals do not need modern units such as meters.
I like this simple opening, close to reality, and what the world of cultivating immortals should look like. Good luck to the author💪
Since the golden finger can only enhance understanding but not assist in cultivation, why is the protagonist's spiritual root so poor? Not to mention the first and second levels, he should have at least the third level. After ten months of practicing Qi at the sixth level, he only has a fourth-level spiritual root. Others' fourth-level spiritual roots have not reached the sixth level of Qi training for more than ten years. It doesn't feel reasonable. The rest of the writing seems to be pretty good so far. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
The details are vivid, and the mortal cultivating immortals is very suitable for the taste of old bookworms. The only drawback is that ancient cultivating immortals do not need modern units such as meters.
I like this simple opening, close to reality, and what the world of cultivating immortals should look like. Good luck to the author💪
Not bad but too short
I think it's okay, it's very pretty