After Dressing up as Akainu's Daughter, I Ran to Become a Pirate.

Overall it's very good, but what I like better is that the real world of pirates is not as childish as what the author wrote. However, different people have different views on the world of pirates. So the original three-star feeling is four-star. I was convinced in the next few chapters. The first part was okay but the plot in the later part was outrageous when I saw the memory and system of the previous life. Also, I took over the body of the original owner and didn't treat the original owner's relatives as relatives. Overall, this novel is basically useless. Retreat, retreat

I really like Suo Da's www Unknowingly, she substituted herself as the heroine! (Although I am a male)

Except for the initial rebirth, which was a bit awkward, the rest of the writing was so satisfying to me! The speed at which the relationship heats up is well controlled, the emotions are delicate and natural, and the transitions are not abrupt. It's just that it's still being serialized and it's not enough to watch!

The writing is okay. As long as the fighting power does not collapse in the later period and the story is not boring, then this book is basically half successful. If we maintain the current progress, we can achieve a good result by evenly dividing it [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] Actually, another point is, don't make major changes to some of the major excessive plots, such as defeating Caesar, defeating Brother Ming, and going to the Elephant Lord. Just don't make major changes.

This book is so damn good, especially the emotional drama of the heroine. From the beginning she fell in love with Luffy to later falling in love with Zoro, it was so wonderfully written.

Big cheers for the author! ! It's really beautiful!

I finally came across such a nice anime fanfic. I found a lot of them that are not original heroines or are male-to-female ones that are really not good-looking. This author is very good at writing. I will continue to read the author's other books ❤️❤️❤️

This book really makes me love and hate it. What I love is that the emotional line of the heroine is really sweetly written. What I hate is that I have never read One Piece. I always feel that the heroine is a bit indifferent to her father. The main reason is that Akainu is too doting on her daughter.

This book has been published for the second time [crying] I hope the author will publish another book faster [sending my heart] ｡ﾟﾟ･｡･ﾟﾟ｡ ﾟ. ｡ﾟ ﾟ･｡･ﾟ ( ╲ / / ╲ ╲/ / ╲ ╲ / ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ﾉ ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ╱ ╲

I personally think it's pretty good, quite interesting, hahaha, it's really interesting. I've never commented before, so I reviewed it for the first time [Adoration] I read more than 100 chapters in one go without sleeping at night [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I express my deepest gratitude to the author [Admiration] [Top post]

I love watching it, it makes me want to leave it. I like Zoro very much because of the original One Piece anime, but your changes don't make me hate it. I think it's pretty good. I like it quite a lot. Come on, author, I'm both a One Piece fan and a Zoro fan. Now I am also a fan of Mengkaqi

It's so good to read. After looking for a book with Zoro as the main character, I finally found one. Please don't give it up [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This is also a good fan novel, but it felt weird to listen to the Luffy girl's one first and then this one. I suggest the author make the interludes in the novel smoother next time, [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Very good, happy, touching, and sad. Both have authors. Great cheers. This is a very good novel. It is wonderful, happy, touching, and a happy time for friends. Sadness is part of Mengkaqi's bad experience. In short, it's only five stars, otherwise I can add stars directly. It's so wonderful [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

It has fulfilled my fantasy about Zoro, and it has fulfilled my long-standing dream. I am so jealous, but I hope the heroine can be more powerful. Full marks. I like the author Da Da very much. Thank you author Da Da for this book, which adds fun to my boring life. I'm jealous! ! ! It's a great book. It would be great if the heroine could be more powerful and the whole cast could be more powerful [Blow kiss]

Dear author, you are so good-looking, so temperamental, so beautiful, with white teeth, red lips, and frowning makeup, like a water hibiscus. Beautiful as a crown jade, with a flowery face and a moon-like appearance, charming face, bright eyes and white teeth, a thousand charms, charming, charming, with a slender head and eyebrows, like a flower like jade, eyes cut like water, slim and graceful, fairy posture and lost appearance, small family jasper, beautiful appearance and wisdom, young peaches and plums, elegant manners, hands like soft jade , the beautiful moon-shy flower, the hibiscus emerging from the water, the natural beauty of the country, gentle and pleasant, beautiful and touching, noble and cool, the most beautiful woman, the delicate eyebrows, as beautiful as a fairy, ice and snow, smart, gentle and lovely, as beautiful as a fairy, unparalleled elegance, natural beauty, more, more, 4-5 chapters will be enough in just one day.

Wow wow wow, it's really good to read. I finished reading it in one go. The Akainu part was so heartbreaking [I almost cried] [I almost cried] Looking forward to the author's next book [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

It was a little awkward when I first traveled through time, but it became more to my liking after that. The heroine's emotions are very delicate, and it was very funny when they quarreled, but then the author started sending razors, but in the end they reconciled again, with twists and turns, very interesting.

Not bad, not bad, very good. I originally liked Suo Xiang, but when I saw this pair, um... It smells so good, so good. Khaki (Dream Khaki) touched my heart. I really like her temperament. I have to say that the author has created the characters and personality traits very well. Soda is also very affectionate. I feel so much love for Khaki. The characters in One Piece are also well controlled, the details are OK, some are sweet and some are sad, and the plot is OK, just a bit short, but everything else is OK.

I really like this article, it's very sweet. But I think it's Ais, who can't accept that he has a lover and a son. Zoro and Mengkaqi are really sweet. Ah😘, Zoro is really handsome. But Kachi is really cute, I love them both😍😍

This book is quite good among pirates, with long-lasting relationships, but sometimes the protagonists are too impulsive. I wanted to go in and beat them, which made people feel frustrated. However, this impetus is quite real, which may also be a benefit. [Blowing a kiss] If you like pirates, you can take a look, some of them will make you cry.

It's really beautiful, but have you really not thought about adding more updates in July? Two chapters a day are really not enough😭😭🙏🙏🙏Let's add one more chapter every day. Please😍😊

Good-looking, Suo Da is still very gentle.

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This is the best pirate novel I have ever seen. The love is written to the fullest. I will be excited to death during the intimate scenes. And this is a bit cruel, it made me burst into tears. It's really very good and beautiful.

It's very interesting. I didn't think of Zoro as the Flame Dragon King or anything like that. I have to say that you, the author, have a very big imagination. I like watching it, even though it's a little bit cruel. Overall, it's very interesting. I highly recommend it. Uh-huh, it's King Yama. I made a typo. It's a password contest.

I think overall it's pretty good-looking and worth watching. There were both laughs and tears. What surprised me the most was Akainu in this article. As much as the anime makes people hate them so much, this fanfic makes them burst into tears... I never thought that one day I would shed tears for Akainu. I am convinced by the author's knife~

Come on! Author, you are the best [please update], your writing style is pretty good [admiration]

It's very interesting. I hope there will be as many online female protagonist time travel stories as the author does.

I haven't watched One Piece, but I think it's okay, it's pretty good.