Super Seminary: the Eternal Way of Immortality

I have briefly read dozens of chapters, and here are my thoughts after reading them: 1. Cultivation is added to the power system, but the writing is very sloppy. The protagonist's improvement in strength is more like that after a few chapters, it is time to upgrade. 2. Added a multi-world setting, but it is not perfect. It is more like writing what comes to mind. Some of the more obvious ones: I said that I came from a chaotic universe, but later I told them that I was lying to them in order to change the setting; I wrote about a beast body that was infected with the fourth level peak, but in the next chapter it is set to be the work of a great master in the world, and his strength has become a fifth level peak; I met Hexi for the first time, and then they became acquaintances before, and almost became a guardian angel. 3. Although the fan characters do not necessarily have the same personality as the original work, the author's writing skills still need to be tempered: whether it is the protagonist, the three kings, or a few little angels, the character description is very vague. In my impression, Kesha's calmness, Hexi's sinisterness, and Liang Bing's charm all have their own characteristics, and the characters in this book are just tools for the narrative background. Finally, I have to say: Come on, this is already a good first book, you are the best [laughs]

A new author is writing a book for the first time, and the handsome guys and beauties take care of her [I learned]

Come on! Well written

Well written and beautiful

Good writing, keep it up (๑> <๑)

Come on. Don't break things up in the later stages. This is the first time I've made such a comment

The subject matter is quite good, but I went to train again and fucked Xiaolun and the others. Then I guessed the plot behind it. First, I would beat Sun Wukong to a pulp, then make him a glutton, and then give a warning to the little spirit god of death. Is that so? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's indeed a good book. It's a pity that the Super Seminary is added. If the system is related, it is also related to the country, not the system of the Zhan Zhan Academy.

Author, I advise you to follow three pictures a day. There will be more people like this Author, you are honest, you only update one chapter a day, but the word count is quite a lot, come on, try to update more

The content is very good. Good luck to the author.

The author is about to accept it, why did he change it?

Okay, I have a few minor issues, so I posted them.

Not bad, come on author

Very well written, keep it up 💪

Come on, there aren't many super-spiritual serials left.

I love the husky smoky eye of Nie Ting Bing, I love Queen Kesha's red and green look, and I love Pippi Xi!

Thank you so much for the author (ง •̀_•́)งIt's very beautiful

Isn't Jiao a girl? Why did she get together with Pippi?

Author, how much money do you have every day? [Laughing evilly] I think 11,000 people are reading it.

Can be very exciting

Come on come on come on come on

Come to Zhang Ruimengmeng

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The author wonders if the emotional drama should be brought forward.

I like it so much, I hope I can keep writing

It looks good, but it's missing! Give it a five-star rating

I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time, especially the Super God series.

This book is well written, just don't be a eunuch!

The author is really a genius

Why did the points drop so quickly?